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  1. So…the real detective case to be solved is the status, shape and size of the well equipped Lawrence…oh and finally find the killer(s)…
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    Prologue

    A very interesting start…money, murder, and mysteries, sounds like a great read!
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    Homecoming

    Well, this is an interesting take on the high school drama..
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    Chapter 5

    Well this was an impactful chapter as noted above, finding greater acceptance within the family unit with the exception of Nyrra…The dance with fertility implications and then the scene in the bedroom with Rhaelce which was just as hot as Malik holding fire…
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    Chapter 8

    Here’s a random thought…What if our minor noble is looking to eliminate the competition in the sale and distribution of Gryphon ash?? He knows much about it, how it is made, and imported…Would it not have been easier to check the logs and final destination of the arriving ships/wagons cargo coming from the southeast? The idea of a quality maille shirt will prove to be a wise move…
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    Chapter 27

    Who knew?? Kinda makes me rethink about rainbow trout… Starting with Jacy driving…and take your gun if you feel that strongly along with the pen camera
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    Chapter 23

    The stage is set, the nagging question remains, did Judayah of the Festering Boils survive his meeting with Septimus after running like a whipped dog from the valley?
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    Chapter 23

    Or a Little Duce Coup???
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    The Shape of Rest

    So...trying to fix this 'issue' by himself is working splendidly...ask Pete, thank goodness he showed up...now who in the heck is Niran??? It would seem to me that he can contest, and I believe he will lose... What is Pete's relationship to the family and how does he know all of this??? Marvin and Devon are good for Kent...and pleased to see he's staying...
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    Chapter 8

    One hopes Bartos is in time, and the Dreader eats its host....
  11. An incredable introspective of a life lived, and choices made, leaving one with plenty of food for thought... This is worth the time to read folks!
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  12. A wonderful effort in capturing a life lived, and choices made...the following resonated with me... Oh, that I could relive that exquisite summer, when life wasn’t about decisions and gentle companionship was enough, adulthood being something for others
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    Stanton Drew

    Some lessons are the hardest to learn... Ephemeral fingers brushing quivering skin, speaking to their descendants on a cellular level, hoping they’ll listen before it’s too late.
  14. How far can one be pushed? You said you'd protect me, you didn't You said you'd heal me, you didn't You said you'd never leave, you did
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    Chapter 1

    This spoke volumes to me... I love you not as shelter or escape, but as the place I choose to stand exposed. I do not promise ease. I promise form— a body present when the world feels close.
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    Chapter 1

    You gave a fine voice to what it must have felt like to be a cowboy... I loved the following... He could ride for the wages, ride for the land, Ride for the memory of his father’s hand. Or turn his horse toward a softer life, One without storms, hunger, or strife. But a cowboy’s heart ain’t built for ease— It leans toward wind and open seas Of prairie grass and drifting herds, Where silence speaks louder than any words.
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    Chapter 6

    The undertones are bubbling to the surfaces... Carlo’s tone lowered. “They say Lorenzo meets daily with envoys... except the Pazzi. The Palazzo Pazzi burns candles till dawn. For charity, they claim.” He winked. “Florence breeds many charities.” Matteo forced a polite smile. “Then may their good works multiply.” Once a tomcat... On a stool sat a girl of sixteen, her chemise slipping from one shoulder as an apprentice sketched her leg. She bit her lip, uneasy but holding the pose. Danilo’s eyes lit. “By Saint Anthony! Florence keeps her angels in workshops!” He bowed extravagantly. “Fair madonna, the saints must be jealous.” The girl stifled a giggle. Matteo hissed, “We are here on business.” Danilo grinned. “Then this is the finest business in Florence.” He plucked a ribbon from her sleeve, kissed it solemnly. “A relic already.”
  18. Looking forward to this batch as well!
  19. First They Came, revised With thanks to, Martin Niemoller, Joseph Gobels, Donald Trump, Pete Seeger, Matthew 20:40-45 All quotations were taken from the public domain. First they came for the socialists, and I did not speak out because I was not a socialist. A lie once told remains a lie, but a lie told a thousand times becomes the truth.(JG) “They let — I think the real number is 15, 16 million people into our country. When they do that, we got a lot of work to do. They
  20. They say that those who don't remember the past are condemned to repeat it. With that in mind, what would lead Martin Niemoller to write a version for today?
  21. The seeds of unmitigated hatred have born the tragic ending. Sad that it came to this, a life wasted for no good purpose.
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    Chapter 11

    Well now... we've just gone from a cliffhanger to a can't hardly wait for the next chapter hanger...
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    Chapter 11

    This was a bittersweet chapter; five weeks can be a lifetime or go by in the blink of an eye...we are still waiting to find out what made up the contents in the green bottle, we know the liquid had a healing component...might this be an antidote to the deadlind on 6 August???
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    Chapter 5

    Then there's this, a factoid I remembered when you posted this, I wonder, if, as speculated, the woman was the wife or girlfriend of one of the sailors...and inquiring minds want to know if there was any hanky-panky going on below decks... DNA: Woman was on famed 17th century Swedish warship | AP News Now, back to the main event in Florence...🤔
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    Chapter 5

    Plans within plans, plots within plots...gonna need a scorecard to see who's on first!!! “On principle,” Matteo said. “Ragusa stands as we do... governed by its citizens, not by princes or priests. Its ships defy both Venice and Rome, sailing free. To support them is to affirm what Florence once swore before God: that we will never bow to tyranny, whether it wears a mitre or a crown.” He paused before jumping ahead. "If Ragusa’s ships flew Florentine banners, our trade would pierce Venice’s monopoly, and Rome would see our republic prosper without papal sanction." And cats will do what cats do... Behind them, two broad-shouldered retainers walked at a distance, watchful but indulgent of their masters’ laughter. Danilo was off doing whatever a cat does when he is free to be a cat.
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