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All in the name of scientific research……
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Could it possibly happen????
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Time to start baking a cake…
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I would expect that the link between Ishan and Wylan is about to be renewed….
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He doesn’t have to admit he nuts about Flynn…it shows in every thing he does…. What are the odds ”wicked” makes an appearance at the gala? I’m figuring the odds are better than 50/50…any takers?
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Typical Bavarian Breakfast
drsawzall commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in Typical Bavarian Breakfast
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Perhaps they both need to share a bit of frosting….
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While I am sad there are only two chapters to go, I am delighted to know that we will see more of these boys. I think this is one of your best offerings yet. And good on Aled for setting his brother properly in his place. It must be difficult, this all consuming life on the farm. I couldn’t see Gwilym leaving, he’d be like a fish out of water.
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I have to believe that when the crusaders leave the town without lingering, the old trader will get the word out… Ride goat boys..ride! @drpaladin, pepper was a fantastic idea, surprised Seb did not know it’s use in this case!
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It was quite the jump from the end of the last chapter to nearly suffering the unkindest cut, and he may not be out of the woods just yet…and where is Isaac?
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Evan & final tinkering with Werther
drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Evan & final tinkering with Werther
Gossip, proven to be faster than the speed of sound... “I spoke to Mother and she agrees: Anne is being ridiculous. You might not mention the subject to your mum, but the news’ll get through.” “Jungle telegraph.” “‘Mothers’ telegraph’, more like. -
Let’ s hope Margot is a lesbian, otherwise Owen run to college and never come back… Love the setting of this storyline!
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I agree to the 3k to 5k chapter length…
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This was a very true to life chapter…. How can one experience true heartbreak without first learning what sorrow is? Rufus made a promise to his friend. He seems determined to keep it.
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I’ve been watching a storm chasers program on the Discovery channel and the videos of before, during, and after are hard to comprehend. Last night a huge tornado being filmed, showed revolving lights of a vehicle approximately a couple of hundred feet off the ground. That’s how close Ash and Taggert came to flying. I would have to agree with the following…
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So very true for an inspiring actor… “I’m so proud of you, Johnny. Every time you dare to dream bigger, you reinvent what’s possible. The most authentic stories come from the courage to face your own truth.”
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Chapter 2 High Drama on New Year’s Eve 1973
drsawzall commented on Gary L's story chapter in Chapter 2 High Drama on New Year’s Eve 1973
When it rains it pours….and be very careful Ximo, sins of omission have a nasty bite when brought to light. -
The situation also presents a neat solution to whom Zdain will be romantically involved with in the future..While I perish the thought, it is very possible that Ade is walking towards his death. With all the foreshadowing in this chapter, it has also created food for multiple red herrings.
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Humm… Something moved down there – a matte black shape, and Lawrence thought he glimpsed a metallic glint. Bubbles from his own nose blinded him. The sun was at its weakest here. He rolled so he could dive after his attacker, but his robe slid off his body, turning into a shroud around his head, cutting his momentum.
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Shayna, is a skunk hiding in the tall weeds…
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Well…it’s time to move on towards the north…will they be followed on the way out of town? it’s time to hear from Rhaelce’s point of view….
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Looks like they will need to be careful crossing the railroad tracks…
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Chapter 17 Boy Meets Love
drsawzall commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 17 Boy Meets Love
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Well…as grandpa always said, the proof is in the pudding, or something that looks like pudding…
