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Thanks, CG. I immediately checked garbled, and to my relief it was spelled correctly, so your narrator was the 'grabled' one here. I think everyone has hopes for both Fiona and Michael's hospital stint. I'll do my best to ensure both goes well. Ohh, parishioners - such a lovely word. I'd quite forgotten about that. I'll have to use it next time. Glad you approve of Mr. Archibald and the reaction of the congregation, and I agree with your conclusion, since I sometimes think decent behavior towards LGBT happens in spite of religion rather than due to it.

Thanks, LL, glad you enjoyed the last glimpse of Angel and Imp. I loved that you noticed the shop decision. Patrick may love his work at the card shop, but it's definitely a third or fourth priority in his life now. And of course he wouldn't be able to focus on card making anyway with Michael in hopsital and his man needing him by his side. Mr. Archibald is not one to mince his words if people display such bad behavior and lack of manners. And he's always had a soft spot for the bright, but shy boy next door. Yeah, it would be nice if Fiona turned out to be a proper relative. I should start writing that scene now...

I hate Jade more for every chapter. And Cameron should have made sure the people nominated wanted to be elected. In fact, I don't think I like anyone in this story much, not even Seth after the drinking stunt he pulled. The rest are either jerks, selfish and thoughtless, or empty-headed. Except Dorian, who's simply spineless, but I still feel sorry for him, since even his so-called friends don't really try to understand.

Thank you jays, and welcome on board this love story train. I'm delighted you like my boys It's always nice to get some feedback and it keeps me writing.

Thanks, lux. I hadn't thought about this chapter as one setting us up for things to come, but now you mention it, I can see your point. Including the ending I'm glad you're still on board, and I'll try to do better with getting more chapters written.

Hi Fae, hope you liked the woman I 'modelled' after you. Glad you like the kitten story, and yes I think you're absolutely right about the telling difference between Patrick and his neighbor. We'll met Fiona soon, and I'm sure John will be able to 'name drop' his husband.

Thanks and welcome, I love when new readers pop in to let me know how they feel about my story. I hope you'll keep on reading and enjoying, and maybe leave me a comment now and then.

Oh well, I guess he tried. Seth is an idiot for making Dorian drink beer, when he doesn't want to, but maybe he can help with the room situation.

I'm delighted to hear that, because sometimes it's difficult to juggle all the different elements of the story. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Thanks, dugh, I agree about Fiona and the importance for Patrick in having at least some connection to his relatives. Hopefully, she can answer some of his questions and provide new insights, as well as providing a slic eof family. Patrick's parents were actually on friendly footing with most of the people living nearby (the Hawthornes moved in after they died), but Patrick was never much involved, so he's unaware of any kind interest from people like Fay. I'm pleased the ruckus of her sons made a vivid image for you. Patrick's kind help was indeed typical. As for Michael, see replies to other reviews.

Thanks, Gary, glad you liked all of it, including the explosions. I've had Mr. Archibald's little speech sitting in my story file for a while and was looking forward to posting it. Fiona is definitely a good prospect amongst Patrick's relatives, although that's not saying much, I suppose. I wouldn't want an angry Canadian Dad hunting me down on his bike, so I'll take good care of Michael.

LOL, you're right, i hadn't thought about that. The second one is completely accidental, but I did name Fay after Fae. Glad you liked the last glimpse of the A.I. team. Yes, Patrick has closed himself off to a degree where he didn't see any of the decent and friendly people, who were too polite to push themselves on him or didn't know how to approach him. Moster seems to be a good conduit. As to 'obvious religiousness' all I can do is cite SATW http://satwcomic.com/the-easy-way

Thanks, Tim. I totally agree with you about the haters and the futility of unchanging religion - I despise all kinds of fundamentalists no matter their creed. The Fiona - lol I like that. I have hopes for her, but let's see what happens. As for Michael, don't worry too much, since I don't want to be hunted down by a certain Canadian leading a horde of readers.

I think I've visited it, when I was on Tenerife, but I'm not sure. It's many years ago.

no weekly wrap-up ? how do we know it's been Sunday without it, lol.

I like stories where the responsible adults in school and the CPS actually do their best to help and managed to make a difference. She even admitted they had made a mistake in sending him back to school. It all felt very real, including the part about him still having down days and needing to hold Sean's hand. I hope the next story will show Asher taking more steps forward.

As Patrick had wished, the whole afternoon was pure family comfort. Grethe said Mr. Archibald was going to his daughter’s place for Sunday lunch, so they had parted ways outside. They spent time playing various board games before eating the roast she had prepared, and then Peter and Patrick cleared away the dishes while Michael and Moster took a nap. When they woke, Michael showed Patrick how to play Candy Crush on his tablet, while Peter had a talk with Grethe in the kitchen. Patrick wondered w

I'm not at all happy about the Kevin part in this chapter, so I'm going to mostly ignore it, except for saying I feel sorry for Warwick who may have lost his chance (small as it was) to get Kevin as his boyfriend. I was very pleased about the Hawks talking to Dave about drafting him, and being upfront about seeing him as a positive role model. I expect he'll talk to his counsellor about this too, and I hope the guy agrees with Charlie and puts a positive spin on this. Kudos to Isaac for making this happen, he's a great recruiting scout. I find it interesting and very telling about Ty's maturity that he worries about his plans going wrong and whether they are doing the right thing. The old impetuous and over-confident Ty would never have second-guessed himself, but then he would never have cared about helping in the first place. It was kinda funny how Neil resented not being told what was going on and sweet how Liam did his best to help, while patiently waiting for his boyfriend to work things out for himself. LOL, and I hope Steve is ready to have his party invaded by a bunch of Leopards, but I guess since most of his friends play footie, no one will mind. Of course we're all hoping that the tall forward Jason has his eye on may be Ross. Perhaps he caught people's eyes by partnering with Deon? On the other hand I think Ross could benefit a lot from a year or two with the Leopards, so I actually don't want him to be AFL drafted. (and I know you can't comment on this part, so no need to say so ) Happy to hear aout the weekly update from now on.

Thanks, Aditus, I'm delighted you enjoyed the story. I had so much fun coming up with ideas for Imp's behavior. Interesting that you think they're in favor of friends first, I hadn't thought about it like that. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Hmm, that first line looks useful...

I don't think Jade is a good friend to Dorian. She is manipulative, crude and without any empathy. OK so she get outraged on Dorian's behalf when she hears about his father and Dr. Avery, but she makes no effort to understand him or help. I bet she won't keep her promise about not telling the others what Dorian told her. Sydney is neither good nor bad as a friend, but Seth might actually become like the older brother Dorian compares him to. Although, what with dating Sydney and studying he won't have time for much else. I'm pleased that Dorian stood up to Jeff and I think he can see through his apparent interest to the greed underneed. Jeff want money and sex and Dorian should tell his friends that he won't go out with them if Jeff is there. He doesn't have to tell them why if he does not want to, though I think he should. Otherwise the stupid Jade bitch won't respect his wishes. I really hate her.

I smiled at Wini's efforts to understand Gemütlichkeit. Of course, as a Dane I have no such problem, as our concept hygge means exactly the same. Enjoying yourself in cosy surroundings with nice food and plenty to drink, talking with your friends or family in a relaxed manner. Hygge is extremely important in Denmark and I love that you introduce it here. I saw nothing wrong with Mr. McIntyre's wish to boast a bit and have the genius of his idea for a delivery system acknowledged. What's wrong with being proud of such an accomplishment? Especially since it does not seem to be common knowledge, or Wini would have heard about it. I can even see why he would resent her asking questions about Bauer, but that may be because I know the rest of the story. Interesting that Wini not only has worked out how close Thomas and Malcom are, but even dares hint about it to her mother. But I guess she knows her well enough to trust with this information. What was the attitude towards such relationships at the time? Were they simply not spoken about but otherwise accepted? I cannot help comparing with the English book/TV series Brideshead Revisited.

As usual your chapter title and note hint at several matters. I shall start with the Do no harm incantation, which is the one all healers should heed, well I guess all humans and shifters too. Kellar lives by the principle and he is focused on not hurting Tilly and Toby, because they are good people. Tilly's love for her sister and pain over her illness resonated with him, and his protective instincts and need to help came to the fore. Of course this became even more intense when he saw Adelin; he was ready to go all out to save her. This is where the significance of the chapter title kicks in. The first Dangerous Territory here is Kellar attempting to cure cancer in one sitting and save someone close to death. I've come across a few other stories with this type of healer, and the main danger is that they will work themselves into exhaustion and even death rather than give up. Not that I'm saying Kellar would fall into this final trap, but simply getting to the point where his healing gift became no more than a trickle was a new and scary experience for him. He has never encountered this limit before, nor faced a situation where he riskd losing his patient. Of course, Tobyn was there to help, first by reassuring Kellar no one in the pack would blame him if he failed. But even more importantly by lending his strength and energy. This was a new and most welcome discovery at the time, and something to be explored later. The subsequent need to be close physically (lying close together, holding hands, hugging and ultimately cuddling up naked to sleep) is the Dangerous Territory, or at least it is while Tobyn has not broken up with Tilly. What will happen when his mother arrives to thank Kellar for the unexpected saving of Adelin? I bet she's used to entering without knocking or ringing the door bell. Oh well, rather her than Tilly I guess. The final Dangerous Territory is the one where Kellar has admitted his feelings but thinks Tobyn can't return them or at least won't act on his own attraction and love for the mountain man. They both know getting naked in the shower and sleeping together is unwise, even 'dangerous' but the need to be close is a physical ache which cannot be denied. If they try, it will probably have bad consequences. In addition, denying an earth mate would probably be almost sacrilege if the shifters have any religion in this world. Not a good idea to piss off your Moon Goddess or whatever by refusing to mate. All I'm waiting for is Kellar's pointed question: "So how do you know you're earth mates?" Of course, Kellar is already being honest with himself about love at first sight. As always I loved all the subtle hints of the steadily increasing connection between the two men. Kellar's reaction to Tobyn's closeness as they enter the girls' home. His constant awareness of Tobyn's presence even when lost in his healing. Them holding hands while resting. Tobyn's worry about him and insisting on pampering Kellar with food and help in the shower. The way he describes how Kellar smells wonderful - and I'm all at his clueless dismissal of the fact Tilly couldn't smell anything. Their mutual banter and arousal in the shower and inability to fall asleep alone, but instant transportation to dreamland when together. We trust you will make their (and our) dreams come true.

Uh oh, Orin is going to go absolutely bonkers. Loved the visit to Etsu and Orin, it's great to know Cas' only nice cousin is happy. Bad cliffie I hope the next chapter will be soon, or we readers may have to break out the pitch forks and hunt you down!

Hmm, I think Toby may have earned himself a spanking. That was a very bad move on his part - several bad moves in fact. He should have known Daniel would never have offered to show Carlos his art or invited him in for lunch, if he wasn't at ease.