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Looking forward to reading this as you add to these first three chapters.
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Did not see that coming. Good chapter!
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Hope, Loss, and Tears
starboardtack commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in Hope, Loss, and Tears
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Wonderful story in every way,
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This is pretty damned intriguing!!!! (And that is a good thing LOL).
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This looks like a hard read. That is not a bad thing at all. Hard work, good fruit. Interested in seeing what comes next.
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Great two chapters. I love your ability to convey both internal and external turmoil. Can’t wait to see what’s next. (Btw, there is just something about Charles that I really like. He may seem to be a secondary character but he has the potential to play a major role in the lives of these two men. I hope you find one for him.)
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You ar e a consummate storyteller -- and your descriptions bring it all to life.
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Chapter 1 - Riding the Beast
starboardtack commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Riding the Beast
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You've got me hooked -- yet again. 👍👍👍
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To Everything There Is A Season
starboardtack commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in To Everything There Is A Season
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You.did way better than okay.
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While Noah and Jordan may Ben leaving, ya'll don't be a stranger. Come back soon. Looking forward to reading more of your work. Thank you for several very enjoyable weeks. Y'heah????
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Great ending. Don’t be a stranger!
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Wonderful chapter. Smart, well written, good dialogue. FWIW, I think having Noah's mother come around would be the easy way out. Think how interesting a story line would be if they had to navigate family relationships and interactions with mom staying true to her convictions. Not easy but certainly rich.
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One of the best chapters I have read anywhere. You captured the moments beautifully. Also, thank you for conveying the beauty of the dialect. I loved it.
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Chapter 23- We had the same blue eyes
starboardtack commented on Another Gay Writer's story chapter in Chapter 23- We had the same blue eyes
I guess when you wrote that Dad was not going to stick around you meant it! Great cliff hanger, not just as regards dad but as regards James, too. -
Powerful, nuanced, authentic
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Chapter 14- Alfreda’s Make-Up
starboardtack commented on Another Gay Writer's story chapter in Chapter 14- Alfreda’s Make-Up
I just read through all the chapters this weekend. Powerful, painful story. Content is excellent but it does need a bit better proofreading. Not enough to keep me from eagerly anticipating the upcoming chapters. Good work. -
If not for authors like you, I would be too. LOL
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I am half-way through chapter 2 and am looking forward to catching up. This story, so far (and I have no worries about future chapters), only goes to further establish your credentials as a consummate storyteller and wordsmith. Thank you for your efforts.
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The Light in the Darkness
starboardtack commented on jkwsquirrel's story chapter in The Light in the Darkness
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Good start. Interested in seeing where you take this.
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No apologies needed for combining the two chapters. It worked out well and I appreciate the continuity that you were able to maintain. Interesting how the story is developing I look forward to reading more as you post.
