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  1. Mann Ramblings
    "Just give me a minute, please." Shawn looked around the dark room lit by amber fireflies in lanterns that glowed brighter than should be possible. The shimmering flicker cast shadows that danced in every corner making the walls and its contents look alive. He swore he could hear the lick and crackle of flame coming from the lanterns, he could feel the warmth but it did nothing to soothe the disquiet in his chest. A large, high walled ceramic basin filled with steaming water sat in the middle
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    Being able to share my stories on GA has been a GREAT pleasure. I never thought I would get so much positive feedback! The crew of the Santa Claus is proving to be great story fodder, so I'm planning to visit their world again as I come up with new tales. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. (happy dance)
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    you sure didn't waste any time on this one, Kitt! They were both good pieces! Nice work.
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    This is all really good advice. It's good to be able to point out the reality of being a writer doesn't stop when the novel is finished. There's so much more than that. Good luck, Andy! I get a raw giggle every time I see my work posted on GA. I can't imagine how good it must feel to see if published for real!
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    Glad you like it! Actually this prompt is my next planned story. It's still in development and will be a little while before it's ready to post, but it's next up. Thanks for the review!
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    ZOMG!! How will I find the time to read all of this? Guess I don't need sleep that badly...
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    It sounds wonderful.
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    Kiss and Tell

    Mann Ramblings commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Kiss and Tell

    Michael being a nursemaid should be quite a test of his feelings. LOL Seeing his protective side come out full force is an interesting feature as well. I'm particularly amused when I imagine what kind of "gay sex" evidence Asher's mom is likely to find in his apartment if Dad doesn't get there first. Nice chapter. Looking forward to ALL of the rest.
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    Actually, Wayne. There were 3 other responses to that same prompt last week. They were all very good! I need to find the time to play with some of them. I'm itching to do some myself! Oh wait! That was the week before wasn't it? Don't listen to me. I don't know what I'm talking about.
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    OO!!! Joann! You should do the first one!!!
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    Csr June Story!

    Mann Ramblings commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News

    Argh!!! Must find time to read this!!!
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    Nice chapter. I really enjoyed the interaction between Michael and Asher in the hospital. I was hoping we wouldn't have to wait too long before Michael started coming around. Granted, he's hardly in a full acceptance mode yet and there's sure to be bumps along the way. (The story has a lot more to tell ) Looking forward to hearing more about the gap between the chapters. Thanks again, KC
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    Chapter One

    Mann Ramblings commented on Renee Stevens's story chapter in Chapter One

    Nice opening to set the stage. I love the 1k briefs format. I think it's a challenge to get your story and pacing set within the constraints. Good luck! I'll be watching to see how this pans out.
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    I've had dream like that too, Yettie. The ones where the whole thing plays out with a plot complete with interesting camera angles and smooth transitions; a movie on an epic scale. It's so maddening when you wake up and it filters away. All you can do it try to write down what you can immediately before it fades. Bummer. How were the sex scenes? You can't tell me you didn't put in some of those.
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    Chapter 10

    Mann Ramblings commented on LJH's story chapter in Chapter 10

    another touch of tragedy. At least he saved them all. One of the things I love about this story is that you allow it to run its course and play its part without shying away from the possible outcome, even when it may be unpleasant. It's far too easy to edit yourself for a possible negative reaction. I like that a certain mystery about the outcome will always be there. I haven't predicted the plot line yet. Nice.
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    I only knew Vic through chat since becoming a member last September and I'm envious of those of you who had the chance to know him better. His entrance into the chat room always created a flurry of energy and excitement that I am going to miss greatly. Everyone will miss his kindness and sense of humor. His loss saddens me immensely and it must pale in comparison to those of you who were close to him. I miss him and I hardly knew him. Goodbye, Vic. It was an honor.
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    Erron Murfin is the newest crew member on board the Santa Claus, piecing his life back together with the help of the crew and the chef, Gamin, a long time family friend. Sometimes starting over is easy. Other times the past and secrets of others make it much more difficult. Erron simply wants to belong. Shouldn't that make it simple?
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    Chapter 4

    Mann Ramblings commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 4

    and a glimmer of hope appears. You have done a great job of keeping a realistic tension over the waiting game that accompanies surgery. The frustration and helplessness is staggering at times. The conversation with Alex and Kei nearly brought a tear to me eye, it was so touching. Kei's parents, however deserve a frontal lobotomy to improve their personality disorders. Hopefully this whole experience opens their eyes. If not, I hope Kei turns his back on them and gathers his support from the people who will love him without embarrassment. Lovely chapter
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    I think that's a great idea! Now we just have to get rid of that need for a pesky day job!
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    Great advice! I've been very fortunate with my editing experiences and I loathe to think what would happen if I lost my editor. I'd hate to have to train a new one!! (Honestly, I think it happened the other way around.)
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    Chapter 2

    Mann Ramblings commented on Renee Stevens's story chapter in Chapter 2

    This is such a lovely sliver of life. You are doing such a wonderful job of making a mundane chain of morning events seem interesting and engaging. I'm really enjoying this. I absolutely love the "First Line" format. Clever little pieces of flash fiction. Love it.
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    Great response, Renee. We can all identify with the pleading child/puppy scenario. I wish an idea had come to me last week. I love the prompts and do them whenever the idea flashes in my head. I think they are a great exercise that all of us can benefit from. Kinda liking the "Gamble" option this week. Let's see...
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    hmm... that question for Cia seems awfully familiar. LOL
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    If no one speaks up, feel free to use one of mine, Cia.
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    Dolores's mystery prompt response was excellent. I'm hoping to see it expanded and made into something grander. Unfortunately, with the anthology last weekend there weren't any prompts, but hopefully we'll see some interesting responses I have to think carefully for this one...
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