NickolasJames8

I cant wait for your anthology entry....I bet it's gonna rule. i sent mine off to Kitty already, but I was waiting for her to get back to me about a couple of parts I wasn't too sure about. I decided to be a little risky, and I wanted an honest and impartial opinion. So I hope she gets back to me soon... In the meanwhile, I hope you feel better, Camy. It's summer Maybe you can go surfing or something like that. I've been body surfing a lot lately because my bf's in Tennesse visiting his mom. It helps to keep my mind off of how bad I miss him

Ok, so I just started the story on Nifty and I finished chapter one.....I love it, Matt. I even have a soundtrack for it already (btw, only my absolute favorite stories get a soundtrack :ranger: :ranger: ) Thanks for writing it

Ok, so I just finished chapter one of it stays in Vegas, and the story's great I can't want to read chapter 2 (probably will when I'm done posting). I'm kinda wondering what's going to happen between Bob and Drew. I know what I think's gonna happen, but I wont say until I get to the next chapter. BTW, the pics of Bob and Drew are HOT!!!!!! BOB DREW

Ok, so I've been thinking a lot about this chapter, and I think Im ready to comment...... I'm glad it wasn't Toby who died, but I think we should be prepared for anything, and he's still sick, and it might still happen. Of course, at any time, any of the characters could die (except for Connor because he's obviously the one telling the story). But I was actually dissapointed that it was Mikey, and not because he was one of my favorite characters. I was kinda dissapointed because I thought that maybe more could have been done with his story. Maybe LB could've given Mikey his own story about his struggle with his rents. But oh well. I still thought this chapter was great. One of the things I noticed was what someone else had said about Connor being so strong and trying to be there for everyone. I think it's great because he probably always had that trait, like how he used to make sure he paid the bills somehow when he lived with the maniac (his "mother") and made sure that the important things were done. It was his way of being there for his "mother" and trying to make things okay for her and himself. I think Ryan's definitely dealing with the guilt of not being there for Mikey. His best friend was suffering, and all he could do was shrug and say things were going to work out. I'm sure he wishes he could go back and change the fact that he wasn't there for him, and I bet he wishes he could go back and be there for Toby too. I think that he knows now that Connor was right when they had that bad fight. As far as the songs and stuff go, I have to confess that I don't really pay a lot of attention to them. I think that the story's great by itself, and there's a bunch of the songs I've never even heard of (about 75%), but I plan to download them and listen anyway while I read the story again. So anyway, here's my predictions for the next chapter....... 1) Ryan get's worse, then he has a total nervous breakdown. 2) Connor is there for him, and he's still there for Toby and everyone else too, and the stress of it all starts to get to him too 3) Tatyanna slaps Connor again 4) Cody and Dominic hook up 5) Maggie takes time off work to be there for Toby and Ryan 6) Connor has his own nervous breakdown at some point (maybe not in the next chapter, but soon) BTW, is the guy who wrote that one somg the same Burt Bacharack from Austin Powers?????

Never seen Blade and Inconvient Truth looks pretty wack... at least to me The person below me has a raibow sticker displayed prominently somewhere

This is the script that made me a star

Too late.....I've been reading his stories since the first time he emailed me about my story on CRVboy Congrats Jack. You're a really good writer and I know everyone's gonna love you

um...I thought Cody was shorter than Connor though....maybe not....guess I have to go back and read the whole story again to find out for sure

OK, so lately I've been kind of a you tube junky..lol. I love going there and watching cifferent vids...so, here's one I found that cracked me up. Man I was thirsty....I thought you were gay . Check it out. Not much to talk about right now. Im just enjoying not having to be up at 5 in the morning for anything

HAPPY BIRTHDAY VIV!!!!!!!!

But I love you BTW, I never kiss ass......Oh wait, sometimes I might, but not in the way your talking about

I wonder why I wonder at all. I wonder why I am inclined to ask questions, to sometimes go against the grain, and to insist on being my own person when so many things in life suggest that I should simply conform to the majority. Therefore, I wonder if there is even a red or blue at all, and why I would so easily accept that those colours and their respective classifications actually exist and find it so hard to belive that there is some place of wonder that exists on the other side of a bridge comprised of those two and several other colours whose existence I also accept. I wonder if its my ability and desire to wonder that keeps me wondering and prevents me from so easily folding on so many issues. I don't think I exist because I think, because I'm sure that many of us can attest to the existence of many a thoughtless person. Indeed, the world may be a better place if those people simply ceased to exist because of their thoughtlessness, but that does not appear to be the case. I think therefore I am thoughtful.

He was an actress....... The person below me has been bitten my a horse

Maybe in real life, but to me he's a character in a story, and I like to add my own past that the author doesnt...ie, Ryan kiddnapping Connors mom and giving her a mind altering drug to make her his assasine). I think about something that hasnt happened in the story and twist it around to fit my own twisted plot line Anyway, I'm glad you agree with me about LB though, because he really does rule

I just wanted to publicly thank Little BuddhaTW for writing Someday Out of the Blue. No matter what happens, no matter who (if anyone) dies, I want David to know that he'll always be one of my favorite writers, and trust me, that's a short list. I love every character, and I love the way the story has gone. I know I get mad about the way Ryan act's, but Ryan's just a character and I think it says something about David that he can make a totally loveable person become dispicable(in my opinion) and selfish so smoothly. I think Little Buddha deserves mad love for writing a realistic and beautiful story for all of us to enjoy. So anyway, Thanks LB

Argh.......everyone has to stop saying that Toby's going to survive or he'll kill him off....I have a bad feeling about it. Actually, I kinda hope he doesnt read the threads anymore until the story's over so he doesnt do something crazy like have Toby die or make Connor and Ryan stay together even after Ryan starts hitting Connor

Thats because the heffer's crazy, and so is her whole sick family

Maybe it's Trent Mc Lomax. Maybe he's so ashamed of catching a beat down by a gayboi that he can't face anyone, so he takes himself out That would be pretty traumatic for Connor too

That's me (especially a hawaiian vegi...yummy!!! ) The person below me wants to see Dubya leave Laura on the Jerry Springer show for Kevin (aff)

lol....not just words....vowels and consonants If only I could

Im psycic(did I spell that right??...lol). I can say for sure that I know whats in the next chapter :2hands: :2hands:

I can tell you for sure what's in the next chapter

I already know whats going to be in the next chapter

You're so gay....that's why I love you

Ok, so I finally resigned myself to the fact that I was going to have to submit the story, My Jump Off, to Nifty. Well, I felt really bad about it the first day and into the the next day. But then, something funny happened........the first thing I noticed was that I had 200 hits on my page that werent there before. The second thing that happened was that I noticed I had moved back into spot 26 on the Top Site List here at GA. The third thing that happened was that I noticed my inbox was full. Then I noticed that I had moved passed everyone in The Ten's at Efiction and was ranked #1 in a certain spot(I dont like to brag so I wont say what it is), then I noticed that I moved into #2 on the most reviewed stories list in the same ranking. On top of that, I just saw this morning that I moved up another spot to #25 on the top site. Oh, yeah, my inbox was full of feedback too. I just got done sending in chapter 3 to Nifty, and I'm also working on chapter 7 as we speak So what does all of this mean??? I'm not sure yet, but I think it means I got some good advice about Nifty. I dont think Im going to send in What's the Difference Between Me and You?? though, because I dont think it's the kind of story you read at Nifty. But it's cool to know that people liked my stuff BTW, school's out now so Im gonna be working more. My boss said she can let me work up to 32 hours a week if I want it. I might since we're going on vacation and I want to have extra money of my own to blow. But I promise to also pick up the pace on my writing between now and September:)