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  1. Nice to see the little turd will see some time incarcerated if he’s not tried as an adult. Fingers crossed that’s not the case! Wondering if he’s got soap on a rope….
  2. I’m loving this, the pace, setting, and mystery . There’s something very interesting about what’s going on! I have to agree with @akascrubber about the abundance of the images and use of the god Mercury…
  3. The wisest course of action... “Because he wants us reactive,” I said. “He wants panic. Distance. Cracks.” I brushed my thumb slowly across his knuckles. “We don’t give him that. We stay deliberate. We stay close. We outlast him.” By doing so, Niran will feel the need to escalate, and in doing so, slip up badly... It would be nice if Niran had a taste of his own medicine... Was the issue with the brakes ever reported to the police? It is critical that the bike be inspected and a report filed.... I noticed it in the parking structure when I squeezed the front brake before rolling out. There was a hesitation—not complete failure, not dramatic enough to draw attention, but enough that my instincts sharpened instantly. I crouched and ran my fingers along the cable housing, tracing the line from lever to caliper. It had been adjusted — not worn down, not degraded by time. Loosened with intention so that under sudden pressure it might delay. My body went cold before my thoughts did. I straightened slowly and scanned the garage without turning my head too abruptly, taking in the placement of cameras, the angles of parked cars, the blind spots between concrete pillars. I did not ride the bike. I took photos instead and texted Pete with a concise description. His reply came within a minute: Don’t move it. I’ll send someone for footage.
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    Chapter 20

    It is no longer that the church is about the love of Jesus, but rather control, money, and power... And..the more things change, the more they stay the same....
  5. Loved this song!!!!
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    Chapter 30

    And the final curtain is about to drop, two resupply convoys failed to reach Louis. On land broken, at Sandwich and Dover, his formidable forces wither daily, not only through attrition, but desertion… The size of his “English” kingdom is reduced to a starving London proper. With nowhere to turn or run to, all he can do is sue for the best terms he can get. All that is left is for Louis to tuck his tail between his legs and slink back to France.
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    Willpower

    Something is going to hit the fan…and offer explanations
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    Chapter 7

    Gremlin seems to operate on Mickey logic….
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    Chapter 7

  10. Blaise is gone, Brittany is acting true to form, and a mini plethora of babies is coming. Regarding Dante, Frank observation is spot on, and I sensed a slight improvement between the two. Dante, yo do have a problem….
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    Uncle Edwin

    And the subplot comes to the fore…only one of the units in the building is owned outright. What machinations are afoot in terms of the building?
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    Chapter 19

    Once again Danilo demonstrates wisdom far beyond his station.
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    Chapter 19

    The system continues with or without compliance…grinding the rough edges smooth.
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    Chapter 1

    Like diamonds that are forged as a result of incredible pressure, Julian, Steven, and Lloyd have gone from boys to assets to be proud of. Not forgetting Wylan! It is widely known that the hottest fires are needed to temper the finest steel. We see the same with the situations all four have faced and have been through.
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    Prologue

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    Prologue

    You still owe me an autograph!!!!! I have done gone and purchased....as a note...When I clicked to read a sample, there were 774 pages available to read....
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    Prologue

    Rashid needs to face the the consequences of his actions in the most revealing and brutal manner…slowly… I’m standing by an earlier comment, Ishan…the girl boy who became Sultan…..
  18. What an eclectic collection of misfits, and finding the killer among them. Every one, including the sun king with his virginal backside is a suspect… ATM I can’t rule him out either…
  19. Oh my goodness….those rooms, was that a horse or a cow I saw?
  20. Spirit Court…kinda like Santa’s naughty or nice list….
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    Chapter 10

    What’s the cause for this rage, and I hope Renn suffers mightily. Dizziness washed over him. Renn tried to wriggle out from under the foul‑smelling man, but he couldn't. Footsteps approached. Just as his consciousness began to fade, he heard someone speak: "Iih, make it in time. You help Wryyt, young Dimali still breathe." I’m liking Soek more and more…
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    Chapter 12

    The night watch is all but gone, creating opportunities for all sorts of of trouble…that the gangs ringleader is a woman, suggests @CincyKris is on to something. She may resent being “stuck” in this sleepy backwater….
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    Chapter 7

    Well this is a new wrinkle…will,they go to the mountains?
  24. Can/will the police squeeze these thugs harder? There is a trail there, can they follow it? “They have admitted they were hired.” The word landed without drama, which somehow made it heavier. “Hired how?” “Cash payments through intermediaries. Burner phones. They were given your description, your usual route, and the time you typically passed through that area.”
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