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Intriguing story, tense and tight. I like the plot and the style. I have to say that I hate the modern corporate world also, so I'm all for the harlequins. I'm sad about Jon though, losing his mother and his life with her. She seemed like a good person, just trying to make it. I'll keep an eye open to see what comes next.
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Chapter 4 - Confessing the Secrets You've Nurtured
Stephen commented on Enpassant's story chapter in Chapter 4 - Confessing the Secrets You've Nurtured
Whew! What a relief it is for Mark to be able to open up to his friends. Now I'm worried about him falling for Adam, -who may not feel the same way. It would seem to be too easy if he did. It's all so much so fast, so I worry about any new setback in Mark's life at the moment. I loved the little diary scene. Did I say I liked this guy or what? -
I just found this story, and I like it. The characters are fun, and I enjoy getting to know about the four diverse friends. Each of them brings something different to the table, which is nice. Edward seems to be an unhappy person, I hope we find out why in the next chapter. The school fire scene was done well, with an intensity that got my attention. Then suddenly we have a different Edward? -Or do we? I look forward to finding out.
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'At a boy Uzzi, go get 'em! I'm ready to see a few feathers fly! Gabe is such a conceited bitch, and Mikey's just plain bad! I'm enjoying this, even if it is in small bites.
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Sweet, sad, touching story. What a lovely gift! Thank you!
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Chapter 3 - Questions and Answers
Stephen commented on Enpassant's story chapter in Chapter 3 - Questions and Answers
I like the sensitive way Mark's story is presented. The scenario isn't uncommon, but Mark's personality, and character are portrayed well. I like him, he seems like a rational, nice person who happens to be going through a really bad time. So far his family situation looks hopeless, but luckily he has Leslie and her family to help out. He also has a job and a place to stay. Maybe a romantic prospect as well. More than anything else I like Mark. He seems to be somebody I'd like in real life, and his plight has captured my interest. -
I'm as curious as anyone about the mysterious prisoner. He must be important to the Spanish for them to refuse to surrender him to the English. The poor man had a lucky day indeed.
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I'd just thought about this story the other day, and then this chapter appears. So I'm calling it perfectly timed. Keep your own schedule, I'm happy to see each chapter, whenever it comes. Lucere is a special place in the universe, -an enigma. It seems that the more we find out, the less we really know. There is the present turmoil, and now we are shown a tiny bit of the story from two centuries before. This place is a template for human trauma and suffering. Chaos caused by some sort of organized grid, -what a freaky idea! Is this planet a giant board game? I love this story.
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I'd be a total nervous wreck if I was Gunni. How will all those seasoned musicians react to a sixteen year old boy genius? And Siggi is so negative on a good day. Send out the storm advisory.
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A wrinkly old aubergine~! Farting holiness? Poor Claude's warnings fall on deaf ears as always. So painfully misunderstood, even by his own self, will he be cursed to forever cry wolf as the dovecote burns? Will he save himself, let alone the villagers. Or is he doomed to the cabbage patch, or worse?
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It seems Sabrine is honing her skills as a shepherdess.
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And the story ends, but it's only the beginning for these boys I'm sure. Thanks for taking us along for the ride, -it's been fun. I'll miss it, but I'm glad you shared this story with us, it's a real treasure.
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This is a romantic and positive chapter. It is nice to see Alexi in an open, unburdened situation. He's so much more alive without all the lead weight of responsibilities and expectations. He's been so oppressed with everything that I was beginning to think his existence was toxic, and the poison was winning. Glad to find that things are changing for the better.
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Great chapter, I needed a Max fix today. I'm an addict now and need a regular supply.
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What a party! Unforgettable for Zak, but also for everyone there. Max is simply adorable, and now we have another special friend. I'm happy to have been there too, even as a fly on the wall.
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Chapter 18 Don't Leave Me
Stephen commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 18 Don't Leave Me
Curious, so now it looks like Pasha is a pawn, and what's all the fuss about anyway? These angels aren't very subtle creatures. Will Pasha wake up in heaven or hell? -
It looks like Spin has found his horse. Revanche may have met his match. I hope so. If he has enough spirit, he may do. Maybe they'll keep each other in control. The horse can give Spin a little love nip on the ass every now & then.
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What different personalities these two narrators have. Gunni is sweet and self conscious, and Siggi is brash, over confident, and grumpy. It makes sense that they'd be attracted to each other, but can it work out? I like the setting being in Iceland. I know nothing about that place.
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The boys' interactions are a joy to read, and even Herc may have a new friend. This is a very upbeat chapter, and leading up to the moment when Spin finds his new horse. I'm really curious about what kind of horse would work well with him. One with a lot of spirit and personality for sure, and some kind of a challenge. I'm sure he's up for that. Probably with a sense of humor.
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This is a neat story, I loved the ending. I'm glad I read it. Life is full of surprises. Thanks for this one.
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Well, this chapter left things somewhat on the edge. I want a full report in the next chapter. It was going too smoothly, I suppose...
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I'm glad the boys didn't have problems with Spin's visit, and actually enjoyed it. They show remarkable restraint and maturity, -and love. I regret not having more fun on horseback when I was young, and will make every effort to change that if given the opportunity again. Another lovely and pictoral chapter. Thanks.
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Heaven help the boys, the horses, and the fishes once Spin gets hold of the jet ski! I know a family of hyper redheads, and can't even seriously consider any one of them camping. Call FEMA now!
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...Just when things were going so well! Summer's only begun and it's really heating up, but not as forcasted.
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We find out about Dusty's past, and how seeing himself reflected in an animal caused him to change, and that saved him. Now the boys'll get to witness another miracle.
