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Aditus

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  1. Many directions to choose and play with.
  2. I loved this story, and there's more...
  3. Happy. B. &#@*%
  4. Aditus

    Chapter 1

    Def, this is perfect. You caught his spirit.
  5. Thank you, Bill. Your comment means a lot to me.
  6. I almost missed your debut. It's the prologue of a series, right? Pre-Consuela Orts i Roig and after-. There have to be descriptions of breathtaking ceramics, vernissages- and men... In other words: I'm waiting for your first anthology story, or more of Juan. Thank you for sharing, Gary.
  7. Perfect! I mean this can be basically anything: two legs, four legs, six legs, eight legs (shudder), wings, fins...
  8. Merry Christmas! ❤️
  9. @Headstall You know me well.
  10. This reminds me of all my sins, at least as an author. Speaking of New Year resolutions.
  11. Sorry to disappoint Steve; we need the man with the fur-trimmed red hat next week to deliver our prezzies. What you guys do with the prompts is out of my hands, though. If you slip in something gift-wrapped, a sleigh, or a long white beard, that’s your decision. # 257 First line: There’s something down there. #258 List of words: Use at least ten variations, synonyms, or compound words of loose and lose. Please include the prompt number either in your story/chapter description or title to help readers who would like to search for specific prompts. Also, please remember that stories less than one thousand words must be posted as part of a collection. If you check the subgenre 'prompt' in your story tags, then people/readers can find everything here: https://gayauthors.org/stories/browse/subgenre/prompt/
  12. No more elements? Whew. We went right to chaos theory.
  13. A few new authors are on the list! I'm curious.
  14. Aditus

    The Hunt

    This comments mean a lot to me. For reasons I won't bore you with, I was forced to stop writing this story. I feared the story had been forgotten because of the huge delay. I will finish it. The characters are already speaking to me.
  15. Aditus

    Story Ice Balls

    Haha, that's exactly how I felt. I understood it as a challenge.
  16. These happenings were always far away, something I heard about in history lessons and books. It felt as if I were present and saw them from an entirely new perspective.
  17. To me, the important part of the prompt was Make us feel it. And you did. Perfect. Since I could read, I had a book with me. Following the prompt, I carried my happy place around.
  18. You did what the prompt asked for and so much more. Short, beautifully written, and strangely complete. Well done.
  19. Aditus

    Chapter 1

    Forget the suit, Gavin was the fucking groom! "I know that he has five tiny moles on his inner left thigh that look like they're pointing at his circumsized dick!" Yup, that's a unique detail. What a whirlwind story. I thought it was funny how Kei always worries about everyone's clothes.... The suit sounded pretty awesome btw.
  20. Aditus

    Chapter 1

    You did an amazing job. When I first read the prompt I thought...better you than me. Fun fact, at least for me, you named your main character as I did my cupid.
  21. Me too.
  22. Their best X-mas songs are in German..oh well:
  23. Only a few left to read....
  24. Aditus

    Story Ice Balls

    With my current colleagues...no. With my former lab crew definitely yes. We went to the sauna and jacuzzi once a week in winter.
  25. Your story drew me in from the very first sentence—well, the second. I love it. I will read more of your work.
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