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  1. And now for something completely different.... Danny has his work cut out for him convincing Elliot to truly go along with this and change his diet into something a bit less gassy....
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    Chapter 21

    Gasp... oh, the horrors...the freakiest twist ever....not as bad as bumping off a certain someone whose name won't be mentioned...tho it starts with a K....just sayin... I don't believe it...Miles and Owen running away together off into the sunset....who gets the cat hummm?
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    Chapter 21

    As I said, this can go so many different ways; right now, I am expecting just about anything....
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    Chapter 20

    I'm kind of disappointed with Troy, his relationship with Owen has hit a bit of a rough patch, they have set a date for a wedding, and I know much can happen between now and then. But as Troy says in chapter 18, he chose Owen and made a promise to him. “I don’t want separate paths. I’m looking forward to our future together.” Owen shushed me. “Promise me.” My heart did a weird little flip. I kissed him and whispered, “I promise.” Then there is the constant texting back and forth and the half-truths to Owen the day Troy and Miles went to the beach. Too many cross currents and purposes here: is Owen cheating, is Troy being less than truthful, and Miles and the cat...so many ways this can go...I'm simply...
  5. For a short story, this was phenomenal and very well done. It does beg another chapter or two, and yes...by itself it works as a standalone.
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    HD Chapter 9

    Thank you for this chapter. Like the others, I hope all is well with you and that you are taking time for yourself. We will be here if you decide to gift us with another story. Take care and be well.
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    Chapter 7

    Loved it!! So spot on...I'm waiting for the moment they start finishing each other's sentences... Nobody said a word. Even Eddie kept his mouth shut. For almost three whole seconds. Then, from the back row— "So..." He raised one hand. "...does this mean I get assists for marriage counselling?"
  8. Simply priceless!!! Loved this chapter!!!! Then, without taking a breath, Kidd began peppering both Bass and Jake with questions: “What breeds of dogs? Can we have hound dogs? Who’s going to run it? Can I help? Please, please, pretty please, I’ll take real good care of them. How many dogs? Where will they live?” Turning to Jake, Kidd continued, “Please, Jake, can I help? I worked at a kennel, my last job, and I did all the ordering; I cleaned the kennels, I taught all the dogs all kinds of tricks and did obedience training, and... and gave them baths and... and...”
  9. Oh boy, this is heating up....
  10. And the game is afoot…how well will the Texas be able to follow our intrepid hero’s? I can see a hit and run dogfight to the next or other relay stations. IF I were a betting man, I’d bypass the closest ones….but who knows what’s in store!! BTW….kudos to Lt Guy and Flip!
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    Chapter 6

    It will be interesting to see if they make the change to water sourced power, and beware of the snakes...the two legged kind...
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    Chapter 17

    I’m an optimist and believe we will see Sam again….fingers crossed.
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    Firelight

    The decision is becoming clearer: stay in a loveless relationship, or make the break for one's sanity...
  14. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Nothing will be the same when the storm passes. I vividly remember what Hurricane Helene did to North Carolina and surrounding areas was catastrophic...they are still recovering...
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    Chapter 6

    Simply brilliant, they are going to need a non-combustible space for when they finally do the deed....
  16. Brilliant....I was wondering how the captain's actual specialty was going to play into this story.... He stood up from the command chair and walked slowly, carefully toward the massive panoramic window. He stared out into the swirling, opaque gas. He wasn't looking at stars, or tactical overlays, or mathematical probabilities. He was doing the one thing he was genuinely, inherently, deeply trained to do. The one thing Karen had always mocked him for. He was reading the weather. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.....not the golf clubs.......... "Well," Doc rasped, breaking the heavy silence on the bridge. He pulled his unlit cigarette from his mouth, staring at the main viewscreen with an expression of profound, cynical awe. "And I thought my ex-wife was nuts when she took a set of golf clubs to my vintage Corvette... this woman is on a whole other level of unhinged!" They need to get a report to fleet HQ ASAP and protect First Officer Cole and the rest of those who followed...If they make it to testify and ship's logs confirm his account, she's toast...
  17. There must be a "Ken" nearby....
  18. In the hot, dry desert perhaps...
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    Chapter 26

    He nearly died trying to do his best in defending what he could, and this is what he comes home to... "I'm not asking you to confirm or deny an old mother's fancy. I only want you to hear me say this once, clearly, and then I'll leave it alone. Whatever that man was to you, however briefly, guard his name carefully in this city. His cousin has made himself the most hated man in Rome. Even old affection, spoken carelessly in the wrong company, could cost this family more than grief ever could. At least by going to Pompeii, he'll avoid the city's destruction, which won't happen for nearly seven decades. What will he make of himself there?
  20. These boys have it bad for each other. How long before the cat's out of the bag??
  21. Couldn't say it any better....
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    The Ridge

    And the other shoe is dropping... Maria had been distant that morning, complaining about his wet gear dripping on the floor when he returned. The argument was the same one wearing different clothes: he was checked out, she was tired, the house felt too small for both of them. He had left again after lunch with little more than a grunt. Reading this litany of complaints/feelings, I have to wonder if anything would ever be good enough for her.... A door is opening; here's hoping the path forward becomes clearer for Karl... Karl’s voice dropped to almost a whisper. “I think I’ve known for a long time. About myself. About men. But in a place like this… it’s easier to just keep riding. Keep pretending.”
  23. Part of the problem is River has it bad for Kai...and the son of a drunkard is a fu&%ing idiot for drinking.... Have we reached the bottom yet???
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    Chapter 1

    Sometimes the easiest path isn't to follow those with strident voices...to remember that thinking for oneself is worth the effort... So we must speak softer, choose calm over clamor, remember that peace is not weakness— it is courage in quiet form
  25. Kody is one hot mess. I can only imagine the 'fireworks' when he's getting naked in a darkened bedroom for the first time with a willing participant...the glow from his cheeks...get your mind out of the gutter, dear readers; I'm talking about the ones up top...afterwards...that's a whole nuther story... Been there and done that... I changed quickly, thinking briefly about trying out one of the new pairs of underwear, but decided to save them for a special occasion. Like, after a shower. And just what are you hiding there Kody???? Inquiring minds are a tad curious... For instance, I never buy Fruit of the Loom because of that FTL they put on them. It looks tacky, like a house brand cheap garment, or something made in a sweat shop. Not to mention they fit poorly. Let's just say things never stayed where I put them.
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