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This is only the second story about triplets I have come across on this site. I guess people don't find us very interesting. My only complaint was it was too short. It would make a great introduction to a story exploring the brothers different personalities and their new lives with their father and his husband.
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Carlos this brought back memories of visiting and touring Havana, visiting Morro Castle and touring the city in a "new Nash". If I remember correctly, my father worked in the casino at a Hotel National?
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WARNING TOO DARK! I CAN NOT READ THIS! I'M TEMPTED TO DELETE GAY AUTHORS FROM MY TOOL BAR! I COULD NOT GET PAST THE FIRST CHAPTER
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Carlos it's obvious you were not in the army! No one could "love" shit-on-a-shingle!!! I think you are confusing it with southern gravy and biscuits. Not the same! "SOS" is a creamed chipped beef on toast (the shingle). ASK ANY VET!
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This was a looong read but it held my interest all the way through in spite of many plot turns, twists and U-turn or two. There was a lot of detail and description that added to the story. Well worth the time to read!
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A question. You refer to the lagoon as part of the Intercoastal Waterway. Is this part of the Intracoastal (inland) Waterway system that was designed to protect shipping during war time in South Florida like the Lake Worth lagoon?
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“GO! NOW!” I ordered. Jacob nodded, helped Jason to his feet, and over to the car. I walked over and opened the back door, so we could force Jason in. “This isn’t over” I growled at Pit “I’ll make you regret this…I’ll put led right between those ugly eyes of yours.” Was this a door or a hatchback? I've never seen a 4 door Mustang? Clewless
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Chapter 1 - Riding the Beast
AFBNOW commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Riding the Beast
I normally don't read "were" creature stories! HOWEVER, i have read all your other stories. Are you sure Jed was born in California? Jed tingled with anticipation and leaned forward. "That sounds… satisfying." That sounds like he's just a sweet transvestite from Transexual, Transylvania. ??? -
Another good read Carlos. Thank you! A
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Having been raised in a small settlement neighboring a Fort known as Lauderdale (a trading post known primarily for its liquid refreshments) we had horses growing up. Therefore I am attracted to horse stories (sorry Blue). I'm not big on romantic stories. This story was well written and held my attention to the end. I didn't even notice any of the occasional spell check errors most stories have.
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I agree with Philippe! This was my favorite story Mark but I think it is time to delete my bookmark and say goodbye to George!
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Hmmm. Maybe Nick should have had Zak's first, middle and last name tattooed on Noah's appendage. It changed from Allen (chap. 4) to Aaron (chap. 22). That said, I have enjoyed the story very much. We had western horses when I was a kid. I liked the detail in the earlier chapters about the different breeds and the tack. I learned a few things I did not know and Googled a few things to learn more. Put me on the + side of the Max & Loki issues. Could use more Nick & Noah--hope you were laying the ground work for another story!
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This was an enjoyable change of pace from the usual subject matter on this site once I reoriented myself back to 2006. Maybe you could do another story on my home territory, Corruption County, Floriduh! The home of Mark Foley and now the official residence our leader. God save us, PLEASE!
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After reading Enigma I wanted to read Enigma II to follow River and Silver. I almost quit after the first few chapters but kept reading to see if it would get better. I am glad I didn't quit because the last chapters wouldn't have meant much without the background. The depth of the character development made this well worth reading. I'm looking forward to Enigma III.
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I did enjoy this story from a tongue in cheek point of view. I especially appreciate that even though they were supposed to be "identical triplets", they each had very different personalities and strengths. There aren't many triplet stories to compare this to but I find most twin stories to be very unrealistic based on my personal experiences as a fraternal triplet by birth raised as a twin.
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After reading chapters 4 and five, I PROTEST THE TITLE OF THIS STORY! The least you could do is change it back to Daniel. You make it sound like you are running a CLEARANCE SALE to GIT RID OF US! I am calling on all of my fellow gay triplets to boycott this story! Come on guys. There must be at least a couple more of us on this site!
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I don't care for most of the romance stories on this site but this was a both bitter and sweet love story that I couldn't stop reading. Thank you!
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History does repeat its self -- unfortunately!
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The thaw has come !!! THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU!
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It has been a year since we last heard from George. Has he been lost at sea or just frozen in the Baltic? I'm hoping he is frozen, summer is almost here!
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This was a good read. I might have said it was a great read if I had read the story before I had to stop my cancer treatments because of radiation burns. Still a good story!
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Enjoyed the two stories! My first car was probably similar to Brian's dads first car, an Impala sport coupe (a "59, the second year for the Impala) with a 348 and Turboglide (CV) transmission. I also had a '65 Dodge Coronet 500 convertible (383) and a "68 Olds 442 convertible (400 cu. in.). This was a trip down memory lane for me! I'm looking forward to a part three.
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I have come to the conclusion that our beloved George has been lost at sea. He couldn't possibly have carried enough provisions on board to last this long. R.I. P. George
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This is the most enjoyable gay fiction I've ever read. I appreciate the frequent updates. Please, just keep writing! THANK YOU!
