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Chapter 11: THE ART OF PATIENCE (PART TWO)
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 11: THE ART OF PATIENCE (PART TWO)
Medicate…medicate… -
The unkindest cut….
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And we are off with a whole new adventure and looking forward to it!
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This looks to be quite a story, bring on the next chapter
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Loved this chapter from beginning to end…all I got is…where’s the measurement? Flynn squeezed his hand. "I don't run." “You might want to when Gary gets his dick out.” Who in LA doesn’t know about O’Briain’s tab Dr. Okonkwo watched them with an expression that was somewhere between amusement and exhaustion. "If you're done, I have other patients. Myra will handle the paperwork. And O'Briain?" "Yeah?" "Pay your tab."
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It came to me in the last chapter that I thought our sun king was the culprit….and while that thought is the progenitor of a few red herrings, until otherwise demonstrated, I suspect Bastian is the killer…
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Brilliant, the best time travel tale yet. What a fantastic imagination!! More please!
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While I don’t condone what Sakis did, I can’t condemn it either.
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Chapter 10: THE ART OF PATIENCE
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 10: THE ART OF PATIENCE
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Thank you for sharing this with us, not to mention your incredible talent. Being on the next!
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Thanks to the wisdom of the comments above, what I had planned to say has pretty much been covered….just so tremendously sad, And as noted, even today our pick and chose religious zealots bastardized their faiths. They do so to cover their ignorance and bigotry and revel in their actions.
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Someone once asked, how would one eat an elephant, only to hear, one bite at a time! Johnny has built the foundation form his career, and the next steps is to successfully build a fantastic career...
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Slowly but surely, Neil is coming into his own as he begins to understand there is life after coming out of the closet! Eric Ravilious - Search
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Hey @weinerdog, first on page 2….
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But we know from an earlier blurb from you, he has a story of his own later on….
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Early days, I have to believe Rhaelce isn’t too far behind…they both want to continue the trip to see what is on or near the mountains
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Chapter 9: THE ART OF THE PRISON RIOT
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 9: THE ART OF THE PRISON RIOT
I have to wonder, was the expression on George’s face before seeing the black hole event horizon, a direct result of seeing Mickey in glorious underwear action… George stood from his corner, and stared out of the viewport with it’s jaw hanging open, and pointing in sheer terror. -
Chapter 9: THE ART OF THE PRISON RIOT
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 9: THE ART OF THE PRISON RIOT
Much better and more effective than crop circles… -
My Heart is With Harry.
drsawzall commented on E K Stokes's story chapter in My Heart is With Harry.
This chapter could have been called Stormy Waters…..I give Callum kudos for realizing he was so very close to stepping over the line… Aled was able to gain closure with his return to the farm…. -
A lot of hurt feelings in this chapter…and folks at cross purposes, and everyone needs to get their acts together…
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In a way, I feel sorry for Frank, beneath that gruff exterior is a sad and miserable boy. it seems to me he was the clumsy outsider amongst his peers, the one picked last when teams formed up for games. Frank leaned back in his chair, arms crossing over his chest. For a moment the professional mask slipped just enough for Marc to see the man underneath: tired but satisfied, the loner who pushed everyone away but maybe did not want to anymore. Then the mask returned.
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Who doesn't love a good short story, one that fuels the imagination when a new universe of possibility is created. Drawing the reader in and leaving questions and thoughts to ponder and ruminate on. One of my personal favorites was The Lottery by Shirley Jackson. Such great care was taken in creating a world that left me wanting to know more about this world, the whys, the hows, and the what-if's... And that, my friends, is the power of a short story...
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Still not much in the way of information leading to definitive answers, and plenty of fodder in the comments to feed multiple red herrings!
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Chapter 8: THE ART OF BREAKING POINTS
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 8: THE ART OF BREAKING POINTS
This I gotta see…..as I wait with bated breath…ya gotta love rioters wearing only underwear….
