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  1. Aditus

    Flashpoint

    A great story, Cassie! The characters are realistic, including the side characters up to Sarah's reaction to Eliott and Grant pressing charges. Right from the beginning, I sided with Elliot. Grant underestimated the unpredictable behavior of abusers. Of course, he did it out of love to his sister. I felt sorry for Elliot and Grant. I'm glad they solved their problems. Thank you for this story.
  2. Good morning! That's a pleasant surprise! Thank you to the entire anthology team and for providing reading material for the weekend.
  3. Blood Moon She calls her children home by eerie light Till bodies vibrate, teeth glisten, red-white Muscles quiver in anticipation Tongues lolling, with jaws poised ready to bite mind utterly focused on creation Life present in a vein's strong pulsation That creates an exciting sensation Of joy and sizzling playfulness of us.
  4. Pangaea Progenitor of continents Divided by primitive, fiery force United by reason defying any walls.
  5. Foray Sneaky, lusty Zeus the preying fornicator glorified rapist
  6. ‘What is that?’ (Lily Sloane)— ‘That is the constellation Leo.’ (Zefram Cochrane) Disgusted by incorrigible Zeus, Hera became a jealous, vengeful wife. Due to his relentless quest to seduce They had to live in war and constant strife. Throughout their realm, HE spread his pearly juice SHE sent her lion to taint his life. Together they wasted their chance of truce Forgotten the beast that defied the knife. While the fearsome lion was on the loose Over all N
  7. Stargazer In August when Laurentius’ tears rained down And meteors flared white before they died I dreamed to meet him in the fields near town. My eyes fixed on the vast and ruthless sky: I made a wish. Together we defeat the void of space, The ebony cloth, pierced by ancient light Enfolds us to become our sheltered place, where we can pledge the bonding oath by night. Did you make your wish? For a beloved friend whom I dearly miss.
  8. Aditus

    Park Life.

    I like the way you describe people and small moments like this ...wanted to hold his hand that fraction of a second too long, that gesture that implied attraction and much more, ...
  9. Aditus

    Round One.

    There's a fine line between honesty and rudeness. After reading this chapter, I felt bad for Chris. However, Shawn might have his own experiences that lead to his behavior. I will definitely read on. Thanks.
  10. Aditus

    #760 The Chimera

    Avoid the hand grenades, okay.
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    #760 The Chimera

    Almost surreal, right? Not exactly Un Chien Andalou but maybe a sprinkle of that? Thank you for reading this, Parker.
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    #760 The Chimera

    Just open a window. ..
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    #760 The Chimera

    Tell me when you do.
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    #760 The Chimera

    Just a weird dream...
  15. #760 “Because I said so!” The chimera’s tiny fist landed on the table so hard, the dishes and glasses rattled loudly. Immediately the adoring crowd fell silent. Those standing close even ducked their heads, averted their eyes, and looked to the floor just to be on the safe side. Everyone waited with bated breath. Then a tiny squeak sounded. “They farted!” A woman clapped her hands together enthusiastically. The man beside her threw his arms in the air. “And what a lovely fart it was!
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    #761 The Ex

    They need to frequent another club/city?
  17. Aditus

    #761 The Ex

    In English, no. In German though: Dürre-erschütterung....
  18. Aditus

    #761 The Ex

    Thank you, Wayne! Maybe another prompt...
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    #761 The Ex

    My mind was exactly there...in the gutter, haha. I just thought I'd use a name with an umlaut for @droughtquake, Thank you for your comment and making me grin, Tim.
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    #761 The Ex

    they play this game as a reminder to Tony of his cheating Exactly, and of Ian's forgiveness. Thank you for reading this and for your comment, Gary.
  21. Sometimes one needs both forms to express themselves. Your muse has something in common with mine.
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    #761 The Ex

    No, no, no, no, no! LOL! Thank you for the comment, Val.
  23. Sorry, I'm still stuck with Kabal. Done. Here's my prompt piece.
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    #761 The Ex

    “Ian?” I let go of Tony’s hand immediately and watched him fall back on his ass. “Hey!” Knowing him, he’d find lots of people to help him up. I can’t suppress the snort while I’m heading towards the club’s entrance. Inside I go straight to the bar. Luckily, Sam’s behind it. “Beer?” “Whiskey, neat.” Frowning, she tilts her head to the right. “What happened?” “Tony.” She immediately scans the room. “I ran into him in the parking lot.” “Fuck! I can ask Brian to throw his che
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