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Everything posted by drsawzall
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While not onto bondage or pain, bless those who do... Carey, just what have you gotten yourself into???
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Hoo boy, something to look forward to...as an aside, thanks for taking the time to create this and share it we readers...it is appreciated!!!
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Inside the Korean Baths, and Ch-ch-ch-changes
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Inside the Korean Baths, and Ch-ch-ch-changes
Dom continues to amaze me, so wise and yet a child for all his few years... It would appear there may be storm clouds gathering on the horizon... "Not a problem. I'll tell Dad to come over." A heavy sigh came through the speaker. "Yeah, about that." "What?" He lowered his voice. "I never mentioned it before because we seldom got together, but for whatever reason, Patty doesn't like Dad." "What do you mean—whatever reason? What possible reason could she have?" "Okay, I know the reason, but I’d rather not discuss it on the phone. I’d really appreciate it if he wasn't there when we arrived." I frowned. "No worries, but he'll want to see you at some point." "Oh, of course. I just—” Dave audibly swallowed. “Well, just don't tell him we're coming. Please?" I was getting more and more confused, "Yeah. Okay."- 23 comments
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Power corrupts, absolute power corrupts absolutely....whither goest Simon??? “From slave to king-maker in just a few days,” Yidian adored, “Just imagine what we could achieve.” “I am,” Simon thought as a wicked smile crossed his face, “and I like it.”
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Will Connor find and meet up with Simon???
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Well, it went the full 12 rounds and a TKO by Elijah...While I am not sad to see the back of Tyson, we saw for a brief moment a glimmer of humanity, and then...ooops...it vanished... Well done, tho I see it is not marked complete, hopefully there's more??
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Including @drpaladin...
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Pride goeth before the fall...
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But wait...there's more... Deia looked at Maio and said, matter-of-factly, “He’s a god.” “I’m a what now?” I said. And then came the echoes. ‘Fall! Fall!’, they said. Like… like in my dreams. “Can you hear that?” I was frantically turning my head, trying to ascertain the direction the voices came from. “What?” Maio said. ‘NOW FALL!’ “Something’s very wrong. It’s the voices from my dreams,” I said.
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No matter the station in life, once the clothes come off...they're just empty suits...and naked predators preying on the vulnerable...Will our intrepid hero survive this hormonal swimming pool????
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My opinion about Russ is evolving as the following will attest to, Brian, Toby, and Gordon prove to humanize the man... Brian pulled on his jeans and dashed down, closely followed by Russ who apologised and said that it would be his driver. Russ had organised a surprise for dinner, but had lost track of time, something he never usually did. So much so, that the occurrence seemed to disturb the man, but Gordon simply joked that it showed how much he was enjoying chilling with them.
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I found the following so very interesting; it speaks as to what we have devolved to...criticized if we get up and walk in the morning and criticized if we get up and run in the morning...damned if you do, and damned if you don't.... Amber was left alone in the room, with the news blasting Aaron for not caring about his mother. She couldn’t see a remote anywhere, and there was no way to shut the tv out. She sighed, resigning herself to putting up with the obnoxious human on the screen. One point did make her smile, no matter how the tv attacked it. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Humph....I'm not convinced or buying it just yet... “Lord Sarin was gracious enough to suggest a break for lunch,” Aaron smiled tightly. “I have to be back in an hour.” “Despite all appearances to the contrary, Lord Sarin is a good man,” Amber admitted. “He and I rarely saw eye-to-eye, but his views were nonetheless rooted in Astara’s best interests.” She echoed Aaron’s tight smile. “With the exception of the pay increases he likes to give himself.”
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Sarah needs to curb her enthusiasm and temper her outlook, understanding that the world and will not bend to her individual will. Not at the young padawan's age that is...World domination takes time along with careful consideration and planning...
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Moving On and Peaceful Living - For a Bit
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Moving On and Peaceful Living - For a Bit
Loved this chapter, sadly we are taught, thank you, you F'ing Puritans, that nudity is abhorrent and we should never appreciate , or see our bodies as we should...I loved the tenor of this chapter and the pacing, I hope this relationship works for both Dylan and Dom's sake... Hoo boy, it is about to get interesting to say the least for a certain @weinerdog...just saying...how can you not luv a mug like this???? -
This is a good trip for both of them, ironing out the bumps one can expect when traveling together. Many important lessons learned, and issues easily smoothly resolved....I think of this as a warm-up to the vacation the two will take to Italy...while it could be phrased a bit differently, it is gratifying to see Colin 'growing' into his body and accepting the same!!
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Now will have to read Heart and an epilogue would be a treat... I can't help but admire your skill with dialogue as @Gary L pointed out and your rejoinder. I for the life of me suffer from the gift of gab but struggle with writing dialogue, I love writing vivid descriptions and scene settings, it comes so very easy to me, perhaps a mind meld al la Star Trek?
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Yea...what he said!!!!!!
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Very interesting, I suspect we will see a few more references to Egyptology moving forward...but on to more important things, how in the heck are they going to escape from the guys with the chainsaws when they left the freaking car on the other side of the veil???? 😶🌫️
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Chapter 9 Later That Night
drsawzall commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 9 Later That Night
Well Bell is confirming he's a little shit...bet he says the following to all the boys/girls... A long pause. Toby was about to fill in the silence, when Bell jumped in. “Hey, ya know…what happened when we were together?” “Yeah?” Toby’s heart skipped a beat. Fear struck him instantly. What if he says it was all a mistake? Regrets, sorry about that, didn’t mean to lead him on, blah blah blah. “It was fun…ah…I mean it was…special.” Not sure just what to think about Carey and Apollo....other than to convince myself they will see each other again....Would like to see just how talented in math he just may be... -
Fricking Tyson, he will be the type of politico that gets caught with his pants down on a school bus full of choir boys and nuns....ggggrrrr
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This is a very good observation and ever so true, could not have said it any better.... Count me in joining the sparrowfart fan club!!!
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Like others It is nice to see George back on the water and I also get the feeling that his command, while temporary, will be anything but... With a bevy of good-looking officers what do you think the odds will be he's canoodling beneath the sheets before the first week is up???
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I get the feeling that out among the cages is Martina, I temper that thought that the animals that Micco will free will in the end, save him from the b*%ch.....
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Let's hope Stewart doesn't bang his head anytime soon.....
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Well...what do ya know...who woulda thought or figured that that little shit Bell called, is the boy clueless or what??? Then there's Apollo, can't wait to see just where this goes...
