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You are more than welcome Cia. I really loved the story and I hope that people take the time to explore your little jewel.

So a sexy vampire, a cute dog, a horny night of incredible sex. We learn a lot in this chapter. I feel bad for Mike. His family treats him like trash but at leas he has Alley and her family to fall back on. I love Bob. I don't know why but his name just strikes me as funny and then of course there is Adam. Can't wait for the rest.

I like it. You give us a clear sense of the place and characters. I think we have all had the experience of dealing with a teacher or boss who just won't let us be. Can't wait to see where you take this.

Another vote for an elf. Hmm. Well, you will know the answer shortly.

Interesting take on the prompt Andy. Loring might be the virgin birth and all, but he is a great departure from the Village of the Damned. Here there is only one child and the others aren't afraid of him. I hope you decide to expand this. Wonder what else is going on here.

Just so you know, all women have balls. I lie to you not. Two as a matter of fact. They are called the balls of their feet. Otherwise good luck with your writing.

Sounds like you have a lot of plans for yourself and are already off to a good start. Wish you luck.

Humans are creatures of sight, and rarely mind. As they say you never get a second chance to make a good first impression. I've said this before and will again, it is hard enough figuring out where you are on the straight, bi, gay scale. Having to deal with the fact that you were born in the wrong body adds another whole level that people can't always get over. I know someone who has transitioned and I know as Tammy. For me, it might be easier because she has always been Tammy to me, but there are people who knew Anthony before he began to make her outside and inside match. She still deals with people calling her him. Life is a learning experience. All you can do is be patient. Hopefully, the worst you will deal with is someone trying to be well meaning and not outright disgust and no understanding. I wish you all the best.

An elf seems to be the popular idea here. Well all the cards are laid out next chapter and we will see what happens. Thanks for the review Gene.

Aww. I'm glad you are enjoying it knotme. Maybe I can entice you to read the next tale then. Something a bit different again. But let me know what you think of the ending next week.

Tall good looking men from all over the world. Hmm. Yes, they just do sort of fit in anywhere don't they.

Vampires? Mafia? A secret experiment? My, such turns for a Christmas story. I'll have to keep those in mind next time I do a tale like this.

So many veiled ideas but few willing to commit before the end. Glad you are enjoying the story. The ending is but one chapter away.

I'm glad you are enjoying it Suvitar. Wondering how close you will be with one chapter left to go.

I always try fill the worlds I create with the types of people I know. It helps me when I write knowing the type of person they are. Here is hoping you enjoy the conclusion next week.

Okay so on to Chapter four.

4 Frank wasn’t in the best of moods. It was two days till Christmas and he was dealing with a lot of different feelings. This was when Peter had packed up and left last year. Two days before the holiday with no real notice. At the time he, just went numb, and Catherine had done the best she could to keep him moving and alive. Now, she was just driving him nuts. “So you still haven’t told me about the dinner! I want details.” “Would you stop? We had dinner for Christ’s sake.” “And?” Catherine

A group of college friends is all they are, knotme. I have a slightly different path for Mr. Max.

Never look a gift horse in the mouth. In this case I have a bit more to tell so next tale should do it. lol

Well you might consider this a two part prompt tale. Figure to continue it with the next prompt story.

Hey at least a lot of both promising and signature are posting. Hopefully people are enjoying all the work going out.

The first thing I noticed was the noise. It had been a long time since I had dared to enter a mall. Crowds were foreign to me now that I lived so far out in the country. I really would have run for the door if I hadn’t spotted Chrissy and Matthew standing by the food court. “There you are,” Chrissy enthused as she wrapped her arms around me. “I thought for sure you were lost.” “Glad you made it, Max. It’s been nearly a year since you came into town.” Matthew shook my hand and smiled. “Well, s

Aw, Jo. You know we love you too.

Ah the ah, the first to offer their guess. Time will tell. Glad you are enjoying the story.

A ring and a collar? Owned much? Lol