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One of the best chapters yet, a fantastic job!! They were getting dangerously close to the God concept again, so a question like “Who would have that power?” probably wasn’t prudent. “And you say there are others,” Jase asked, “who are working against that?” Philip’s eyes fluttered shut, and his tanned, weathered face paled. “I’ve met them.” A chill raced up Jase’s spine. Philip took a deep breath and squared his shoulders before meeting Jase’s eyes again. “Be careful, Jase. That’s probably the best advice I can give you. And always be ready for things to go the opposite of how you’d expect.” @CincyKris, what a great observation!!! If there are others who are at cross purposes, working against those who are trying to do good, would that explain the incident at the police station, where the folks after Macy were so well prepared???
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So nice to see the family grow, with the boys growing up and a year or two from college, it is nice to see that others will come behind them... It will be very interesting to see what the painting is worth and how the art students work out!!
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Chapter 15: Shore's Showdown
drsawzall commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 15: Shore's Showdown
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Chapter 14: Caleb's Commitment
drsawzall commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 14: Caleb's Commitment
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Chapter 13: Vexatious Victory
drsawzall commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 13: Vexatious Victory
What's the old saw..."Al's fair in love and war!!" -
Engineer Benson - Chapter 2 - July 12, 1993
drsawzall commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Engineer Benson - Chapter 2 - July 12, 1993
That's right, I forgot the year, however working in Boston and living just south of the city, we were much more connected as it were... Still, even considering the sources of potential information you mentioned, I simply can't see an information blackout succeeding.. What I do find terrifying in this particular scenario, is what will the government do to contain the outbreak...I keep thinking a resort to a scorched earth policy...be it chemical, explosive, or otherwise.... You've got me hooked...now get back to playin!! -
Sometimes the baggage you carry is better left at the station check-in kiosk....
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What a sweet and tender chapter, hitting all the right notes...well done!!!
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Another in a series of what I would call fractured fairy tales..there not just for the kiddos any more!!!
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All's well that ends well!!! I great take on fairy tales of past and once again, love wins out!!
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This Or this...would suffice...No????
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Engineer Benson - Chapter 2 - July 12, 1993
drsawzall commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Engineer Benson - Chapter 2 - July 12, 1993
Things are changing quickly around the boys...Pamela presents a huge risk!! My gut feeling based on the nuggets below, is to have a 'bug out" plan at the ready. It may require some scouting as to how to get out of Dodge and disappear into the woods far away from Fort Knox.... You were right, Wayne. Things were wrong, and if you'd not yelled it in our faces, I might be dead right now. You put me on edge. Made me alert and made us prepare. We have batteries, fuel, ammo, water, beans, and Spam because of you. So. Thanks. If I guess correctly...so far this is an isolated incident, is the internet still working? They apparently are seeing information from beyond what I would call, a "containment" zone... This begs the question, unless there is a full bore lockdown of the affected area(s), there must be some folks trying to contact friends, lovers, business acquaintances, and lovers, from outside the affected area. The way social media can so quickly spread information, dubious, false, or otherwise...I find it difficult to believe the rest of the country/world is totally ignorant of something going on in the vicinity of Ft Knox... All the while, we're huddled inside, peeking out at the ever-growing number of monsters on the street. It's surreal. The news should be absolutely blasting what is happening on every channel, but it's not. We check here and there, and mostly people seem a little concerned about the "flu" in Knox county Kentucky, but there's nowhere near the amount of coverage this deserves. Furthermore...just what is the Government's plan for cleaning up this isolated mess???? I think any survivalist must include Spam as part of their survival rations...Like Twinkies, Spam will survive a zombie apocalypse... -
An interesting start, I'm sure exciting adventures are to follow!!
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3. Mr. Garter's Condition
drsawzall commented on Refugium's story chapter in 3. Mr. Garter's Condition
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The proverbial calm before the storm so to speak...still many unanswered questions...
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What's the old saying...A bad day fishing is much better than a good day working... Mom was all for it, Dad wasn’t. The usual comments, what are we going to do with our home, think about our friends. Mom handled that. “We’ll put the house on the market and we never where the type of people who entertained a lot. You’ll make new friends here. Then the coup d’etat, “Who is going to help Colin and Armand teach the boys fishing?” AND...it looks as if the family will be growing...YAY!!!!
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Chapter 16 - Underground, Part Two
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 16 - Underground, Part Two
While Dozi's home is in need of repair, there is always the caves under the waterfall...and I'll say it again...It is past time for the Hunters to be hunted...to extinction if corporal punishment does not suffice... -
Chapter 12: Confusing Contest
drsawzall commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 12: Confusing Contest
Games within games, I agree that Vincent will be tested to the utmost of his ability, I can see him going toe to toe with Alpha Vonder... It's this... or this... -
Chapter 11: Forgotten Father
drsawzall commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 11: Forgotten Father
I'd like to think I may soil myself without embarrassment if an elephant shifter were to announce I was their intended...there's an image I can't quickly erase...where's that freaking bottle of Again, loved this chapter with all the new and continuing cross purpose threads... Then there's the ending...what's the noise when a submarine starts it's dive...aaaawooooggggaaah...aaaawooooggggaaah -
Chapter 10: Role Reversal
drsawzall commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 10: Role Reversal
Color me with no sense of just where the multiple tangents in this story are going...and I'm loving it!!! -
Chapter 9: Occupational Opportunity
drsawzall commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 9: Occupational Opportunity
Something from this chapter twigged something I should have pointed out in the last chapter... Mason’s lack of enthusiasm sparked Cyrus’. “Don’t you think having three deities watching over your mate is a sign? If it were Kaplan, I would sleep easier at night knowing that. If Aliz is keeping Vincent on track to duel Gregoro, I doubt anything else would take down your mate.” From the previous chapter... He studied her for a moment, then obeyed. With no transition, he was back in Antarctica. Turning in a circle, his curiosity spiked. Taking off his shoe and sock, he pulled up his pant leg. The bitter cold was troublesome, even with his frost magic. Shifting his leg, he saw a third band had formed on his calf's fur. Correct me if I am wrong, but I would suspect the third band mentioned in the previous chapter is a separate occurrence from having the three deities watching over Vincent...If I am correct Vincent just grew proportionally stronger within his magic/ shadow affinity... Or...have I gone off the rails, lost the thread, and while crossing the street in the UK...forgot to look to the left??? -
Chapter 8: Psychotic Plunge
drsawzall commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 8: Psychotic Plunge
Hoo boy...well that certainly splains things Lucy... “Do not play with destiny, shapeshifter!” Her voice palpitated. “I can not assist you. Hear, and know that. I can not control the outcome. Toy long enough, and the destiny will go down a drastic or unpredictable path.” -
God bless Mr Wilbur, sadly his wisdom fell on deaf ears... I hope Dion finds the strength he needs as Donavan gets exposed for what he appears to be..
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Chapter 2 Transcendental Taxi
drsawzall commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 2 Transcendental Taxi
Korner Krazies then perhaps???
