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  1. Aditus

    Clean Cut

    Sometimes Jonah needs to be symbolic, see it every day in the mirror to believe it.Thank you Lisa.
  2. Aditus

    Clean Cut

    Yeah, we're one. He behaves like he does and I report it. Jonah is a very stubborn man. And he's hurt. Never good.Thank you for commenting LitLover, even you we're killing you.
  3. Aditus

    Clean Cut

    And again Gary: I am very sorry. I hope you can endure some more chapters with us.Thank you!
  4. Aditus

    Clean Cut

    LOL. Nope. He is the spontaneous kind of guy. Thank you Chezakeeba.
  5. Aditus

    Clean Cut

    You know cooks and their precious knifes. And he would never do that.Thanks, Irri!
  6. I had the feeling Rob wanted to high-five me and shout ‘YES!’, but fortunately he restrained himself. OMG, Rob must be sick or something! Seriously though, just reading about this parent meeting made me cringe.
  7. Aditus

    Clean Cut

    I smelled coffee. Hmm…and somebody was running his fingers through my hair. "Ren…" "Um..." "Ren!" I sat up with a start only to be knocked against the head by something sharp and solid. "Ouch!" "Fuck!" "What the hell!" Rubbing my aching temple, I looked around and found Rick lying on the floor beside my bed. "What are you doing down there, looking for my cum rag or what?" "Ha ha fucking ha….” Rick touched his chin tentatively and hissed. “I was trying to wake you lovingly, but all you can t
  8. So, the verbal walk on the wild side did end pretty soon. Lol Reality bites and all...
  9. When I started to read I thought 'Who's Tony?' Did I miss a chapter? And then I read on and everything became clear. Very nice, Cole, you got me. So, there seems to be a Christmas all around. And why not, everyone deserves their very own miracle. Thank you.
  10. Happy Birthday!!
  11. Happy Birthday!!
  12. Aditus

    Chapter 1

    Holy shit! Err...thanks for that...whatever it is, I had tons of fun. LOL.
  13. Aditus

    Martin II #373

    Thank you! To be honest I don't really know where I'm going with this. I let the prompt themes guide me and see what comes out of it. The chapters will always be from either Roman's or Martin's POV, that's the only certain thing here.
  14. Haha, I'm glad you luv it! Oh yes, Rick meeting Eric, that would be fun. But you're right, Jonah needs to be in Sicily. He needs Rick and Matteo and some distance and...to sort through his mess.Thanks Nlaudensger! I love your summaries of the chapters.
  15. Well, they're cousins, what do you expect? The talk will happen next chapter.Thanks, Tim. Very astute observations again.
  16. Yes, I have to admit I was strangely proud of the 'buffet' part.And about the dinner guest, I saw that live and in Technicolor, believe me, including the argument between Jonah and Rick. People do strange things when they are afraid. Michael, yes I have something special planned for him...next year. Thanks, Irri. Loved this and kinda needed to laugh today.
  17. It was short lived and he was embarrassed afterwards, but yes so typical: acting before thinking. Sometimes I want to shake him, but then I have to laugh...he's such an idiot.Thank you, Cole!
  18. He was never really gone. And I agree, the over-reaction gene runs homozygous in that family but at least Rick already has his calming counterpart. Thanks, Dave.
  19. Aditus

    The Snow Ball

    So it starts with some harmless bingo, then a big party later in the evening and boom the drama begins. I have to admit I get claustrophobic just thinking of it. Well at least now we know Wes and Angus finally found their right man. Who needs P... Cats chasing dogs and vice versa? Oh yes, saw that thirty minutes ago...I loved it. Great chapter.
  20. This really is an impressive number! Congratulations to everyone!
  21. Pixiebites, huh? Ouch? Well the fast is Jonah writing his journal and the slow is the former framework now becoming the main story. Eventually we will pick up speed. Thanks, nostic.
  22. What can I say, they really are cousins, they both have a temper. Well Jonah already admitted he was wrong, now it's Rick's turn. The story is written from Jonah's point of view, so he won't know what happened with Ren, unless someone tells him about it. After reliving everything, Jonah is now bus< with licking his wounds. Maybe Rick and Matteo will help him to find his way? Thank you for your review and the over-analyzing LitLover. I fear Jonah will still be well Jonah some more.
  23. Lol, I'm really sorry Gary, but this is Jonah! He still is irrational. His own thought 'Ren wouldn't endanger me', confuses him, and he quickly explains it with 'because he wouldn't endanger himself.There is also the story setting: For the reader everything that happened is still fresh, for Jonah it happened two weeks ago. He wants to move on. Ren doesn't know where Jonah is, only Chris and Michael, and I don't think they will tell Ren. And Gary, do you really think Ren is ready to face Jonah yet? The actual framework, where Jonah arrives in Sicily and what he experiences there, is very slow atm. Jonah needs to grow up and I fear it will take him a while and he will annoy everyone around him, including you. Thank you for your comment, Gary and no I would never actively want to frustrate you, but I'm only the storyteller...complains directly to Jonah, please.
  24. Aditus

    Promise Stars

    Haha, I became panicked because the story didn't go as I had planned it. I should be used to it by now, still...so Cole got some half finished piece to tell me if it made sense or not.Yes, only when love became more important than his powers to Lox, the cats would allow them to bond. Thank you for your review, Wayne.
  25. Aditus

    Promise Stars

    When I thought about the cats, I imagined they were sent by some council of witches and warlocks to protect the Others.Thank you for your review, Bill.
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