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drsawzall

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  1. All I can say is wow in amazement... I can choose to fly a rainbow flag and wear my purple unicorn tie, or simply plant my yard in colorful flowers, but attraction is etched in my genes, so you get no choice in who I love.
  2. drsawzall

    Chapter 1 S2

    And a new adventure begins, one can only hope that the school year has no 'hiccups'...And Devin, get rid of those 'pesky' A-'s....
  3. While the A-Holes are bombing the crap out of the universe, I suspect they left the back door open to their headquarters...time to send an explosive message up their backsides...
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    Chapter 11

    Well...living on a farm and the back 40 is due to be plowed under soon...
  5. It all keeps pointing back to the Giblox Authority...time to give them a taste of their own medicine...well past time!!
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    Scotland

    Enjoyed this visit to Scotland and the reunion very much and as we see time marches on!! Thank you for this and the best of the New Year to you and yours!!
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    Noah

    This chapter was a highlight in so many ways, but best of all it shows that good old common sense leads to positive outcomes. The following is so spot on!! “You OK, Noah?” “Yes, it’s just. What you said to Toby.” “About the wet-wipes and condoms?” Noah blushed, “Yes. You think that Toby and I are going to…” “I’d assumed so. I knew Toby wanted to. You OK?” “Yes. Thanks. And yes”, he gulped, “I enjoy doing stuff with Toby”, he gave a shy grin, “He’s the first boy I’ve liked that I could do stuff with. You really don’t mind?” “Mind! Hell no, as long as you two are happy.” Noah nodded, “It’s just my Grandmother has strong views.” “Yeah, so your Mum mentioned. Good job that your Mum and Dad feel the same way as Gordon and me, so no sweat there.” Brian continued with his preparations for tomorrow, but he didn’t miss Noah’s eyes widen. The boy mumbled his thanks again and disappeared.
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    Chapter 11

    I loved this chapter and glad to se both boys recovered as best expected... I have to believe Brian's father will have a suggestion planted that he will find Bum-Fuck Arkansas a nice place to live and want to adopt stray kittens and keep 'em in the humane shelter he will build...
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    Chapter 10

    Hats of to you dear author....I have to remain in the camp that both will survive, and I would not be surprised if the leg is saved, if they had to reopen the leg for Jake to let go of the arteries, it may be a sign that the vampiric healing abilities might/will work on healing the leg...fingers crossed. This chapter was well written, paced and descripted throughout, it was as if we were there!!!
  10. Thanks, Chris, for a great story!
  11. One can only hope Mike and the Alphas are in this pic...
  12. The true definition of cockblocked... Priestess glared at Golvinte. “I wish Lyoth were here,” Phentrom added, more to himself than the others. “That’s the reason they’re after you,” Golvinte interjected. “They want to experiment on you.” “You were bringing someone in for human experimentation?!” Priestess growled. “Babe, he’s not a human.” Priestess gasped. “You’re barely a human sometimes! I’ve only known Phentrom for a matter of hours, but he’s more of a man than most men I’ve met. You will not be collecting this bounty.” “Yes, schmoodle,” Golvinte replied in a dejected tone. “In fact,” Priestess added, “you’re going to help Phentrom.”
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    Chapter Two: Scent

    I like the unique twist you've given Grey, it is adding a new wrinkle that give him more depth... “Thanks, man. I appreciate it.” He just smiled at me and left, leaving a trail of air—sun—spring behind him. I was also staring at his ass, but too mesmerized by my overloaded senses to will myself to look away. When he was gone, I looked to the left towards the scent of a smirk. A smirk is like mischievous vanilla. Sweet, but giggly so. It came from an older woman at the other end of the room. She probably caught me staring. Her face was saying as much. Oh, well. I also smelled arousal on her. Good for her. I hope that was not directed at me, though. Maybe she’s Edna with the heart attack. Mischievous vanilla heart attack Edna.
  14. An not so auspicious start for Grey to say the least, begging several questions; why did he feel the need to leave the pack, will the pack come looking for him, was his sexual inclinations part of the reason,? I feel the a-holes who have been terrorizing the bar may be in store for learning some manners...
  15. Perhaps the seminal instalment in the Charlie Boone universe, for those familiar, read on and expect to be enthralled! For all you newcomers, welcome and you really need to start with the first of these captivating tales. This truly earns five stars!!
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    Chapter 6

    Oh Kipper, you say the most romantic things.. But then the man dropped his hands, and squinted at Kippy quizzically. "Correct me if I'm wrong, but couldn't you or one of your friends have just whipped up this stand magically?' Kippy sighed at that. "Yes. But it wouldn't be the same." He reached out to place a hand on the man's arm. "This is a special gift, for a special person. Magic wouldn't be the same. I want this stand built by a friend of Charlie's. I want the special love and attention you put into the things you make. Like the furniture we have at the office. You know what I mean?" Did you ask @Ivor Slipper for help... "How will we know where they are?" Kippy asked. Frit turned to Pip, and the two elves frowned at each other. "A good question," Pip said. "A very good question," Frit agreed. He though a moment, and then smiled, and flicked his fingers again. A butterfly appeared in the air before them, and fluttered back and forth in a very orderly pattern. "This is Yurnoz," Frit explained. "He'll appear when the little bell sounds, and he can take you to where the person is located." Pip grinned. "Yep. Just follow Yurnoz!" The two elves started laughing again, while Kippy just stared at them. "What if it's at night? We won't be able to see this little fellow in the dark." Frit managed to stop laughing. "Oh, Yurnoz glows in the dark!" "LIke Rudolph!" Pip added, and the elves started to break up again. OHHHHH a tater tot with extra thick cut bacon pizza.... I'd be waddling like a duck after not sharing...much 😉 Thank you Geron, this was one, if not the best chapter yet in another fantastic Charlie Boone universe(s) If this were baseball, you hit a triple grand slam!!!! Hey...it could happen on Engris.... Thanks again and the best of the new year to you and yours, and not to forget your faithful readers...ditto!!!
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    Chapter 9

    Not Bigfoot or Sasquatch??? Either one could tip a skid steer over...
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    Chapter 9

    Brilliant!!!!
  19. It won't be just one or two coming to the rescue, but a bar full of very angry, inebriated patrons..
  20. What Al said.... Someday, and I would hope in my lifetime, we will judge folks by their character, not by the color of their skin...
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    Chapter 13

    This one hit home for me as the central tenant of this wonderful story. It truly exemplifies just what the Christmas spirit is truly about, and demonstrates that there is a reason for the season, not just at this time of year, but 365 days of the year!!! As an old car buff, the Mini Cooper S with the full service history, MOT and the like, will to the true aficionados, will more than likely rocket thru the estimate Joe gave. Considering the age of the car, the year it was built,...1965, the car has become the proverbial unicorn. Of the thousands that were built, I would hazard a guess that less than a hundred, and I suspect much, much fewer, can claim that sort of provenance. The critical path here for Charlie is to use OEM parts whenever things that need fixing are beyond repair. As a fan of Wheeler Dealers with Mike Brewer, I've learned that spread across the UK, are many small, niche business that can remanufacture some of these hard to repair parts. It is critical that the car remain a 'numbers matching vehicle'. That is to say, there are several areas where the car has serial numbers, and they all have to match. The boys should look the car over very carefully for the factory build sheet. This sheet tells the assembly line how the car is to be built per customer or dealer order. Finding that exponentially increases value. Sometimes it is found tucked under the springs of the seats or hidden in the trunk (boot)! It is critical to proving originality!! Somehow, I don't think Harry will sell the car, he'll want to keep it in the 'family'!! Tissues, why I hardly know you!!! This truly was a great chapter, even if there weren't any broken brake pipes...😉
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    Colin 7

    Colin keeps reminding me Of My Fair Lady...in the sense that the world he is learning of is one he belongs to... Early days and easy steps towards the future... Happy New Year to all!
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    Chapter 5

    I've been told I am psychotic...opps prescient..😜
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    Chapter 5

    This was a delightful chapter to say the least. It was warm and wonderful...Loved it!!! If memory serves me correctly, and reaching out to @ReaderPaul, I seem to recall other treasures found on Engris from other civilizations played prominently in succeeding stories, such as the ring that gave us Ragal. I get the feeling we just may see some or all of these wonderful finds in the future adventures of the gang!!!
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