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Chapter 13 - Something Comes
Stephen commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 13 - Something Comes
I love birds. What a fabulous sex scene! -love those too. Only when they're good, like this one. -
Adrian's in trouble, or maybe not so much. Alexi may block the legal action that his family may want to pursue, but it will probably mean the end of their friendship either way. Just as well, because it's really over anyway, and best get it done officially. There's too much pain no matter what. This is a nice interlude, but hurry and bring Blue Eyes back soon, before Alexi loses his muse.
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I was worried when I saw the name of this chapter, worried about more deaths, -but they didn't happen, and now the anticipation is even worse. Worse than a cliffhanger!
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A brutal tale, beautiful in it's honesty. And yes, it is the world we live in. Thank you.
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Sexy. ...and what nerve you have to leaving things on the edge like that!
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The third kiss was the charm. So now they're in it together, whatever comes. I like the mystery.
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Pasha gets busted by an Angel. This makes me think of the movie Barbarella. I had a crush on Pygar.
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I'm re-reading this story. Starting over, I want to say that I really like this first chapter, how it grabs you and pulls you in. Ho-hum, just riding in a car in the booring countryside, and WHAM!
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It is so nice to read a new chapter of this story. Jordan's sensitivity is as appealing as ever, as he goes from one scene to the next. I love the way you put his observations into every little moment, like when he hardly recognizes his own smiling face in the mirror. Little details like that make this story a joy to read.
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I feel a perfect storm brewing on the horizon, headed right at the Atlantis. Here's Rachel and the Kookaburra, Moorcroft ready to drop his bomb, Bridget unaccounted for,-never a good thing, and Gray looming up in the hills... At least Shane has some good allies. He'll need them. The Crocs are waiting. So am I.
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No, I didn't think you'd really kill Mira, and I'm glad you didn't. He is Mira, after all! He and Shay are a unit, and one that will prevail. This chapter is a remarkable capture of single-minded perseverence. Bravo SuperMira!
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I'm happy to see Ogre's back, but I was impressed and surprised at the new dynamic. It was by no means a Grudge F-. ...Well, just maybe with just a little grin, or snarl. I think Eric would be envious if he knew. Or does he?
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I have a soft spot for fairy tales and parables. Magda of Gavadia, she got back what she gave, and therefore all's well in the kingdom. Thanks for the romp through the castle, -spiders, bats and snakes.
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I started reading this story in late July, and am now caught up to the current chapter. It seems that all parties have their own plans, and I wonder how the publication of Bridget's asset list by Kent Moorcroft will affect the situation. If Bridget sees that some of her dear late husband's information has surfaced, maybe she'll lose a bit of that legendary calm and make a mistake? -and don't you dare stop writing!
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A shock! Now we wait for more of the unexpected, no doubt it will be just that.
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I couldn't hate you, I hate having to wait to find out what surprise you have coming up. I don't imagine that it will disappoint.
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And they're off! I love the trio & Sonic more with each chapter. And now on to Earth in a comet! I hope this fools K74. What if it doesn't?
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This seems to be a decisive chapter. The problems are all set out before us as challenges or obstacles to overcome. I enjoyed the romantic dinner scene. I'm surprised that Lily is afraid of Alexi's ill-named mother. Allegra! -HA! She sounds like a distrustful, controlling tyrant. Alexi will need to set up some boundaries, he isn't a child anymore. Will he be strong enough to ditch Adrian , and the family obligations? All that dead weight that stifles him. Is he up for the challenge?
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New love can be such a bitch. We have a fine example of that here, with all the conflicting emotions and insecurities laid out in vivid detail. Then the bitter reality hits hard, and there's nobody to talk to about it. Poor LM. What agony!
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What an interesting style you write in. I actually like the writing, but I'm lost in all the names, and am confused about who's who. I need more information. I like our hero's attitude, he finally becomes a sympathetic character the end, and cries, something he does not do often do, I imagine. It's saddest to me when the tough, resiliant ones break down.
