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Timothy M.

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  1. An imp from Hell teams up with an angel from Heaven for joint missions in the human world. With Imp focusing on sex and Angel on love, their goals differ considerably. Imp is determined to win the wicked game and if he can annoy Angel along the way, so much better.
  2. I know, I know, dragon The shifters / packs are Hiding in Plain Sight by being careful with the words they use, and what they do and don't do. Unfortunately, the latter includes not using human hospitals, so they cannot get help with the malaise or even with the illness of Tilly's sister. But more importantly, both men are hiding their new and scary feelings, yet putting them out there in plain sight for us to see - well, also for the other man to see, if he chooses to notice and think about it. Tobyn saying he wants to know everything about Kellar, and the healer saying their rock is now his favorite place. The way they both react to the word 'girlfriend' and lots of other small but significant details sprinkled around by our clever author. The Burnt umber. It's complicated. also points the same way. Being a shifter is complicated, even without the malaise, and sorting out your feelings is difficult, espcially when they are new and you're not only getting the burnt umber color but perhaps more. Their wolves know how right their connection is, but the humans have to work it out too. For Tobyn he has to try to understand Kellar's descriptions and explain all the shifter stuff and answer the questions arising from Kellar's abilities, and at the same time deal with his attraction to the amazing man who may be able to save more than Tilly's sister. It's difficult to remember those two men are barely out of their teens, but i guess taking on responsibilty so young has matured them fast - another thing they have in common. Wonderful chapter once more.
  3. Timothy M.

    Chapter 8

    I think Jason turning Marco down was partly a lack of interest in casual sex, partly (unconscious) distaste for starting another relationship with sex, and partly Jason not wanting to become embroiled in the hot party scene in Kingston, small as it may be. I kept wondering whether Corey knows Marco? Surely, if he's been out in the gay community of Kingston, the hot italian would have hit on him sooner or later? Perhaps even successfully?
  4. Thanks, LL, I'm glad you think it worthy of the 50th ch. mark. Eric decided to pass the shock of Rob's hotel suggestion on to Nelson, and it worked! I think you may be right about Nelson's reaction, but hopefully by the time they get to prom night he'll be used to the idea. I'll get back to why Eric's parents agreed to the sleep-over. As for how the date night goes...
  5. You mean you're looking forward to the dinner date? I may decide not to wait for a prompt to continue the date, but I have a PPC chapter to get written first.
  6. Timothy M.

    Sharing

    I'm glad to know there is someone who can make instructions about preparing for sex even more boring than me. But the clincher was the clinical description of the actual fucking, I'm not surprised at Jay's comment which had me laughing hysterically. I seem to recall Greg and Lee having a similar discussion as Benny and Finn, I'll have to go back and check what Lee said about Finn. Or perhaps we'll find out in the next chapter? I'm glad Benny and Callie had a hot and sweet intimate interlude, the bath scene was such a tender aftermath. You'd almost think Benny had read Mikkel and Sam's instructions, and hopefully Cal will do as well next time. Thank you to both you and Gary for keeping the chapters coming.
  7. Thanks, Parker, I'm glad you think the prompt worked. Sometimes I find it quite difficult and artificial to strat with those first liners, so your compliment is much appreciated.
  8. Thank you, Gary. It's been a fun journey so far. Glad you thought the chapter cute. Jasper did another heroic friend act here, but then Nelson was there for him when he started dating Carolyn. Talk about straight boy drama, lol. Hehe, we'll get to the relieving of other pressures later. Eric upped the ante with his hotel comment, I think. But I'm sure Nelson will be up for the challenge.
  9. Thanks, CG. I promise you'll get the story. I started writing it and suddenly realized Eric wouldn't want to reveal it standing in the door or in front of Jasper. Yeah, the redhead is a loyal friend, who'll save his teasing for when he's alone with Nelson. Eric is displaying almost Rob-like non-shyness here. It's probably confidence brought out by having the boyfriend he's wanted for ages, as well as normal teen hormones. Hopefully, Nelson won't be too nervous by the time they get to the prom - or when he has Eric in his bed tonight.
  10. Timothy M.

    Brotherly love

    Aaaww, Gee, thanks. I loved that you binge-read CC, although I can't help wishing for a few more reviews along the way. But I know how it is to be caught up in reading. I may skip a few weeks or months here and there on the way to the wedding, but all the important events will be covered. Daddy Dearest isn't quite that crazy, but I'm sure we haven't heard the last of him. Glad to have another Chris fan on board. Yes, he's very much in love with Evan and likes the challenge. Hmm, a Chris-as-Dom pre-Evan? Not a bad idea. I'll have to think about that some more.
  11. Timothy M.

    Brotherly love

    Thank you, AC, I love that you mention Russ falling asleep, because I agree it showed he felt safe and comfortable in Tor's place. I hadn't thought about it, but you're right about Tor being slightly clueless in the beginning, in contrast to Russ (and Evan). But I think his hopes went up by the end of the evening. Yes! another vote for increase in Russ maturity.
  12. “You’re giving me a headache! Stop worrying, it’ll be fine.” Jasper stepped in front of me to end my pacing. “You’ve even got some decent clothes to wear this time.” He grinned and gave me a quick hug, before turning us both to face the mirror. “See, handsome and sexy, that’s us. Eric and Carolyn will be very pleased with their dates.” I had to admit we looked good. Jazz was wearing a charcoal shirt over new blue jeans, and his off-white jacket with dark grey cuffs and collar somehow f
  13. Timothy M.

    Brotherly love

    Thanks spikey, glad you liked the hot stuff. Considering all the drama and ranting which happen in other stories aren't you glad to have some nice romantic stuff to read? It's smooth sailing right now and plans for the future are looking good. What could go wrong? Thanks for reading and reviewing.
  14. You should have mentioned the topic about Anthologies to get more input.
  15. Timothy M.

    Early April

    I'm with Graeme here, the whole deal with Clarence is very fishy. Makes me think Gary has been visiting Toph's family and knows what Clarence is like. Charles may have been pestering Clarence, although it makes me wonder why he never interfered with his bad treatment before. Perhaps with Toph gone Clance began picking on other family members at Christmas and they suddenly realized what an arsehole he is. He got off much to easy - a few texts and Toph accepts his apology? For a whole life of snide remarks and nasty put-downs? And he expects all will be hunky-dory when they meet at Clarissa's wedding? And what's all this about Toph resenting Clarence? Did Gary understand this from what Toph told him? Why don't we get told what caused the resentment originally, since I assume Gary told him that too? While I'm happy for Toph he had a wonderful vacation and is falling in love, I'm not sold on Gary yet. His repeat on the whole you-need-your-family deal alarmed me and brought back the feeling of manipulation. I'm glad Toph remained unconvinced. While Gary may love Toph and have his best interests at heart, I can't shake the suspicion Gary wants Toph to return to Euphoria because then he would fit better into Gary's circles. He can be a nice little trophy 'wife' who paints and looks good on Gary's arm.
  16. Timothy M.

    Back on Track

    Bubba to the rescue, yay! Glad Ryan got everything sorted out and went back to Clayton. Very happy he said yes to moving in. Did Clayton call Bubba and ask him to call Ryan?
  17. Tillykke med fødselsdagen happy waving of the oldest current flag in the world
  18. Timothy M.

    Chapter 4

    I'm pleased Liron finally saw what he needed to do, both in relation to his dad and to Milo. His sister helped too, as I expected she would. I'm glad they found love of the forever kind.
  19. Timothy M.

    Chapter 3

    I'm normally a very sensible person and not a fan of letting your emotions rule you, but in this case I think Liron made the wrong decision. Milo's band mates like him and wanted him to come along and Krista would have been very pleased to have Liron's assistance on the whole tour. He has no job or other responsibilites, and Milo has promised to bring him back to Colston in September if things don't work out. Liron is hurting them both with his cowardice.
  20. Timothy M.

    Chapter 2

    Milo seems pretty determined and open about wanting Liron (permanently), and the sex is certainly out of this world. If Liron lets the man fuck him without protection he's already lost the fight to stay away from hurt. His heart was lost long ago and running away won't help. Of course, we know what Milo means when he says 'we' are leaving, but I understand why Liron doesn't.
  21. Timothy M.

    Chapter 1

    I like Liron, he's competent and confident about his abilities in his work, and prickly about the 'boy' epithet, but shy and unassuming when it comes to his crush. Not doing what a main band member tells you must be high on the no-no list, but I understand why he goes home. He's worn out, por guy.
  22. One prompt 504 written and sent off for editing.
  23. Timothy M.

    Chapter 9

    The brat did good, Dad will be proud of him. Introducing Ross to Todd was a great idea and running interference with Wu and Ross' mum was even better. Wu is really getting on my nerves, doesn't he know the meaning of the word privacy? Telling Ross' mom about the date was a new low, followed by another attempt to pressure his friend to date. I'm glad Ty thinks fast and is good at misdirection. I expect Ross to keep avoiding Wu, who deserves to feel ignored and pushed away. Might teach him some manners. Kevin is so sweet, he really wants to sate his curiosity, but he's afraid of hurting Warwick. I know you don't write sex scenes (a shame but I respect your reasons), but when I said I wanted to see more of Kevin this is exactly what I meant. Of course, I hope we also get some post-sex talks to find out how Kevin feels about it and about Warwick. Interesting how he's not physically attracted to unspecific guys including porn, yet the thought of being with Warwich sends his heart racing. Sadly, the transgender girl might have been just right for Kevin, if he hadn't fucked that up. I love it when Doug and other students at the school are surprised by Neil, and it was a great lead up to the next part. I chuckled when Jason described the Leopards as defensive and protective and how he baited and complimented Peter at the same time. Interesting to see Paul and Todd being scouted too. But I don't want to see the Leopards lose Todd, he's exactly the sort of experienced, solid player Henry was talking about during the interview with the head coach candidate. I think he did well, but of course I prefer Julie. I wondered if they tried to find out how Henry felt about female coaches, but presumably he wouldn't have applied unless he was OK with that? And it shouldn't be a topic at all same as with an openly gay player. Of course the conversation between Peter and Julie was even more interesting, and it did achieve the aim of clearing up the story about Dave. I can understand Julie's worries, but on the other hand Dave seems to be totally focused on the field, so I doubt he'll hear the spectators. Jim said something similar about the homophoic comments. And if players get punished for making inappropriate remarks it's a good signal to everyone else. Julie is quite right about the situation with the brat, everyone is trying not to show interest in order notto give the game away, and it's becoming glaringly obvious to people like her. LOL I look forward to everyone's reaction when the Blues or the Bulldogs snatch up Ty.
  24. Timothy M.

    Chapter 21

    I bet that scream brings Ash running to the room to kill whoever is hurting Kye. I doubt Kye's father knows what Barrett has done to his son, and the Marquis would never have let the boy go. But collecting the money sounds like a good idea.
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