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Everything posted by drsawzall
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Why do I get the feeling that at some point there will be conflict with the evil skinwalkers? All in all though, a very informative and interesting chapter!
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A Court of Ghosts, Part 2
drsawzall commented on Stephen Wormwood's story chapter in A Court of Ghosts, Part 2
All empires end or give way and not in an orderly fashion, the changing of the guard as a new King takes the stage, threatens the old regime as influence wanes...While not everything is as it seems, as Lady Cecily would inform the non-ersatz Lord Grey. There were at least dual purposes in her ruminations... Methinks Thomas Wolner mayhaps be in over his head, the spark to the tinder at Speakers Square??? -
Skinny Dipping - Family Style, and a Barbeque
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Skinny Dipping - Family Style, and a Barbeque
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Glad I found this and it is a breath of fresh air!!! You had me with the following!!! "Hi Cal. You didn't tell me you went and had another child." "Before you get too confused, Matt. Mom's name is Calista." "OK, thanks Reggie. Although I wasn't really expecting Calvin." "Yes, Elias, they were running a special on young teenagers at the store." "You always love a bargain. But I believe we're making him think we're odd. Hello son. How are you and who are you?" "Hi Mr. Lincoln. I'm good. I'm Matt Harrison. Actually, I'm your paperboy. Mrs. Lincoln offered to feed me instead of paying for the paper this week."
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One would have call this part of the evening fortuitous as some of what was lost was found...and more ill-gotten gains were found. I have to think the shawl and jewelry/bracelet will more than 'prove' they have two of the thieves!!! Now the boys need to get to town and get the word out and over the telegraph wires to be on the lookout for the wounded bandit... I think Lucas will ease Jubal's fears as their bond grows... Oh...and boys...get the to the barber and spend the 2 bits for a bath and a shave!!!!
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It looks like the fun just won't stop...does it??? As noted, theft of gems, a stabbing, murder of a train employee, beating the station manager, when caught, send these two jokers and anyone else cooperating with them, swimming in Leaders Creek where they can go dancing with the crocks!!!! The following had me a bit worried tho... Backing back about twenty metres, I found enough space to go off the road and into the bush, having engaged four-wheel drive on my vehicle, I carefully drove through the bush, until I reached my boundary and returned to the road, which had deep ruts in it, to get to my front gate. I was not too happy when I saw some minor damage to the gate, where someone has attempted to get through and onto my property, with no success.
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Well, you've set the stage with all sorts of clues, I am wondering tho how being shaved equates to a sore rear end and jut what does Mike have to do with either???
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Loved this chapter but...there's gotta gonna be a cliffhanger round the next chapter or so...
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Every law enforcement agency in the general vicinity should be on Red Alert, and the Army as well...what a great exercise for the Army as one of their own is in danger... When the local police did not answer Struan's call, he should have made a few more calls to other law enforcement agencies...
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Chapter 9 - Lahari, Part One
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 9 - Lahari, Part One
Sounds like a bad LSD trip...did someone slip some magic mushrooms into a meal??? -
Captivating, entertaining, well written, a can't put down...Why are you still reading this???
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This was a great series of shorts, thanks for taking the time to entertain us....
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is this the sound when you fail at discretely passing gas???
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Brilliant chapter and how in the F'ing heck did I miss this...AAAARRRRGGGG Well like others I wanted to use 2 or more of the emoji's...Matt needs to be publicly castrated for starters, staked on an anthill slathered with honey... Then we had the rest of the chapter...thank you and being a backwoods, mickey mouse mechanic, the following just rang so freaking true!!!! Scenarios are running through my head. Us taking things slow. Us taking things too quickly. At some point, are we going to push the beds together? Nah, that won’t work. This mattress already slides when I roll over at night. I do have a couple of ratchet straps behind the seat in the truck… What should be used on Matt...
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And tiny jock straps???
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This reminded me of what family is all about... One thing that always happens one of the boys will find a jacket that the others like, which meant he would show them where he got it. They would go and get the same jacket. A lot of their clothes were the same style and color. They said it’s a family thing. I knew that coming from different backgrounds, they needed some tangible item that said we are family. Clothes and jackets said that.
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Thanks for the chapter, it certainly covered a lot of ground!!! I grew up on peanut butter with homemade raspberry jelly sandwiches. While I like Peter Pan peanut butter, to my mind Skippy is the best by far!!! Just for grins and giggles... https://www.nytimes.com/wirecutter/reviews/best-creamy-peanut-butter/ Thanks again for the chapter!!!
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A very interesting premise and beginning, looking forward to many more chapters!! as to the following all I can say is F'ing wow... I've never had a boyfriend or even a crush. Was this a crush? I never explored with a friend like I'd read about. I've known I'm gay since I was 12, but I haven't told anyone. My dad is a devout Catholic and it won't go well if he finds out. We live in a small community in West Virginia, so I know the rednecks at school will be a problem. The school has an anti-bullying policy, but considering some of the teachers are the worst bullies, it's not enforced. One boy came out two years ago and was beaten so bad he had to transfer schools. The guidance counselor said, “It's his own fault, if he wasn't like he is he would've been fine.” so yeah, I'm deep in the closet.
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Chapter 8 - Tragedy
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 8 - Tragedy
We can't say for sure what happened.... -
Chapter 7 - Lonklam & Ronging
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 7 - Lonklam & Ronging
What happens when you consort with those you would be better off to avoid... -
Travis will be pushing the envelope...so to speak
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Well, it looks like the title is/was very prophetic...
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Wow, what a start and welcome back!!! The Smithsonian program Mighty Trains has an episode all about Ghan
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Knowing this...can Tomas and Henry ever be together?
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Chapter 6 - Unadi & Olona, Part One
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Unadi & Olona, Part One
I caught the following as well... Stuck in a book called A Retrospective Look at the American Empire After the Devastation, she found an old photograph with an article titled The Cursed Village. The picture was of a hillside village, and on the back, the words “The mining community of Bahlim Town before the ghost sickness” were written in scratchy letters. The newspaper clipping was not dated and there was no publication information. Again, as with the device that allowed safe undetectable passage by the Gunge, I have to feel they are well on the way to finding a cure...
