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Surprises all around. This is still mystifying to me, but I like it.
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Mysteries abound in this story, but I really like the idea. I don't know anything about revenanats. Never heard about them until now. He seems like an affectionate little creature though. I hope he wakes up soon, before the bad guys come calling.
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Dan's mind is a remarkable thing. His thought about being made into soup has me grinning. I can always do with a laugh. Teen minds are weird, -full of angst and insecurity, with big dollops of insecure hyper self-analysis. I find your version refreshing, fun.
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Passion! -Or grudge? Six years is a lot of time to stew. Will it be all roses and long, lingering loooks from now on? Something tells me no. The night is still young... and there's the awful rumor, and the body in the meat locker. I'm enjoying this story, -it's fun.
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Sad, terribly, ironically sad. Death often is so. I'll miss her. This story never lacks emotion.
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I love this. The thought of parents putting their child through that ordeal makes me angry. And the reason why makes me even angrier! Political whores! -The worst of them all because they commit those crimes for the sake of appearance and to further their position. Logan, man of action, responds the way that any person with a good heart and soul would do. It's hard to put a good man down. I think the parents will try, however.
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EEWWW! Grizzly funky men slicing up people! The case is solved, but will we see more of Adam and Steve? Thanks for the enertaining story.
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The case may have gone cold for the moment, but Adam & Steve seem to be warming up.
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They have an Aztec obsidian knife? Those are so rare that they are priceless. So somebody doesn't care. Then I'm thinking it is a message, and not about money. Kind of mafia-esque delivery too.
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I love a good murder mystery, and this one has a few pet interests. Adam & Steve! An antique mafia? Is there really such a thing? I ask only because the antique dealers I know (more than a few) are typically an independent bunch, who tend to be a doggedly elusive bunch. Mafia sounds too organised for them, but then again , if it's a secret society, it might work...I'm just having fun here, -and enjoying this story.
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Crazy wild story, I like it! Mr. Immortal gets bit by the love bug.
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Having Jo narrate this chapter was a nice touch, it gives us a chance to get to know him, and all his benevolent kindness. He's not just a stereotype either, but a truly warm and kind person. It's too bad his mother-in-law refuses to see it. Gunni's very forunate to have such support. 29 and holding, HA! I wish him luck with that.
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There's a lot of love for Hugh in his brother's family. Toby is a bundle of energy, as little kids are at that age (3?). He adores his 'Unca Hoo'. The tone of the story seems to match Hugh's own demeanor: guarded, calm on the surface but with turbulence underneath. I'm drawn to this character, his suffering, and mostly his gentle kindness.
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This is an interesting story. At first I didn't like Nate at all, thinking that he's just some incredibly stupid punklet that would probably be no good to anyone, -himself included. Then as the story advances, he starts to have some redeeming qualities, and Jeff has the key to unlock the real person inside the dumbass. So now I'm curious to see where all this will go. So I'll be looking for the next chapter.
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Castiel has a bad day at work, indeed! I like this, so bring it on.
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Ring Ring + Mom = Total Buzzkill! Ha! Poor Ryan,-will he ever get a break?
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Logan's a Houston fan? Are we in Texas?
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Strange things happen in that mountain. I'm glad to have some background on the Darkness, and meet Antios and the real Phino-e. My heart goes out to Matty. Such love and devotion. He's a true hero, and I think Sam will know that now. Sam needs to take good care of him.
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Chapter 30 How Can I Leave You Now
Stephen commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 30 How Can I Leave You Now
Pasha's going to have to watch those wings, -they're like weapons in the parlor! I'm glad to see that he got to say goodbye to Luke and his wife. So now he's off, -but to what? -
Last surprise of the night
Stephen commented on sacredlove's story chapter in Last surprise of the night
Zune must feel like he's just been through a tornado. At least Kevin was there to cuddle up our shock victim. Poor Zune, what an overload! And then there's Uncle Matt, -who's his daddy! I'd be inclined to stay in bed for a week. -
Things look bleak for Trevor and Shane. With the sharks circling, how are they even going to get to Lisa & Joel without a confrontation? They're way outgunned, outnumbered...everything. In the middle of a hurricane too. A category 5 storm. You do like a challenge, don't you?
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This was an emotional tale, sad, but also sweet. Jesse's life had surely has had some extremes. He had the love of his mother, and an opportunity to enjoy horses that he has a special gift with. It's a shame he didn't do better with school and the bullies, and an asshole stepfather ,but he did make one friend. Then to have it all taken away from him and find himself alone and homeless at 15. I imagine we'll see more of him when he comes into Zak & Friends' orbit.
