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Chapter 4: THE CHAD PROTOCOL
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 4: THE CHAD PROTOCOL
Agent Crin.... -4" 🍆🤔 -
Chapter 4: THE CHAD PROTOCOL
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 4: THE CHAD PROTOCOL
Ohhhhh...what's going on here??? Focus, he ordered himself. You are a hunter. You are the Hammer. He adjusted his flashing glasses, entirely unaware that a secondary personality was currently sleeping inside his own brain, actively looking forward to a coffee date with the exact people Crin was trying to arrest. -
A truly beautiful chapter, releasing sorrow while keeping that love close to one’s heart…I still have hope tho
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Sure it is… Hockey was a game of habits. Good linemates picked up each other's habits. Coffee. Stretching. Music. Skating patterns. That was all this was. Probably.
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A case of wilful ignorance perhaps... Jessica shouldn't have to live her life devoid of romance. It was only a matter of time before someone caught her eye. Poor Sakis will just have to accept his loss.
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Chapter 8. What Was Freely Given
drsawzall commented on Mark Paren's story chapter in Chapter 8. What Was Freely Given
Well told, and you are to be congratulated for the manner and style; it added a richness and depth to it! -
Chapter 2 - Road Trip
drsawzall commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 2 - Road Trip
This happened to me once...but I got better... ‘Unlike somebody, I know better than to trust gas station burritos for twenty-four hours.’ He grinned. ‘You're talking about one incident.’ ‘One incident that evacuated an entire motel room.’ -
I'm loving this, and I can't wait to meet Nana!!!
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Chapter 6: The Wintering
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 6: The Wintering
One day at a time, one board and nail at a time. The Molly House is becoming increasingly attractive, and unpaid and assumed debt is still debt... -
The Most Dangerous Sleep
drsawzall commented on Kevin Snell's story chapter in The Most Dangerous Sleep
Well now...someone(s) was/were asleep at the switch and guilty of shoddy paperwork and of reviewing all the facts concerning this case... It is tragic that someone died, and I won't diminish that fact...but Julien deserved so much better... -
The insurance company screwed up. To me, it is their responsibility to make it right. I can't see how Julien's testimony is going to change anything... Hopefully this f'up is rfesolved quickly in Paris. Oliver said the right thing to Julien... “Go. Do what you need to do. Come back.”
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Chapter 29: The Search for Tweek pt. 4
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 29: The Search for Tweek pt. 4
This was an amazing chapter, and I am experiencing a profound sense of loss, as noted, a necessary loss, but still... if only there were a way. Kudos, Topher, one of your best yet!!! -
Chapter 28: The Search for Tweek pt. 3
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 28: The Search for Tweek pt. 3
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It happened to me once too...then I woke up... Eddie followed his gaze. A grin spread across his face. "They've crossed over." I honestly couldn't remember when hockey had disappeared from the conversation. "...Huh," I said. "...Huh," Noah echoed.
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Chapter 5: The Net Closes
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 5: The Net Closes
Mrs. Higgins is a true wonder. I have to think of the return to Edwards 'former estate and the fortuitous meeting with the Princess might solve the need for a molly house, if her network of informants is that reputable, in a molly house well-placed men have let secrets out when in the arms of a lover... -
A great science fiction story, it was gripping and had me on the edge of my chair, well done!!!
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We've always done it this way! A very powerful story, leaving one with much to think about.
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Judge not, that ye be not judged. For with what judgment ye judge, ye shall be judged: and with what measure ye mete, it shall be measured to you again.
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As an ardent lover of science fiction, this is a great beginning, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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...seven for a secret....
drsawzall commented on Gary L's story chapter in ...seven for a secret....
Truly riveting and quite the example about how family secrets are most often than not, cancerous -
This was funny and adorkable in the best sense of the word!! I nearly fell out of my chair with this comment...
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Thank you for this Temogam is certainly Renn's equal, perhaps even worse...I look forward to the next book when it is ready!
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I don't trust the witch as far as I can throw her from this side of the keyboard... Who is Harlan Black, and is that his real name?
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A spellbinding thriller not to be missed!
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I think a cold shower is needed
