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A nice, -if short, chapter. At last Uzzi'el shows that he does possess a backbone! I don't understand the power exchange from Pasha to Uzzi, but that will come later, I'm sure. And Gabe? Looks like he's an overconfident, self-important ass, and too vain to know it. Or maybe he's just another politician?
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It's safe to say that Gonzales knows that Bridget's back, and badder than ever. I'm glad for that, since the boys left the protection of his family. I wonder if the boys'll get to stop in Tahiti to talk with Trevor's old partner? I think the FBI's not bothering to find out that bruja is always female is apalling, but totally funny too.
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What a difference a day makes. These two guys are so good for each other, and this story jut flows so naturally. Thanks, I really needed the smiles.
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Epilogues and New Beginnings
Stephen commented on Mann Ramblings's story chapter in Epilogues and New Beginnings
A fine ending to a great story. You wove in so much emotion to this tale that I've become attached to the three guys, and I'll miss them. You have a wonderful talent, thank you so much for sharing it.. -
What tension, and after such a lovely scene at the beginning. The contrast made it all so much more vivid. And then it all ends with suspense. A big red flash! You are wicked!
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This is a fabulous chapter, starting with the shy moment and doubts, then on to the most romantic scene on horseback ever. Then later, we have a true bond starting, and all written beautifully. A pleasure to read. Thanks.
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Uzzi's standing up for his mate, I like it. It may not be the best thing or it might be. It's nice to see he's got a backbone though....and what's going on downstairs?
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Well, I think the veil has fallen in this chapter.
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What a nice beginning. I like this story, and it's well written. I look froward to seeing how the adventure unfolds.
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Of course we knew the confrontation was coming. The big guns from accross the sea, and then the blonde barbie from hell,-she was a surprise. Adrian's in big trouble, he's such a parasite. He knows he did wrong, and he'll try to keep stringing Alexi along with his lies. I hope things will work out with Joshua, he's such a good man, and just what Alexi needs. But I see drama on the horizon...it won't likely be easy for anyone.
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A nice opening, you have a lovely writing style that caught my interest. -But then, I do like pies, so I'm biased.
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So now we have a bit more information. Uzzi'el has interesting friends. Amnesia and then dropped into a crisis. Poor angel?! I like the tension and the way it's building up like a spring almost sprung.
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Granger's special appeal is as a character who, even in tedious situations, can rise above the ordinary man. Many great leaders are known for their ability to triumph in conflict and adversity. Few do as well facing minor or peripheral situations like the ones in this chapter. These kind are the ones that can try the patience of a saint, and cause most people to lose control, and act unwisely. Not George Grainger. It's no wonder that he has so many admirers, and perhaps some enemies. Envy breeds contempt. The Crossing of the Equator detail was a joy to read, as is the whole story. Thanks.
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Things were bad before, and now they're even worse. I wonder where this story will go next. Just now, it's hell, and I can't see anything but misery ahead for LM. It's all so sad. Most people would be permanently scarred from this. Such traumas change people, even if they recover, they are never the same afterward.
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If the cloud is photosynthetic, could it be after our carbon dioxide? I'm enjoying the speculation.
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A big green blob headed for Earth at near light speed, eh? Is it coming to say hello? I bet not. Maybe it's just lonely,...or hungry.
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What a trip! The different but basic distinction that humans and dolphins have about approaching Earth: we focus on land masses, dolphins on the oceans. I never have thought of it that way. Thanks for that, -and the rest, of course.
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I'm so glad you didn't blow up the Kookaburra. Greg Fowler is amazing, setting up that deception. It'll raise Bridget's blood pressure a bit when she finds out, especially after paying Gray so much for failure. Great chapter.
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I've been waiting for this for a while, -the last couple of chapters at least. So Eric found out and has taken the news badly. Maybe he's right about Ogre being the wrong man for Clay, but then who ever knows about the future of a relationship? We can only wonder, and wait.
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This is an amazing story. A wild ride through an emotional vortex. And then you set us down calmly, like tornados sometimes strangely do, -a little dinged up, but with hope of recovery.
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Chapter 13 - Something Comes
Stephen commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 13 - Something Comes
I love birds. What a fabulous sex scene! -love those too. Only when they're good, like this one. -
Adrian's in trouble, or maybe not so much. Alexi may block the legal action that his family may want to pursue, but it will probably mean the end of their friendship either way. Just as well, because it's really over anyway, and best get it done officially. There's too much pain no matter what. This is a nice interlude, but hurry and bring Blue Eyes back soon, before Alexi loses his muse.
