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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 3

    Something kept twigging me in the back of my mind...... I held her gaze. "You used me as a shield so no one would challenge you.” My father surged to his feet so fast the chair scraped back. His eyes flashed gold. I looked at him. For the first time in my life I realized it. He was still taller than me. But I could take him Huh...well, imagine that......from Ch 1.... I sighed and pulled the gun from the back of my waistband. A clean shot was better than letting it bleed out in the woods. I raised the gun. The wolf lifted its head. And looked straight at me. The headlights caught its eyes. Gold. Not yellow. Gold.
  2. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    What will Thokk see in the morning?
  3. drsawzall

    Chapter 3

    As @RainbowPhoenixWI pointed out, is Xavier the wolf that was shot, and who is his rescuer, someone not affiliated the pack?
  4. drsawzall

    Chapter 3

    Was this a case of the right decision done the wrong way? Or the wrong decision horribly wrong? If so, the parents are just the same as their son, for they failed to display the same ruthlessness they demanded, regardless of other external factors and circumstances…. The failure to make the decision when Xavier was 12 is damming…And a huge mistake for the future of the pack. So just where will they find the new savior of the pack?? Now that the news is out will the shite hit the fan and the pack weakens? Just what does Xavier owe this pack now? I looked at her for a long moment. "You needed time," I said slowly. "You hadn't found a successor. And an Alpha without a clear line of succession is vulnerable." I held her gaze. "You used me as a shield so no one would challenge you.”
  5. Apophis is quite the backstabbing snake…
  6. drsawzall

    Chapter 19

    I can’t remember the prophecy Ishan had with the witch, but if I remember correctly, is it possible Ishan is the brother who will become the new Emir?
  7. drsawzall

    Chapter 25

    Louis is laying the groundwork for the next series of battles. The key to his success lays in the wavering loyalty of his English allies, and the need of fresh supplies, recruits, and equipment from across the channel. Without these resources his cause is in peril. Time is now of the essence and his spies need flushing out before they discover paths of least resistance. They know not what they truly face in the fens and Wynthrope. Kaylen now an Earl, along with Ser Thomas and Ser Ronan now face enemies not only in front of them, but behind them as well. And from those who haven’t been tested yet, the worst kind of snakes.
  8. From the mouths of children…and kids say the darnedest things… Devon is going to be good for Kent…
  9. drsawzall

    Chapter 4

    Heaven weeps…while greed and lust of riches drive men crazy… He fell silent, tracing idle circles against Gianluca’s wrist, his mind already spiraling toward the shadow of Rome... the plots whispered through the Mercato, the rumors of papal envoys, the way Florence itself seemed to hold its breath before a storm.
  10. drsawzall

    Chapter 19

    One of your best chapters yet, and the following snippet was priceless… And Stephen, the good little monk, the boy who had been raised in a monastery, who had taken vows of silence and obedience, who had never seen anything like this—Stephen lowered his towel. He looked at Val. At Julian. At Lloyd. At Darien and Wylan, sitting together on the bench, their shoulders touching, their hands almost meeting in the water. "Is this what family is?" he asked. Darien looked at him. At the boy who had been a joke, who had become a healer, who was trying to understand a world where monks became squires and knights became lords and men loved each other in bathhouses and women who were legally men washed away the blood of a massacre. "Yes," he said. "This is what family is." Stephen nodded slowly. He set his towel aside, walked to the edge of the pool, and lowered himself into the water hoping that he could cool down a little bit before he went off with a pop.
  11. drsawzall

    Chapter 19

    You mean that out of warranty car repair insurance we see adds for on TV?
  12. drsawzall

    Chapter 19

    My type decades ago….sigh…..
  13. drsawzall

    Chapter 19

  14. drsawzall

    Chapter 26

  15. Love, simply love this genre of stories!!!
  16. drsawzall

    Chapter 7

    Unless he can convince them he wants to be a dealer....
  17. drsawzall

    Chapter 26

    How often does he have to go to the pet groomers...once a week, month???
  18. drsawzall

    Chapter 2

    Now there’s a birthday surprise…
  19. Goran is walking a fine line with his escapades….
  20. drsawzall

    Chapter 7

    And now the difficult undercover work begins, and Sam escapes using the illegal drug…
  21. drsawzall

    Chapter 26

    The red herrings may need shaving cream… No closer to a definitive suspect, what if Kyle is a gang leader and everyone is involved?? Another chapter where no cars were harmed…and when does Chris start?
  22. drsawzall

    Aftershocks

    While not needing the details, the legacy to be distributed in the will must have been substantial to engender the reaction Ken and his mother are getting. There’s a special place in hell for greedy relatives… Marvin is the calm, soothing tonic the doctor ordered…
  23. drsawzall

    Chapter 22

    It is becoming readily apparent that Jamal will be a knight of some importance and honor, a fine selection to carry on the traditions of the order…I love how Septimus is so easily fooled and led astray..this overconfidence will be the ruin of him…
  24. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    This looks very interesting to say the least…after that many shots, I’d be sleeping on the bar floor…
  25. This so needs to be a TV series, it is just such a treat!! PJ and Joss need a story all of their own… As with all these stories, I’m never sure where where they will go and wished they would go on nearly indefinitely…
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