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  1. drsawzall

    Prologue

    From the bottom of my heart folks, thank you for the encouragement! When I finish what I am currently working on and one or two others, there will be a visit back to catch up with these folks!! Remember, it is hard to steal a fish when it is cut up into chowder!!!
  2. Only two folks nearly guessed mine... kileoli and leshwar This was a fantastic effort by everyone, and congrats to all!!!!
  3. drsawzall

    Chapter 13

    Wow...this was an amazing chapter, so much in so few words...well done!!
  4. drsawzall

    Chapter 19

    What we have here is a conundrum to beat all conundrums….my simple thoughts lead me to think that Celyn’s soul as it were, like Marcus’s has not simply reappeared with each reincarnation, but exists as Marcus does. Perhaps on a different plane of existence. I'm wondering if the confluence of all the past lives find a terminus and coalesce, leaving Christopher the holder of fading memories…and the cycle broken. Vale/Maelor has much to answer for…and now my head hurts…
  5. Another fine chapter….love the slow burn… And keep writing, the more you write the better it gets….
  6. drsawzall

    Chapter 26

    Hell hath no fury like a Thompson scorned…I will admit some confusion…do Casey’s mates know he walks the other side of the street? Casey laughed, but it was sharp and ugly. ‘So what, you’re going to run back to your church and your two fag dads and play happy family again? After everything? After you kissed me back
  7. drsawzall

    Chapter 25

    If in fact Casey is gay, and all signs point to his being so…it is a step in the right direction….and this just off the press… Casey had been patient . . . playing the long game . . . and he figured he finally had Levi where he wanted him. This kid wasn’t that much younger than him, but from the time he had first seen Levi when he had been visiting the school with his father, all innocent and boyishly cute, Casey knew that he wanted him. He had to have him. Now what will the aftermath of Casey being or nearly outed?
  8. drsawzall

    Chapter 8

    Slowly, the feelings are growing as they learn more about themselves, we need more than one last chapter....please and thanks???
  9. Well, ' bogan' is a new word for me, and it was a close call as I was laughing so hard at Kim's comment about being 'effulent'...I nearly needed a bathroom run...great stuff!!!
  10. drsawzall

    Secret love

    Still quite a bit to narrow down, and I find the blow-up Tim had with his father, and then the reconciliation a bit suspect...
  11. Love it! Stuck on you also works for me; it will feature in a story I am about to publish. It will be in a later chapter, but...just love the lyrics when sung that way.
  12. drsawzall

    Chapter 8

    Well, it looks like @Gary L, @Mrsgnomie, and yours truly can lay claim to being part of that first on Pg 4, seeing as how we were included in that comment...!!!!!
  13. Let's not forget he's a wife beater as well...another circle of hell for the step dad to enjoy...
  14. drsawzall

    Chapter 8

    I had the same thought: the most likely avenue that the trouble @kbois blatantly tells us is coming is at school, going to school or coming back home, and in a classic case of distraction...in the tiny shower..., Or news of the trust gets out and leads to all kinds of shenanigans and skullduggery...possibly kidnapping??? And how about #Miloy???
  15. drsawzall

    Chapter 8

    Don’t forget feast, famine, and the four horseman of the apocalypse….
  16. Hopefully we get to visit Matt and family at Thanksgiving…..and Just like the …
  17. drsawzall

    Chapter 12

    A slow awakening and a ratcheting up of unspoken desire. What an amazing descriptive chapter. Marcus understood it for what it was, and was surprised to find himself grateful for it even as some other, less patient part of him ached at the waiting. Not a refusal. Only a line drawn carefully, and held.
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    Trusted

    This was a very sublime chapter with some interesting moments.
  19. Where is @chris191070, we need a countdown for @Cia’s release of the penultimate reveal come Monday. Now will it be “down under time” or Old Blighty time?
  20. drsawzall

    Chapter 4

    Once reaching Hawaii, Julian needs to establish the lay of the land, se how his fathers business is conducted, see what he can do to improve or start out on his own and drive dear old daddy out of business…And bring his brother into the fold….
  21. I once met a Jax while jogging who had a similar craftsman house and he invited me inside, and then I woke up…..all…stic 🤔 ky get your minds out of the gutter boys….hot and bothered 🤔 And what will Hayden do in the dorm room?
  22. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    No we don’t, please educate the woefully ignorant masses
  23. drsawzall

    Prologue

    Worming? What an eclectic cast of characters, this is gonna be great fun!
  24. drsawzall

    Chapter 4

    Julian’s grandmother has provided the seed money and if careful an empire can be born. And where will Sam fit in to all of this?
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