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Poor Tib. I certainly hope Teressa does not interfere where she is not needed, nor wanted. Chad probably punched a hole in the wall after he told Tib he could not come back. The sex scene was written great also, could almost feel the strong emotions coming from both, so glad to finally be together. I know Tib still has a long way to go, but he seems to be a strong person, so I have a feeling he will become more stubborn when he goes after who or whatever he desires. Strong chapter.
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WEll, at least both Tib and Chad are acknowledging their feelings in their own way. I just hate that Tib's will be at the cost of Mia's heartbreak somewhere along the way. Hopefully not. Well, I was right about the picture. I knew he would paint tib. I feel so sorry for Chad more than any. Great job!
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Well, at least Chad kept it in the family. lol. This is certainly a different world in which they live, but as crazy as our world has gotten, who says this could not happen to the human race? Scary thought. Love how Tib and Chad have each other in thier subconscious at all times. Another good one. On to next chapter.
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I can imagine how embarassed Tibial was with all the questions from his family. It seems to me Chad is looking at what happened through an adult's eyes, accepting the feelings he felt for Tibial, even though he thinks Tibial probably hates him. Little does he know that he was Tib's jerk off fantasy the same evening. It is going to be interesting what happens with Tib, and his first sexual encounter with a female. Methinks he may have lots more things to think about at night. lol Hmmmm, wonder what Chad is going to paint? Keeping thoughts to myself, until I find out if I am right. Great chapter.
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY STEVE
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HI Jimmy. Looking forward to reading your story
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Well, I thought I would get to read a lot of your story this weekend, but company showed. Bleh. Finally got through the first chapter. I have to tell you this, it is not what I expected. It is a thousand times better!. i love it, and hooked. You are a wonderful writer girl, and I am so glad I waited to read. thanks for your time, and Awesmone talent.
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Alexi is so lucky to have Lily, and better than that, he seems to appreciate the fact. I think Adrian got the card, and hope Lily is the one to find out. Joshua is so sweet and kind. Lily was right, encouraging Alexi to have dinner with Joshua, because I think she knows Adrian is like pretty poison. Great chapter.
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I agree with Y-B. Menace meant no harm guys. it was just an in general question. Nothing more
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I have no idea how that post turned out like it did. kinda goes along with my day.
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OMG Zombie. you are too damn funny. laughing my ass off.
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Wow , Min and Shin, I am already screaming for more. Great writing, and storyline. I am so intrigued. Good job! More please
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Reading this thread just made my day. You guys are too funny. Zombie, it might be worth a watch!
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY! HOPE YOU HAVE A GREAT DAY! ENJOY!
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Oh Patrick, I am so glad you held back on the sex. I knew Rob was trouble, but not sure in what capacity. Ben is either hiding something, or Rob is just a troublemaker all the way around. Can't wait for more of this story.. Great chapter!
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Poor Cole. I wonder what is going through his mind after seeing Travis again, and remembering all of this horrible stuff. This story is getting better, and better, and hopefully, the divine writer's hand will come guide your writing of Chapter 4 soon. lol Seriously, i am loving this.!
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Much More Than Saddle Sore
joann414 commented on Swhouston44's story chapter in Much More Than Saddle Sore
Hmmmm, this is really getting interesting now. Your names of places and wording on the signs in the story are funny as hell. Your imagination must be in overdrive all the time. lol. So, Cole is a childhood friend who knocked the hell out of Travis, and then disappears for years. Can't wait to see what the story behind all of that is going to be. -
Wow, a lot of talent you have threre. Your story is very entertaining, and your description of a small southern school, are right on the money. Believe me, I know! lol This is a very good beginning. Going on to next chapter. Great job!
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Thanks for posting this info Zombie. Makes me never want to touch my lenses period.lol. This is such a wierd thing, that probably none of us has ever even thought about. Poor girl.
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One of my favorite things so far here is how you have kept a touch of humor through the whole ordeal. On to next chapter
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Ran across this today, and it looked like a good read, and so far, you have not disappointed. Good job!
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I sure hope Ogre does not break Little Man's heart and spirit by changing his mind, once they are found out, and something tells me that it won't be long before that happens. Eric's reaction, I think is going to be pretty interesting, to say the least. Little Man is about ready to go all in, and Ogre is still exploring his feelings. Can't wait for more. Great job!
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Chapter 3 Tall Tales...
joann414 commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 3 Tall Tales...
I certainly hope Alec is as intimidating as Bo fears, and does not fall for Heath's plans, although he is falling for the man himself. Heath is at least feeling guilty, and has feelings for Alec, but will the feelings become stronger than carrying out what he has been hired to do? Nina's craziness just might get her killed, and I hope since she is trying to trap Heath, that he finds a way to deal with her that does not involve anything physical between them. Kaila does not seem like a dummy. I think sooner or later she may pick up on the bad vibes from Bo that same as Alec has. Another great chapter girl. Now, I am really impatient. lol:)
