Timothy M.

Thanks, Def, I glad my lady readers approve of Tor for Kristin, although nothing may come of it. But I think we'll definitely see him at Christmas. Of course, before then we have the engagement party. and perhaps some night-clubbing? Yeah, this chapter was probably the most light-hearted so far. Thanks for noticing the part about Chris, I don't think he's fully aware of the regard everyone has for him. But it's nice the respect and considerate behavior is mutual. Yay, finally someonce mentioned the twins discussing dancing, I had fun writing that scene.

Indeed, Tim, what more could we want? Thank you for the compliments, and I'll try to keep us in touch with this bunch of guys more often.

Aaaww, dragon, I'm sorry! Not Thanks for the nice words, I'm glad you approved of the blond vikings, jocks, dancing etc. It's a relief no one has complained about the chapter length so far.

LOL, I promise to be discreet about Tor and Kristin. After all, this story is from Russ' POV and he certainly does not want to know any details about his older sister's love life. Hearing about Evan's fun in bed is more tha enough to have Russ Thanks for saying the interaction was interesteing and for sticking with the story.

Thanks, LL, I'm happy you think Kristin might become interested in Tor. I think you're right, once she makes up her mind about him, she'll be able to ignore Evan. Yeah, Russ did show some brotherly love, right? It's awesome to have at least one reader rooting for Chris, he's usually in the background, but that doesn't mean he isn't important.

Thanks, lux, glad you enjoyed it. No teasing intended, I mean to follow them all the way to their wedding in spring. Provided readers don't get bored with the story before then.

Thanks, CG, I'm those Danish men have captured your heart, and that you approve of Tor. Kristin does seem to agree, eh? Yes, the dancing I hope I can live up to your expectations. Don't know what I was thinking, letting the twins persuade me to that.

Thanks, Gary, I'm glad you liked how Russ is influencing Evan, it was an important development in my mind too. Same with the situation with Chris, because it's one thing to have your boyfriend or your twin back you up, but somehow more flattering to earn the approval of a man like Chris. I'm also pleased Tor came across as a great guy even with the quick glimpses we've had so far. But of course, since Jacob is 'perfect' he needs an awesome BFF.

There was one for Prompt 502, but JAR forgot to add it to the topic, and I forgot to remind him. Sorry.

Well, I think Jackson needed to go with his friends in order to find out how he feels about them and Ally, and I think his mother is a nasty bitch. I hope dinner is burnt black and the whole house smells disgusting. She doesn't give a fuck about Luke, only about herself looking good in the eyes of Cindy and the churchy bunch. Look at the casual way she dismissed his very real problem with swimming, coach and college. And yeah, I know he initially wanted to go to the park and be with Luke, but that was an important thing for him to experience. And yes, if he had any backbone he wouldn't have let himself be persuaded. But seriously, Toby and Derek are his best friends and they finally show up and want to include him, and he's supposed to say no ? He's a teen. Not gonna happen. Plus I think his worries about Cindy's sharp eyes seeing him and Luke acting different were quite realistic. So staying away might be a good idea. Hopefully, Henry will rope him and Luke in to help with something, so they can spend time together without the crazy witches hovering around. Of course, Luke will be very upset to hear he spent the day with his friends. And now Jackson is so embarrassed he doesn't want to face him. Thanks to his self-righteous, interfering, oblivious, uncaring toad of a mother. Rant over

LOL, you got there first.

Not to worry, LL, as long as you didn't miss reading it. But I'm always glad to hear your thoughts. Thank you for supporting the idea of Patrick having John with him when meeting Fiona. Since he also works in education or at least a related field, Patrick got inspired to ask. Of course, the simple fact he has a friend to ask, was pretty significant for our (previously) lonely hero. Glad you find the idea of two weddings awesome.

I let Jacob, Chris and Tor talk and dragged Evan over to the next bench. I wanted a quick word with him. “I think we shouldn’t tease Kristin about Tor.” “Why not?” I could almost see all the mischief Evan was planning in his eyes and face. “What if they have a chance of falling in love? We might ruin it by teasing, because Kristin will get all defensive and cold. You know she will,” I pleaded. “You’re sweet, Russ, but just because you fell in love with a blond Viking, it does

I can recall starting on Trials and Tribulations and liking the story from the beginning, but somehow I cannot recall finishing it. Now I know what to read over the weekend.

Thanks, LL, good of you to confirm this matter, I did wonder whether I was the only one to know of these cases of new-spouse-before-kids. I don't think he's controlling or abusive in any way, in fact Peter says he treats his wife well. It's more her being a wet noodle and wanting to please to keep her new relationship safe. You're absolutely right about the guys needing to be honest and communicate, but there are so many things to talk about, it's hard to find time for it all (I have a long list, lol). Team Michael rules

Thanks, Def, you're absolutely right about them coming closer together with everything they share. Peter may have been reluctant at first, but with Patrick spilling the beans about his family, his fiancé knew he would be hard to shock. I have the feeling Peter's mother sees it as a good choice now her son has deserted her for a new sinful life in London. But never mind, Moster is the best. glad you liked the intimate fun

Desperately tries to suppress inner editor don't do it, don't... Arrrrgghhhhh you had a haunch sorry

Hey, Def, I didn't know we had you to thank for bringing Dayne to GA. much appreciated. As for Wolf like me all I can say is: Wolf! Kitten! Iceman! Rabid terrier!

Mutual Admiration Society But joke aside, this covered the attraction and admiration between these two guys perfectly. Tobyn was intrigued by Kellar's explanation of his healing ability (as were we), and his hopes for his pack rose. At the same time his apprehension about his own feelings towards the handsome shifter also increased, yet he was honest about how awesome he thinks Kellar is. We only caught glimpses of Kellar's emotions, but his reaction showed his appreciation of being considered a friend, his commitment to 'going home' with Tobyn (an intense moment even though subtle in the telling), and his delight in being told how Tobyn experienced the healing and that his halting explanations made sense. Kellar has no problem with his priorities, but Tobyn has a harder time. As several readers have said, Tobyn feels responsible for his pack's well-being, which includes helping to sire off-spring. He forgets there's such a thing as artificial insemination. But we can admire him for putting duty and loyalty ahead of his own wishes, so it's unfair to say he has his priorities wrong. Of course we already see the beginnings of a pattern of love, although that may be wishful thinking. There was a small hint of Kellar seeing a pattern of color in Tobyn which gave him pause, maybe because it was unusual - indications of an Earth mate aura, perhaps? No matter, the friendship and trust are coming along beautifully, and we will await which other patterns you'll weave into this wonderful shifter tale.

Awesome, I'll have to go through them all later. If you know the years the ads featured, could you add it to your posts? great idea with this topic, W_L

Lars von Trier made this commercial back in 1993 and it created quite a bit of furore. The two guys were a couple in real life too. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-f_v7Gs3y9M don't read the spoiler until after you have seen the ad.

Alex may be an interfering busybody but I loved seeing her chastise David's dad for not making sure his son saw a counselor. Sam told her about David's breakdown to ensure exactly this outcome, including nagging David about getting help.

That was spot on, dugh, you're good at expressing the essence in a few succinct words.

LOL, I did wonder.

Thanks, Tim. I knew you'd agree with Peter's tactics of doing his best to ignore the matter. Creating a new life in London with Patrick should do the trick.