Timothy M.
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Ohh - he's looking at the naughty books. He'll have to bring some home to console him after the manager's call.
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Great to see that all the guesses of Jim needing to bite Sawyer to fix the problem were actually correct.
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The reason they all felt so tired and strange in the South was because they existed in two places at once. And Kylara became quite unhinged.
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He certainly has the right attitude towards impressing a dragon.
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Serves I'kut right for being so slow to decide about the hangings and trying to get as much time out of then for his marks.
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Maybe S'brin will be a bit more careful after this. But I guess he cannot suppress his true nature for long.
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I like how D'gar is so intelligent and have these insights which makes him more mature.
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Yes, it's interesting that green riders get special lessons on what to expect, but why don't the other colors get lessons on how not to hurt their partner.
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D'gar is a lot more sensible and caring than his mate.
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At least T'bor is happy to work with F'lar in this matter, since he will get rid of his rival for Kylara. And of course no one should trust her with anything important.
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Just because we knew F'lar, F'nor and Lessa were decent and cared about Pern and the Weyrs, I can see why D'gar wouldn't know. And they can see the same and that he didn't keep it a secret for bad reasons, but tried to deal with it himself, as far as possible. And I be Ramoth will scare the hell out of his dragon too, and get the truth if necessary. Although - is it safe for Lessa to go between when she's pregnant and in the first trimester ? There was something about that in The Dolphins of Pern.
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Well, I think D'gar got the balance right between exposing F'drun's nastiness and keeping his word to his 'spy'. Also I loved the solution of keeping H'rek at Benden. Together with D'gar becoming Weyrlingmaster it might make F'drun a little more hesitant to go after them. Oh, and H'kel is absolutely right about Lessa loving to irritate R'gul, as payback for being such a hidebound idiot before F'lar took over.
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He did hear about the Masterharper Robinton being close with F'lar and Lessa, but the Gather was only one day, and D'gar hasn't had any reason to visit the Harper Hall.
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I hope D'gar's decision not to tell his weyrmate about F'drun's threats doesn't come back to bit him in the ass.
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To be fair, if F'drun is straight at the end of the Kinsey scale, being forced by his dragon to have sex with guys, because they cannot catch a gold queen, may not be much fun. Although, I believe another Pern fan fiction writer (DKlover) brought up the idea of having a willing Weyr female join the dragonriders in those cases, but only if the green rider had someone he wanted with him too. Still doesn't excuse him bullying and harming the green riders, because he somehow blames them. And he could just stick with having his dragon join queen flights and find a girl to be with - but then they probably won't have anything to do with him, and serves him right.
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I like the way H'rek is both supportive and assertive when D'gar starts to blame himself. They're good for each other. I bet those boys are future brown and green riders.
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Meetings and Confrontations
Timothy M. commented on Mawgrim's story chapter in Meetings and Confrontations
Well, F'drun is stupid as well as nasty. Forewarned is forearmed. I hope D'gar reports the isses with him and the young bronze weyrlings to Fnor. -
I'm happy D'gar did well, and I like how you weave his outlook and actions into what we know from the books. E.g. browns flying queens (as @Clancy59 pointed out) and Lessa being able to hear all dragons. Good thing he managed to talk to Fnor about those issues too.
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Why didn't D'gar talk to his Wingleader about having Gr'lon in their wing ? Wouldn't it be something the Wingleader should bring up with the Weyrleader ?
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I like how you show all the subtle differences which are likely to catch the old-timers by surprise.
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Aww thanks Back at ya
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Maybe I can get something written over Easter. My vacations starts today.
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Kerry is a genuinely nice guy, and the band deserves success.
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Reminds me of https://satwcomic.com/sports-are-not-for-sissies
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it can't be the Y chromosome, as there would be no female werewolves in that case, since they get X chromosomes from both mother and father. But it can still be inherited via the male. But in that case Maddie's wolf genes do not affect Sawyer.
