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Chapter 1 - Charlies Night
joann414 commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Charlies Night
There are so many Charlies out there that people really don't take time to look at inside and out. They only take what they see on the outside and try to make do. Tina is pretty much a bitch in my book, and obviously, she waited a little long to throw him an untimatum, but maybe he will figure a few things out about his life now without her in it. So glad I finally started this story. Looks as if it is going to be a great read:) -
I am so glad that Min planted some confidence into Lara, and learned to enjoy her as a sister. Their idle chatter was so nice and sweet, making life easier for the both of them. Young Jae is taking on a lot of blame that he does not have to, but I think he is ashamed of what he has done. Even though he was blackmailed by Yul, he cannot fogive his actions enough to tell Min his true feelings. But, thank goodness Min manned up and admitted his feelings, and I think he will eventually make Young Jae do the same. Awesome chapter girl!!!
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Well, ZAk is definitely in for a long hot summer! lol I love how you immediately threw the lab into the mix of characters since Zak has never had a pet. Looks as if Zak will learn about horses, dogs, and love. I can't wait to see where this goes. Great job:)
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I don't feel like it is the end. To me, the Eric and LM issue is not resolved. I feel a few vibes there that LM has not addressed. Everything has been from Eric. What if LM went to Eric? Will Ogre be able to handle being out to everyone. Last of all, the safety and naturalness that LM felt in Eric's bed was too filled with true emotion not to mean something. So, (taps foot patiently). I don't have to tell you how awesome this is. It just is.
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I am so hoping after Alexi comes to himself he will press charges, and I wish he would punch the bitch back in her chest with HIS finger, and tell her about him and Adrian, and tell her she is welcome to him. ( conjugal visits in prison only) lol. I am a mean ass huh. As for Joshua, I know that he will not give up on Alexi. He loves him too much, and has Lily on his side, so that says a lot. i love me some Lily. I hope she will find happiness also. Another great chapter girl. I am so impatient now. I want Alexi and joshua happy.
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Chapter 7 Just When You've Got it Figured Out...
joann414 commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 7 Just When You've Got it Figured Out...
What the hell? Simon and Rick? what kind of set up is all this? Now, a picture of Simon at Alec's. Poor Heath is probably in a tailspin. I hope you are already writing the next chapter girl or I am coming after you!!!!! I had not more likes, but I loved this so much. Will catch you tomorrow tho. You deserve it. Thanks for a great evening read:) -
Well, you got my attention. Now you will have to really get to work because I am very impatient. good job
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Well, that does it. No more internet porn for me! lol Very interesting but goose bump giving story.
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OH, Min and his mom mend fences, he and Lara are getting along, and now Young Jae is going to disappoint or maybe hurt him. I hope not. The chemistry between the two is beautiful, and you write these two characters beautifully. Thankx
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What a great dramatic and emotional read. The poignant deaths and living that were tired made a storm within themselves. Very well written.
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Prompt #178 - A Hallowe'en Prompt
joann414 commented on Andy78's story chapter in Prompt #178 - A Hallowe'en Prompt
NOw Andy, I have just one question here. "HOW THE HELL WERE THOSE KIDS SUPPOSED TO SLEEP?" I would have been under my bed with my softball bat and baton. -
I hate the fact of the rape, and the hurt inflicted on LM, but for some reason I still am so sorry for Eric. Why do I feel that he is still the one suffering the most, and is scared to acknowledge it? Another great one. Thanks
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Ermmmmmm, remind me not to trick or treat at your house. Gargoyles, snakes, and spiders? I am being a good witch! lol Great job, and I loved the storyline also:)
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I am hoping that the uncle will not be as evil as he sounds. Can't fault Min for feeling abandoned by his mother. He has to deal with a lot of feelings right now. The favorite feelings at this moment come from Young Jae's confession of wanting him and then staking his claim to him. This was such a damn sweet moment, even if Jae did threaten to kill Shin. Loved this chapter.
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Oh my gosh. You are a wonderful writer. This is a sad but beautiful story. Thank you for such a gift.
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Why am I sadder for Eric than any of the three? For some reason I feel like he is hurting the most. Ogre will show his true colors now and I have a sinking feeling that it may not be what LM is expecting, but, that being said, I think LM has more support than he realises right under his nose. Maybe the morning shower was to open his eyes after what Eric had already seen the night before. Angst and hurt and uncertainty is certainly a helluva mess when there is two involved, let alone three. Probably my fav chapter so far. Great job! Now hurry up with more;p
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Well, I definitely think Thomas is gay, and has a very unaccepting dad, if not family. Jacob and Kyle did all that they can do at this point without tattling, as youngsters call it so all we can do is wait to see what transpires with Thomas. I have one more thought, but I will keep it to myself at this point. About Thomas. Lot of good points made here, and old issues brought back to surface with the whole Thomas episode. I still think there is a little more here than was said or meets the eye
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Chapter 6 Acts of Desperation...
joann414 commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 6 Acts of Desperation...
So, the bitch is back. I wish Kaila had been there when she confronted Alex. She would not have been nice at all. lol Can't wait to see what advice Heath's dad gives him, and see Heath's reaction if Alex does profess to have feelings for him. Things are getting really interesting and Simon is going to have to figure it all out too. Great chapter. -
I love a feel good read, and this one is great. Everyone needs to slow down in life, and see the goodness and opportunities that personal relationships can bring to them. THe pace of the story was perfect, but I can't help but wonder about the courtship. Great job!
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Young Jae seems to attract Min no matter how Min tries to deny and avoid it. Min's mom does have a point. He just went to see her, went straight to business, and nothing more. That was pretty cold. But I can't blame him for being cold to the "bratty" sister. lol Min should have volunteered Young Jae to talk hi sister to the gala, kinda turn the tables on him. That would have been interesting. Another good one girl:)
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I have no remorse for Adrian. He is a snake in the grass, and I hope Lily rips a strip or two from him before the authorities get there. Hopefully, Alexi will let things move along, and think of Jordan, and the good things they have with each other. I really do want to see Lily come unglued on Adrian's ass tho. Great chapter:)
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Corbin is working out everything for everyone but himself. He arranged the mixer, talked to the Dean, and agreed to let the Lee ordeal drop.. But, he is still a nervous wreck about meeting Dakota. The kicker is as to whether or not he will be drunk as hell and make a fool of himself or make a good impression on both Dakota and Peter. Hopefully , he will do something to make Peter show his feelings in some way, and Dakota will turn out to be a great friend to both of them. Hopefully! Great chapter
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I know I seel to always over analyze some things, but for some reason I am feeling more sorry for Eric than anyone else. LM and Ogre have plenty of drama, and obviously care a lot about each other. Heidi has turned out to be a great friend to have around, but my mind keeps going back to Eric. But, that being said, another great chapter.
