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Reggie was caught red-handed. Probably would have been red handed if it had been a little while earlier. Something made him go to sleep I agree with Blake tho. He and Ethan could've talked about more interesting things, but I love how Ethan saved his question like it was an afterthought. lol
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Just a warning. Decided to catch up on your story today. Don't feel obligated to respond to every review:P The underage drinking rule shouldn't even be broken regardless of soccer. To an extent, Jason is responsible for his little brother. I can see his see the reason for his concern, even without the chance of getting kicked off the team. Darryl should have stayed out of it. imo You know and I know that Dean just gave in to get the others off his back and to keep his dad from finding out. This matter certainly isn't closed.
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So glad I found this. Quite an enthralling tale. Ten years since you wrote it huh? I still think you could continue
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Neil certainly has some things to figure out, even with the family's input. It's terrifying to think of losing a child in anyway. Attachment to the little ones is very tight and it's hard to let go when you have to, let alone because of issues like this. Can't wait for the parade!!!!!
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The closer they get, the harder it's going to be for them to be apart. Shade made up for shunning the birthday boy tho Can't wait for more!
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If this is your first, I definitely am in for a second. Beautiful piece of writing. It flowed with ease, the emotions raging. The main character's inner soul was stark raw with hurt and guilt. Great stuff! Will be looking for more of your writing. Thank you
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What a great story. Kevin and Arthur from beginning to end made for an enthralling tale. Your portrayal of the military events kept me glued to my screen. As always ,as a reader, I hate the sadness of death, but you let you character find another chance at happiness, so you're forgiven Seriously, lot of food for thought in this story as to what our children and grandchildren's future could hold. Thanks for a wonderful read!
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You're off to a great start here. I'd love to read more about the boys and how they handle the situation. Good job!
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Awww, Kc, your last line almost made me cry for Michael. It is so hard to feel so good and so confused at the same time. Love, sex, and learning your sexuality at one time has to make you want to explode into a million pieces. Asher better be crying himself. That was a huge step forward for Michael. Great work, my friend
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It's Darkest Before Dawn
joann414 commented on TheEggman's story chapter in It's Darkest Before Dawn
What a great chapter. So glad Mr. Hundser makes them see the importance of appreciating everyday with each other. so much has gone one with these two, I am glad that this was just a bump in the road of life. Good job -
Love me some puppies. Derrick is dealing with so much. The guys are a great group and are always there for each other. Mr. Hundsster is a great person. Great chapter.
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Cliffhanger! A very mean cliffhanger at that. Haje admitting to Vincent that he thinks Vincent is trying to kill him and realising someone is trying to kill them both. I can't decide about Levin. He didn't try to take the briefcase or anything. Hopefully Haje is just a little shaky and will get Vincent and his case and go home. Maybe a little TLC from Vincent is what he needs
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Wow! What a powerful writing. Your delivery of this is right on the money. Totally unexpected, but great!
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Wouldn't it be great if there was such tolerance in a lot of our schools. Thankfully, things worked out for the boys, and they'll have a chance to have a normal life in high school as long as everyone sticks together and watches each other's backs. Great writing and story.
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Heartbreakingly beautiful story. You showed the character's emotions in a wonderful way. I guess some stories are not meant to be a happily ever after.
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What an uplifting story. This is so sweet and I love when a parent and child are so close, and so in tune with each other.
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So glad to see Joshuah and Alexi back, even though they are going to be separated soon. Poor Alexi is so sad, and Joshua having other problems is even worse. I wonder how they will deal with distance and their relationship. I know they love each other, but real life can be a bitch sometimes. Can't wait for more.
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Def Leppard. Haven't thought of them in years. Keith, singing, I think is fixing to make the band take off, but I wonder what will happen. Drew has so much growing up to do, and is so lucky to have Keith there to talk to and support him. He seems like he is on the verge of taking that final step into manhood, but he's not sure that he wants to yet. Watching these guys have their ups and downs, thoughts and dreams, reminds me so much of my own past. Great writing. You are a wonderfu storyteller.
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Drew is more mature than I thought. He had the sense to talk to Keith and Prez about his relationship with Corey. Most youngsters would jump in head first and then many regret it later on. They are only apart for a few hours, and Prez and Keith act like it's been weeks. lol. Hopefully, their little plan will work when school begins, although I feel like both of them will be fine as far as their studies. Great chapter!
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I don't know where my compassion lies at this point, with Colton or Richard. Richard's grief has almost destroyed him and Colton's guilt is doing the same. It is going to be interesting to see how the two of them work through their misery while living in the same house. Peter Hunt remains a threat, but their feelings are like a walking time bomb. I am sure Sue will get to hear several rumbles before the actual explosion between these two men. Great chapter Louis
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Confessions of a guilty man
joann414 commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Confessions of a guilty man
It sux how politics work at times when you need them on your side. A homophobic judge is certainly not a great addition to this cast of characters. Why couldn't you have Judge Judy or something? JK, things always get worse before they get better, it seems. Asher had a terrible day here. The policeman, the lawyer's words, and Michael ogling the secretaries rear. He needs a drink and a dark room to scream in.. Always makes me feel better. lol Great chapter as always KC -
Beautiful poem Dennis, but so sad. Great job
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Wow, what a bastard, and Siggi was stupid enough to go with him. Dmitri is quite the hero and very brave. Now who will protect Gunni? I would be scared to leave him alone at all times. Great chapter
