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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 5

    Sometimes the most important lessons to learn are the hardest...Trust but verify....
  2. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Thanks for giving this a chance and a second try!
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    Chapter 5

    I'm gonna be in an opposing camp till some "things" become clearer... I felt awkward now." I'm sure there are other guys you can ask." "Nah. Honestly, there aren't." Get a lawyer, review the will, and set a prenup ASAP... This is too sudden, too fast, and it seems to be rushed... I have no issue or problem with Lonnie moving on with his life, and he deserves love again...All I can say is... Get a lawyer, review the will, and set a prenup ASAP...
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    Chapter 14

    Still too early to sort thru all the red herrings…I suspect the body they have uncovered may disclose important information to Killian. Had a Rolodex on my desk, next to my computer for 30 years…wasn’t gonna take the time to add to my Outlook program…
  5. Stefani’s one repressed young man!
  6. Quite the quirky chapter, and what a mishmash concerning the Nimrod Panther and all those involved!
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    Royal Feast

    The enemy of my enemy is not my friend…
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    Crossroads

    Let those without sin cast the first stone… Stephen gripped the doorknob like it was the only thing keeping him upright. His voice was raw when he finally spoke. “I will not bend. I will not be weak.” “Then pray,” the pastor said. “Not for righteousness. But for humility.” Stephen left without another word. Steven I wonder must be a short man, not necessarily in height, but everything else… And I find myself yelling at my computer once again…something has to give. Not sure my computer can take another series of chapters like these…😉
  9. I have to suspect that somehow Karsa’s mother might make an appearance…. Sneath’s eyes sharpened to slits, as bright and sharp as dagger points as he slapped the strongbox shut. “Your testimony is flawed, John Longsword. You say you spent weeks within the Gloamwood when your deployment to it was mere days ago. And this ‘Karsa’. You say you were sheltered by this half-caste elf when any remotely competent protector of their people would have executed you on the spot. And now this? You stumble back to us bearing a treasure token of these hateful vermin? What am I to think?”
  10. Having read and commented on this story, I encourage anyone to read this marvelous story!!
  11. Never on April 1st....just sayin.....Now April 15th is an entirely different manner....
  12. From the mouths of”innocent” babes and unlocked bedroom doors…
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    "Adrift"

    Not gonna gush or gild the Lilly, this was your best chapter in this story…well done and thank you.
  14. My family tree is proudly Heinz 57 variety… Did a boiled corned beef along with a baked corned beef with a Dijon mustard, brown sugar glaze. Mmmm!
  15. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Thanks, it was an attempt to try something new and different!
  16. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Thanks Gandalf, your thoughts are deeply appreciated!
  17. Now Benjamin, there’s a surprise! Does mom know or will there be fireworks?
  18. drsawzall

    Part III: Joint Ops

    Your best chapter yet! Simply well done and right on point! I had to read the scene in The Nail twice! And you just knew Mack was the leader in the shenanigans! FROM: OPS SCHEDULING SUBJ: MANDATORY TRAINING 2000. Alpha Squadron Team Drill. POC SFC Mack The Army/Navy banter was priceless!
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    The Cure

    Do you think the message will be received?? Nearly a dozen people crowded this vestibule, and he had to squeeze his way through them all. Words tumbled through his mind, entreaties, platitudes…. He stopped before the altar. Took a deep breath. “Hey Pharasma… stay the fuck away from me.
  20. I concur…and why do I feel young Tyler is a chip off the old block…
  21. drsawzall

    Chapter 4

    Let’s find out the story before jumping to conclusions…
  22. Humm…what could be the reason? Tatiana nodded. “Khonsu sealed all portals to that dimension for everyone’s safety. The beasts that reside there, Arbilias, are usually wise. But something has agitated them.”
  23. drsawzall

    Chapter 10

    Our soon-to-be visitors haven't a clue about the hell that will land on them...
  24. drsawzall

    Chapter 26

  25. So good, Paul isn't being pressured as he thinks this new environment out, coming to terms with it will be one heck of an adjustment!!
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