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Well I guess the fact that Mark isn't worried about the article is a good thing. But the fact that he hasn't answered any of Ben's calls and isn't back is sorta weird. Hopefully someone hasn't got him plastered and put him in the paper for a nice bit of cash,. You would be surprised at what some "friends" will do for a spot of cash. Here's hoping that he just got lost in the time and will show up soon with a funny excuse.

Wow KC what a great chapter. Very hot and steamy yes but also very sweet and intimate. It wasn't all the physical aspects you also showed Asher's and Micheal"s insecurities with it that made it unique and beautiful. It was Michaels first time he was scared of the unknown but wanted it very much. With Asher he had the experience but not with Michael he knew he had to tread carefully or he could scare Michael away for a very long time. That is what made that love scene so beautiful and unique to them both. And you did an excellent Job add to that the hilarious ending and this chapter was intimate, funny and I think really cemented their relationship.....and like Blue bear said ....more please!!!!!

This story was one of the first I read and have reread it at least twice since...It is definitely a must read story

that doctor needs to be reminded that with the papers that were signed at that hospital everything is to go thru alex not the parents.. And I rather like Kei's idea of a cell for the parents especially that father, OMG i wanted to slap him silly when he used those words and that icy tone on Kei. Thank god for Shirley

Hmmmm great writing but I sorta feel let down at the end just like Rhyder did. He was looking for a warm connection someone to care for someone just for him. All he got was a quick lay. I have a feeling that will probably be all we see of Jase he got his first and now will he be onto the next.. I feel sorry for Rhyder in that he was wanting and expecting a lot more than he got and the booze didn't help. But on the other hand he had been warned so just hope it doesn't come back to bite him in the ass. Jase is what he is but what I do hold against him is the fact that he deliberately went out to get Rhyder drunk to squash him inhibitions and I do hope that comes back to bite Jase in the ass.

This story has been heartbreaking at the beginning that slowly moved into a beautiful love story. This last chapter was beyond beautiful, I can't find the words to describe it. When I first met Noah he seemed so young but the Noah I seen tonight was ageless. His comment about not wanting to fill the hole in Scotts heart but rather carve his place beside the hole left by Steve brought tears to my eyes. By the end of the chapter after reading the inscription and then hearing steves response those same tears were rolling down my face. Both of these men have had experiences that I would never wish on anyone but the love they have for each other surpasses everything. Most people would be appalled at what Noah did that night, but to me it showed the strength of character and the unlimited love that he holds for Scott. This has truly been an awe inspiring night that is a beautiful place to not end this story but rather to say gently... Til we meet again.

I know Jackie is his sister but man is she nosey and not a great judge of character. And as to Trey there could be numerous reasons why he doesn't answer his cell maybe he isn't allowed it wherever he was on base or the battery was dead ...lots of reasons lol. My question is if it had been Ted coming out the bedroom door that morning instead of Trey would he have gotten the same 3rd degree from his sister lol?

I loved Nora's remarkable about Krill stating the Chuck had gotten laid. They were in love that's what make people change overnight not a couple of orgasms. Very true but was funny hearing her say it. Personally I'm not sure what is worse the giddy five year wanting to go to a party or the pussy munching wanna be. Both are kinda high on the ugh ewwww factor. Great chapter can't wait til the dinner with Kelli. So when does the other Kelly make an appearance, cause it's only fair the Chuck does the "meet the family night".

what a scorching ending...very very hot......still feel bad for Korl you need to find him someone pup he's lonely.. I don't want to say goodbye to these two but \i know i must at least \i will still get glimpses every once in a while....I like the change in the final words so much nicer than the final The End

I had some trouble following the military jargon, but your explanations were clear. It's sad to see the percentages of the deaths and even worse to know that it would be young teenagers who would be dieing. I'm glad billy came to the aid of kevin..i think Arthur was quite correct with the assumption that at the first opportunity it would be a court Marshall to save face. I was sad when Casey died but it was a given one in four died...it was well written and even given the statistics and theme it was a great story.

Now there is two groups of boys...strength in numbers. Arthur has set himself up to do more than just rescue Robbie.

The headman is a dork.

This story has some of the elements of The Dragon's Treasure. Hopefully by them going farther into Eblis before they turn back to Arcadia it won't cause Arthur to miss them. Not only that but he won't be looking for five boys alone.

Haleys grip would most likely be very strong since his arms and hands would be used to keep his balance. But I imagine his lice was very hard even without a bad leg.

Must be an awful big pile of cannabis either that or the boys are really small. Will be interesting to see what happens.

that was sad. what if........

Danny and his AI are a couple of smart cookies......more please soon!!!!

Things are starting to come together.....its getting more interesting by the paragraph.

So the dude killing senators is a bad guy he engineered it so all the enhanced would be on this task force......so is this a good thing or not.....i. Guessing bad...but the fact that Danny caught onto it could be a good thing.....right?

So another twist to the thread......intriguing

LOL something tells me there is going to be constant mirror images in this task force.

That doesn't sound good for tomorrow and Danny.

Can I have Dannys eye for gems lol. Wonder long before they make a connection between the writer of the navigational paper on jumps and the navigator on the Burke?

So Danny is a certified genius that is tucked out of the way and Tom is extremely popular

Tom seems to spend a lot of time lost in thought. Wonder why the icy comeback after Dannys innocent remark about Crash