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Chapter 23: The Shuttle Crash Episode
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 23: The Shuttle Crash Episode
Tweek, a beautiful blooming idiot, and Kudos to Doc and sterilized copper wire!!! Hopefully they can replicate a new pillow.... -
Xavier is one angry young man, I'd almost say unhinged...
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Ok now, what do we have here???
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What will the morning bring... He didn’t know what tomorrow would bring when he returned to the village. But in this moment, with Tom’s steady breathing above him and the taste of pleasure still on his lips, Karl let himself believe that maybe the trails ahead could lead somewhere new. Somewhere free.
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Be careful for what you wish for, especially in graveyards....
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Chapter 3: THE AMISH MENACE
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 3: THE AMISH MENACE
Really now... "More shoes, to replace the ones in the Mercedes. Which is currently wrapped around a tree on the side of the freeway, on fire. So yes. You owe me shoes." He paused and looked Flynn up and down. “You’re going to fuck me later, wearing this… I always wanted to be done by an Amish boy.” -
I found the following interesting as it is the second time in the past two chapters that, for lack of better words, "knowing one's place" has been stressed...do these pretentious twits really think they are going to be the ones to rule the world? A township, a county, a state, perhaps, but there are much bigger fish than they and their families out there... And was Bastien saying he knows his place is under the peasant, Lawrence??? Ali sauntered over to them. “Bastien, tell me you didn’t,” he said with a grin. “What is the Veridien motto, Ali?” Bastien asked, his tone mocking yet pleased. “There are just so many. I have no idea.” “Know your place; it has already been chosen for you,” Bastien said breezily.
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The accidental bump with the hired help is too much of a coincidence in terms of losing the photo...how long was the photo in his pocket, and who would have had access during that time... As to Ali...Right.......sure...whatever you say... Ali grimaced and squinted. “Really? Is masturbation a common practice in such institutions of law and order?” “Isn’t it here?” “Here,” Ali said, squaring his shoulders, “sublimation of desire is the ultimate goal.” “Interesting. Not everyone appears to be a staunch supporter of such views, however.” “I am quite the staunch supporter,” Ali cared to emphasize.
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Just because I can remember the halcyon days of the late 1960's doesn't mean I have an appreciation for paisley or shag carpeting...The chair however, reminds me of several wayward nights in my misspent youth...
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Like I said @Summerabbacat, I am an unabashed lover of museums...and yes, fine, antique furniture can do that to me...
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That was a sudden turn of events, and Patrick needs to stop cutting himself....
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When I had a chance to go to London, right around the corner from my hotel was the Wallace. I am an unabashed museum junkie...I've now been 3 times and each time I go back to the Wallace. Their collection of armor is simply world class. While I am not much into that sort of thing, panting and furniture simply astounds me...Furniture excites me, the craftmanship before power tools and the portrate of Rembrandt's son is spectacular... I laughed. “The things teenage boys do!” “Got it. So at some point, Ma and I are at the Wallace Collection—”
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Chapter 22: The Last of His Kind Episode
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 22: The Last of His Kind Episode
Pampers for 30...quite the tall order... The crew of the Zodiac has once again pulled off the nearly impossible...now the real work begins... -
I can't recommend this highly enough, I don't wish to give anything away other than to say...give this a chance!!
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Thank you for this, an unbelievable but very plausible ending...this story captivated me from beginning to end. If the muse should ever strike you again, it would be wonderful to peek in on the two of them again, not forgetting Titus. This was an amazing story, well told and very captivating. He had spent a great deal to be a man who could kneel here honestly. His standing among his own people, thinned but not broken. Some part of his cousin's trust, spent on an argument he'd made once at the wreck of a column and had never fully explained since. Whatever ease he might once have expected to feel again around Berulf, or the men who listened when Berulf spoke. He did not regret any of it, sitting here. He had checked, more than once, for the regret, the way a man checks a wound to see if it's finally stopped troubling him, and had found, each time, only the plain fact that he would spend all of it again without hesitation, and did not know, some evenings, whether that was faith or simply the shape love had decided to take in him. Thank you for this!
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This also concerns me as well!
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Chapter 2-Homecoming
drsawzall commented on Sherye Story Reader's story chapter in Chapter 2-Homecoming
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My goodness…are there bets on how long the curtain rises on these two dunderheads? Ben slowly covered his face with both hands. "Oh, this season is going to be incredible."
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The Furnishings of Staying
drsawzall commented on Kevin Snell's story chapter in The Furnishings of Staying
Is it right yet…a powerful comment…although I wonder why they stayed cooped up…. -
Still Standing in a Field
drsawzall commented on Kevin Snell's story chapter in Still Standing in a Field
Much the way Julien is building a lasting relationship...well done, what a great paragraph... The valley below the col was wide and farmed. Stone walls divided pastures where cattle stood in the stillness of animals who have nowhere to be. The walls were old. Dry stone, no mortar, built by hands that understood weight and balance and the angle at which one stone would hold another without help. Oliver looked at them as they descended and thought about the hands that had built them and it wasn’t sentimental. It was practical. Someone had understood how things hold together. Someone had placed each stone knowing that the wall would outlast the placing. -
The following was very telling and a metaphor for this slow burn of a relationship... “It’s an excuse,” Julien said. He turned to Oliver and his mouth moved into something that wasn’t quite the wide smile from Henri’s restaurant but was closer to it than anything Oliver had seen directed at him. “The truth is I’m afraid of heights.”
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Priceless... "Smile." We did. Click. The photographer frowned. "No." "What?" "You both look like you're attending separate funerals."
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Chapter 5. The Whole Clean Shape of It
drsawzall commented on Mark Paren's story chapter in Chapter 5. The Whole Clean Shape of It
A powerful and unsettling chapter, leaving us wanting to know more about Julien... -
Chapter 21: The Distress Call Episode.
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 21: The Distress Call Episode.
Some things never change and are universal..... "Is your shuttle climate-controlled?" one of the other girls asked, dusting off her ripped pants. "Because the environmental scrubbers on this ship failed an hour ago, and the humidity is ruining my hair." Who found the dimmer switch???? In the Observation Lounge, the lights were dialed low. In the crusty old crapboxes I drove, warp speed was 65MPH going downhill, watching the car floors get wider going around sharp corners, using old license plates for patching the floor, and the welder just up the street telling me every time I brought the old Volvo in, it was time to junk it; he was running out of good metal to weld to. The car had 230K miles on it when I got it, and I gladly drove it everywhere for four years....With the rear seats folded down and a foam pad, sheets, pillows, comforter, and the coolers tied to the roof racks, we'd do the New England Bluegrass circuit every summer, meeting up with corn fed farmboys...I'd wake up in the mornings, step out of the car, look at the number of beer bottle caps in the rain gutters to see what kind of night I had...god...those were the days! -
Look, there are icebergs ahead....
