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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    A great beginning and looking forward to more…
  2. Oh my…not sure just what to say…
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    Zolgrim

    Tread carefully Simon…
  4. Well we find out Theodore is a first class a$$hole don’t we…..will Dave recover?
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    Chapter Four

    Nathan should have used the water to loose his scent before resting…good thing he no longer has the ring!!
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    Chapter Three

    Just a few chapters in and the shitestorm hits…wither thou goest Nathan??
  7. Will the wanker Rupert somehow spill the beans as to Jamie’s new found abilities? Why was he being chased and is what ever it was still after him???
  8. Capes and tights, mmm
  9. A complete and comprehensive blood test should take place ASAP. Any evidence of the physical altercation, such as bruising? Regarding the body and patrol cams, they can be tampered with as we all know. However the original is simply overlayed. Someone, Nam or Mike, need to get the original along with finding out more about the driver and CI Mwangi.
  10. I sense nothing good is going to happen with Apollo…the sheik gives me the creeps.. Miranda’s next photo shoot is about to get very racy to say the least…
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    Chapter 39

    Like others, loved the ending… Man,” Kenny said, with a little pout, “I guess I won't be calling Bryan 'Daddy,' then.” “Serious!” Bryan cried out, trying to cover his reddening face. “Not you, too!” And then @Summerabbacat, I’m guessing Judge Crustypants suffers from a well known malady called stickupyourasssideways as it is known in the medical community…
  12. Nice to see the relationship growing and solidifying. Colin has the right of it, seeing he needs to update the business plan and has some serious thinking as to how he wants the business to evolve.
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    Chapter 2

    Someone better check those aspirin bottles….
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    Fly!

    BTW…loved this…now bring on Cowman !
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    Fly!

    Ummm…what was it the pot said to the kettle ?
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    Chapter 2

    Two broken souls finding each other, one hope they aren’t ships in the night. what ever happens on a date with Sharon,Thomas needs to be honest and forthright!
  17. Thank you for taking the time to gift us with your work, it is appreciated!!! While I feel like this... When I really want to feel like this...
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    Discoveries

    I can't disagree with any of the above comments, they all hit the mark as it were...what I find a bit disingenuous is the following... Apart from the first chapter, this was the chapter with most edits. @Mikiesboy brought the restaurant to life and helped out with the sex (not that way) What you talking about Willis???. I have researched a lot for this story, but restaurant interiors really weren’t on the list..
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    Chapter Two

    The mystery deepens as the plot thickens...what is going on with the four riders suddenly leaving the Keep...could it have anything to do with the busy Lord?
  20. My goodness...that was/is one heck of a boat ride...gonna keep an eye out for that boat...
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    Six

    This is thanks due to American churches from our deep south sending missionaries, funds for buying the politicos over there, getting them to enact their homophobias into law... But where would you park on the beaten path off the moors??? The boys need to consider renting a room somewhere, over here we have some that rent by the hour!!!
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    Chapter 1

    Welcome back and this story looks very interesting...looks like a trip to the store may need to happen for some super glue!!!
  23. drsawzall

    Chapter One

    A great start, what has Nathan gotten himself into and not so much a cliffhanger but a knife-hanger....
  24. You rascally SOB...12 lines or so into the chapter I was reaching for the tissues, and then you piled it on!!! Loved this chapter and thanks and please forward the following!!!!
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    Chapter 9

    Well this chapter certainly was jam packed with all sorts of good stuff...Praying for Mama and looking forward to Chris babysitting...
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