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Trials and Tribulations
drsawzall commented on Karl Anders's story chapter in Trials and Tribulations
Mrs. Fisher is truly becoming a c u next tuesday witch...Every meeting or visitation by her needs to be recorded!!! -
Making Deeper Connections
drsawzall commented on Karl Anders's story chapter in Making Deeper Connections
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Not only was gold found but possibly coal and water!!
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And a new adventure begins!!!
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Yes indeed, perhaps a new adventure in Kilimanjaro!!
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Chapter 32 - The Universe
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 32 - The Universe
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It's a small world after all...personally I enjoy a good fireworks show...looking forward to the next!!
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Chapter 32 - The Universe
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 32 - The Universe
it is obvious the missing ship is somehow connected with whatever the Red Stars are now... This is troubling to say the least... As they drew near to the spaceport, Lyoth’s keen awareness picked up on a man heading straight for them, and he sidestepped out of the other pedestrian’s way. He expected the man to do the same, but he bumped right into Phentrom. “Oh, excuse me!” the mandroid said in surprise. “I didn’t mean to…” The other man did not react, and he continued walking, already disappearing into the crowd. “Well, that was rude,” Fonith stated, and Froufrou let out an angry bark. “I think I’ve…” Phentrom began, but he did not finish his thought. -
Mike needs a monastery, he is a ticking timebomb and I still believe his father needs, as they say in the movies, two behind the ear..
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Not sure just what to say/comment...
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Can't think of anyplace that could be like the following...thank goodness...not! “Saturnia is a planet ruled by strife and tension. Wars, hunger, disease, racial and gender strife exist there. Bigotry reigns supreme. Every group tries to get you to live as they live. Heterosexuals hate homosexuals, and homosexuals distrust heterosexuals. Every religious group thinks that their way is the only way that the Supreme Being will accept them. Some religions are so bigoted that they will murder anyone who doesn’t worship as they do. Men and women do not understand each other and are mistrustful of each other.” “It sounds like a perfectly awful place to live,” Vasco commented.
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A culinary delight not to be missed...thank goodness for Amazon!! Amazon.com : ligonberry jam
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Chapter 31 - Wyrms
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 31 - Wyrms
Well it wasn't pirates after all....Some say tomato and I say potato... Genocide, let's hope it is only made up facts... Froufrou...your ride is ion the way...pun intended... -
Chapter 30 - The River Thieth Hotel
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 30 - The River Thieth Hotel
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I enjoyed this chapter very much, it hit all the right 'notes' as it were, I thought the following was very good... Before the Memorial, Christmas Eve and Christmas Day services, I wish to introduce to you the senior members of the School Choir,” Kyle added as the singing started coming from the main passageway, as the doors opened and the twelve choir boys dressed in their school uniforms entered the room, and we were given a three hymn performance, that included a solo by Kyle, who was struggling to keep tears away.
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Getting Closer, and Football
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Getting Closer, and Football
Well, the closet door had fully opened, and no one was injured...the way Beth is showing interest in Roger was funny...that young man may need to keep a pair of track shoes handy....- 13 comments
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Can't wait for the legal tussle with the inheritance...it is going to be a battle royal... I like my, being of Swedish descent, meatballs so much better!!! Now the lingonberry jelly, that's a whole nother delight! One gripe about IKEA, is that you have to trapse thru the entire frigging store to get to the cash registers,,,and what about those shopping carts that seize up once you go past a certain point???
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But will Mike survive emotionally the growing pains...The Alphas need to be placed against a wall in front of the firing squad... Next chapter, Mike gets some advice from his sensei that starts him down the path to self acceptance and becoming his own man. But there will be growing pains along the way.
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Like others, I am addicted to this story and loving every chapter!! Having said all of that, it is leaving me needing my fix on a regular basis!!!
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Thank you for reading, much of this was autobiography and I am proof that it does get better!!!
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Not sure when but there will be an additional chapter or two.
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Can not wait!!!
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Ok all you haters...the jury is sending out for a box of Kleenex and a extra-large humble pie...with sprinkles?? OOOOHHH #77 if I get this in quick enough...
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Chapter 29 - The Rite
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 29 - The Rite
I thought the following was very powerful... The third dried flower petal disappeared in the fire, and with that, the ritual was concluded. The group sat quietly for a moment. Stawren’s eyes were shimmering with tears. Lyoth was smiling. Phentrom looked astounded. “That was beautiful,” he whispered, as if afraid he might break the spell. The three husbands brought their palms together and bowed their heads to their guests. “Thank you,” Lyoth added quietly, “you honor us.”
