Timothy M.
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Just what I could imagine aliens saying about us, though I'm not sure what it is humans know.
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Getting Eric to use a computer for mundane things might be OK. But i can't see him sitting in a public library and browsing gay stuff. And I don't mean porn, but anything LGBT related. If he could afford an iPad and internet connection at home, it would be different. Even my eighty+ year old parents have worked that out.
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Since they were stupid enough to open the door I can't feel sorry for them.
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Hiding in plain sight is always best.
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Well, I'm hooked and I look forward to reading more about Jerry and his Psionic Pack.
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I agree with Quentin, except Sasha is selfish too, since Ricky may well end up in prison for doing what his boyfriend asks.
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I liked all the forest parts, they worked really well. I was a little surprised Jason didn't drive him to the hospital, and how Sean could drive with an sprained ankle, but then I realized he might have automatic transmission, and maybe Jason didn't have a license. Sean was lucky the sprain was OK after only three weeks, but the relatively fast first aid (cold water and elevation) probably helped. It was a little strange they never met up until the exhibition, but I guess Sean wasn't mobile at first and perhaps they didn't live close to each other. The ending was sweet but I kept wondering whether they had come out to each other before. If not, Sean's kiss was brave intuition.
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BONUS CHAPTER: Green Eyed Monster
Timothy M. commented on CassieQ's story chapter in BONUS CHAPTER: Green Eyed Monster
Awesome bonus chapter. It's great to see Mikeal display a more confident and mature outlook. I'm relieved they managed to turn a situation with insecurity and jealousy into a deeper bond in their relationship. I liked Adam's cool and measured reaction to John's stupid behavior and his interpretation of why his ex turned up was surprising but logical. Thank you for this unexpected gift. -
I'm not sure what to think of this party. Robbie does seem to have a few enjoyable moments, but I still think he would have preferred to have been without it. Interesting that the principal offers to help with the anti-gay 'parents' and Robbie might use this as a weapon against Don. 'I'll tell Mr Andrews you're upsetting me with your stupid ideas about me not being gay.' But why does the principal think the attack was about Robbie being male (gender) rather than being gay (orientation / sexuality) ?
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interview Ask an Author 2.0 - #6
Timothy M. commented on Carlos Hazday's blog entry in Gay Authors News
I liked the double question, so full credit to whoever sent you the question and your way of dealing with it. The answers were interesting, and so was Dodger's explanation about his story. -
I'll be back when you post more. Right now I'm just confused.
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I have no clue what's going on, but hopefully we'll find out soon.
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Flora, Fauna & a Waterfall.
Timothy M. commented on Rigby Taylor's story chapter in Flora, Fauna & a Waterfall.
In Denmark we're taught to remove ticks with a special set of tweezers and told never to use the kerosene trick as it may cause the tick to 'vomit' into the wound, increasing the risk of infection, in particular Lyme disease. See also https://www.cdc.gov/ticks/removing_a_tick.html or https://www.wikihow.com/Remove-a-Tick btw a study has shown nudists are much less likely to have ticks, compared to people wearing clothes. Often the tick will be on your trousers and bite you when you put them on the next day. -
Much better. It makes a lot more sense now. The above is the downside of having an editor who's a stickler for rules. If you don't wanna know, don't read the spoiler box.
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He does say no one else should see any marks he leaves on Chris, so this means they won't be on his neck or other visible places.
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You don't have to read the chapter again just because I do one comma edit.
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Every time I read this it warms my heart and bring tears to my eyes.
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With Robin or Mick ?
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It's not his first time. He fucked Mick after Takashi whipped him. That was kinda hot too.
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Why did I never leave a comment on this chapter? I think it was because I was overwhelmed with all the implications. But it's about time Mick finds out who he is, and Takashi and Riley seem to be just the ones to help him. Especially with Takashi able to help him with his empathy problems. And if he's hunted, who better to help than an overprotective Guardian werewolf.
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Those are very good points. I'd love to know what @Rambling Robin thinks about that theory.
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It's so interesting to read the story and the comments again, when I know a lot more about Mick and the others.
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Ugh, I still have to skim this chapter, it makes me so upset. But the way Mick tells Guy why he won't go to hospital was sharp and vivid and should make Guy rethink his approach to helping Mick. And I still think Mick should have let him rip Lester apart and fuck the consequences.
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Good choice but get ready for the roller coaster. Both the good and bad bits are epic. You may go from to within ten paragraphs.
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What do you hate about the format ? There is nothing wrong with have equal amount of spaces between paragraphs, it's more restful for the eyes than shifting back and forth from no space to single space or even worse from single space to double space. Don't make a new paragraph for every line, if you don't like all the spaces in the text. But if you have dialogue, you have to make a new paragraph every time there is a new speaker. It's one of the subtle ways to avoid the he said, I said speech tags.
