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  1. To me, the important part of the prompt was Make us feel it. And you did. Perfect. Since I could read, I had a book with me. Following the prompt, I carried my happy place around.
  2. You did what the prompt asked for and so much more. Short, beautifully written, and strangely complete. Well done.
  3. Aditus

    Chapter 1

    Forget the suit, Gavin was the fucking groom! "I know that he has five tiny moles on his inner left thigh that look like they're pointing at his circumsized dick!" Yup, that's a unique detail. What a whirlwind story. I thought it was funny how Kei always worries about everyone's clothes.... The suit sounded pretty awesome btw.
  4. Aditus

    Chapter 1

    You did an amazing job. When I first read the prompt I thought...better you than me. Fun fact, at least for me, you named your main character as I did my cupid.
  5. Me too.
  6. Their best X-mas songs are in German..oh well:
  7. Only a few left to read....
  8. Aditus

    Story Ice Balls

    With my current colleagues...no. With my former lab crew definitely yes. We went to the sauna and jacuzzi once a week in winter.
  9. Your story drew me in from the very first sentence—well, the second. I love it. I will read more of your work.
  10. Aditus

    Chapter 1

    I like your descriptive writing. I saw the club and got a glimpse at the detectives and their dynamic. Thank you for throwing your hat in the (prompt) ring.
  11. Aditus

    Story Ice Balls

    Then I must have done something right although I struggled with this prompt. Thank you, Bill. Who? Me? Naah. Less spiders? Just a little. Yep. In real life he would. Perfect summary. Nope, the perks go to the people who need it. Thank you for working there. ❤️ I would; better dining and wining Laurie, right?
  12. Aditus

    Story Ice Balls

    I'm not a prankster. Nope. Perhaps accidentally....
  13. I'm not too fond of pranks and I'm not a big fan of schadenfreude so this prompt so wasn't mine. Again. I feel I already had to write something about/ with pranks somewhere. We grow through challenges.... or despair lol.
  14. I don't believe this. Aaaand some of these prompts are mine and therefore some are roleplay~ish just saying.
  15. Aditus

    Story Ice Balls

    PT Prompt #37 – Creative You’re known as the office prankster and April Fools’ Day is your time to shine. Your co-workers admire your creativity and look forward to the silly pranks you pull every April first. This year, though, your prank goes horribly wrong. What was the prank, and what are the consequences? Everything began with a few silly pranks on April first; nothing extensive or even sophisticated: salt in the sugar bowl, toothpaste Oreos, vegetable oil in the soap dispe
  16. Aditus

    Ice Balls

    What happens when the official office prankster accidentally gives his boss ice balls?
  17. Thank you, @Bill W and @Slytherin. ❤️
  18. Thank you, @Valkyrie, @Thirdly and @chris191070.❤️
  19. Hey, you remembered, @Lisa! Thank you!
  20. Aditus

    Talk Talk

    Well, in this case, it's more Terra Peter, Josie, or Arturo.
  21. Aditus

    Talk Talk

    Conversations. Sometimes it’s too much, sometimes too little, formal, informal, clumsy, artificial, with another word: difficult. Let’s practice, Shall we? #253 Someone is on the bus. The guy beside them fidgets the whole time with an irritating tinkling bangle while telling them, it seems, their entire life story, including very personal things. It’s time to pop in the earbuds. When it’s time to get off the bus, the talker has disappeared and the strange bangle is now on their wrist. They instantly turn around and tell the lady walking behind them about their super-hot new colleague. WTF? #254 Your story’s main character comes home from a long work stay abroad. The usually extremely reserved neighbor on the left waves at them and invites them for welcome-back coffee on their porch. Instead of a yellow dried-out lawn, the backyard is now a dazzling sea of colorful flowers. Asked about how their newly-developed green thumb, the neighbor smiles and explains the merits of biological fertilizers, versus chemical ones. Please include the prompt number either in your story/chapter description or title to help readers who would like to search for specific prompts. Also, please remember that stories less than one thousand words must be posted as part of a collection. If you check the subgenre 'prompt' in your story tags, then people/readers can find everything here: https://gayauthors.org/stories/browse/subgenre/prompt/ It's not too late to participate in our first annual Prompt Team event! More information can be found here:
  22. There you are. Took you long enough. Welcome to the club. Congratulation!
  23. Aditus

    Shooting Stars

    Nope, not listening.
  24. @BendtedWreath, @Thirdly Thank you so much for your words of sympathy and compassion. ❤️
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