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Timothy M.

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  1. Thanks, Gary, I'm glad you felt the seriousness behind the fun. I wanted to show they still had the same closeness in spite of Eric gaining a boyfriend and Rob planning to leave for California.
  2. I think you're right, and Eric would probably agree no matter how annoying Rob can be. He knoew Rob has his back and Ron knows Eric is loyal no matter what. I didn't know the expression 'bros before hoes' until I read it here on GA. I agree it's not very nice, but in this case where the silly girls tried to throw themselves at Rob for one purpose only, it may be justified. Rob is definitely smarter than that, normally. His mom would have made sure of it.
  3. Tak, min ven - feel free to gush as much as you like Saying my conversation sounds natural is an amazing compliment, so I'm over the moon too. I'll have to pass part of the praise on to AC, I've learnt a lot from his editing of these prompts. Perhaps Trevor is better or more subtle than Rob at manipulation for Eric's own good? lol. I don't think there were any other candidates, or else no one wanted to run against Nelson who was Trevor's first choice. Will Rob scratch the itch or not? Truly I don't know, but it's an intriguing thought, right?
  4. Thanks, Drew, I guess I simply try to imagine what kind of brother I would love and 'hate' at the same time. Eric isn't uncomfortable about sex as such; only about talking about it with his brother or parents. And who can blame him? But you're right, it's fun too. Yeah, absence makes the heart grow fonder, eh? And Rob may return to the east coast eventually. Thanks for a lovely review, Drewbear
  5. You don't think Rob will do well in politics? I thought he has the charm and pushiness to excel. Or maybe we understand different things by the term 'political studies' I'm sure Rob is enjoying himself in California, but you still haven't told me the name of his college.
  6. Thanks for pointing that out, it was a significant moment for me too. Peter seems to know Patrick should look forward and not back. And basically he has a positive outlook on life. Yes, they do need adult lives with friends to balance their relationship and family circle. They both need other couples to mirror themselves in, and J & A are a good start. lol Anthony seems to enjoy the spice John adds to his life. Glad you liked the eavesdroppers too. I'm not always good at adding those small details, so it's nice when I succeed.
  7. Not to worry, Reader, I like late reviews which give me the chance to revisit earlier chapters. I'm glad you made a special mention of the imp and the angel, I have such fun including them, but they'll probably fade soon. There are plenty of imps where he came from. Aaaw on the family comment, now I want to you. Yeah, lots of chemistry and physical stuff between them. Oh, and about the acknowledgement: Velbekomme
  8. Aaww, thanks dugh. Me too, actually
  9. “What took you so long? And what have you done with Nelson?” Rob didn’t sound annoyed as he left the group of girls and sauntered over to meet Eric at his car. The younger teen was relieved. Saying goodbye to Nelson had taken longer than he thought. His lips were still tingling and his fingers remembered the silky feel of his boyfriend’s long hair. “He’s gone home with Jasper. Sorry about the wait.” “It’s OK. I was beginning to wonder if you had eloped with your lover.” Rob unlocked
  10. Timothy M.

    Safe Haven

    It was wonderful to catch up with Cal and Ben, and I'm glad they are now part of the study group. Cal needs the confidence of new clothes, but also an adoring boyfriend, supportive friends, and approving adults. He has had the latter in his grandmother, luckily, but a set of surrogate parents is great. I have to admit the truck thing confused me. Why could Jay work on his truck? Does he take the autoshop course? And if so why didn't he just pretend to own Miles' car? I hope they find another solution. Great chapter, as usual.
  11. Tillykke med fødselsdagen belated waving of Danish birthday flags
  12. I'm impressed at the way you portray the unhealthy relationship of Twoey and Eric, so subtle it's completely believable that Twoey falls under his spell. It's fucking scary but somehow fascinating too. Like standing in front of a rattle snake poised to strike. I'm hoping Alex will goad David into gathering his friends and make a plan to save Twoey. It's so sweet of Randy to worry about her, but I think she's too clever and cool to be hurt for long once David comes out (if he does).
  13. Selv tak, min ven You're so right about 'yet another retelling' but as you noticed he's resigned and even adds his own bits to the tale. Ohh, stag party, that will have to go into my story notes. John can be resposible for the fun if Anthony gets the best man role for Patrick.
  14. Ohh, Val, then you missed all the good bits. Quick, go back and start over. Sigh, Leaf Eyes and Wolf Eyes Visit pzetts3's gallery and see pictures of Arron and Chet.
  15. Yeah, the dinner with their ne best friends did have one small sad note, but perhaps this made their connection and fun even more special. I think your prediction about their future friendship is spot on. We'll meet Fiona soon, and i think we're all hoping for a good outcome.
  16. Thank for mentioning the growing confidence of Patrick, I think you're right about him improving this way too.
  17. I completely agree with you, Gary. Patrick is finally getting the family and friends he has longed for and deserves. The dinner was meant to show why he and Peter 'click' with the other couple, because they are good people too. I knew your romantic heart would like the J&A story, Kitt loved it too. I'm so pleased you noticed the couple listening in, I felt this was what we were doing, too.
  18. I did worry a bit about having John and Anthony take up most of the chapter, but they are important as friends. They will be Patrick and Peter's connection to the LGBT community of London and going to their wedding should be fun. Yes, Fiona and perhaps a few other relatives are looming in future chapters.
  19. Thanks, Parker, I had fun writing this chapter and I'm glad the story resonates with you.
  20. Thanks, dugh, I'm glad the chapter made up for waiting. Patrick didn't actually consider John and Anthony as friends until the day they found out about him and Peter and had a long talk. Before that day they were just customers. So yes, Patrick was very lonely, but fate is working hard to make up for it.
  21. Yeah, I may have gotten carried away a bit, lol. But at least the two couples understand what it's like to be swept off your feet by love.
  22. Sorry about the lack of Michael, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter nonetheless. I wanted Patrick and Peter to have one set of friends who would understand how a weekend spent together can be enough to know (or at least hope) you have found the love of your life. I don't think the neighbor is quite as bad as Bobby's father but she does tend that way. LOL, if you look at the date and year again, you'll realize Russ hasn't gone to Denmark yet. And while the two stories take place in the same universe and Denmark is a small country, having Peter related to the twins or Jacob is highly unlikely. But it's a fun thought.
  23. Yeah, they click on every level. Loved the intimacy between them. I'm glad Clayton told Ryan he wanted to take their relationship further. Looking forward to the weekend and the big reveal, you author. The history lesson was important and evoked memories for me too. So much fear and sadness and uncertainty. Here, we had the added tragedy of infected blood not being screened soon enough, which hit haemophilia sufferers hard. There was also focus on (bi-sexual) closeted men being 'dangerous' because they would spread the disease to women due to their often secret trysts with other guys. But there was also a lot of effort to educate people and plenty of government-sponsored campains for safe sex.
  24. Timothy M.

    Late March

    Huge steps forward, but also some setbacks as Toph attempts too much. Why is he is such a rush to finish his portfolio? He knows he cannot force himself to paint, he has to be inspired and in the mood. But I guess the stress also came from desperately trying to get everything on canvas while he had ideas. Breaks are important though, and Gary seems to know what Toph needs. A two week vacation might be over the top, but I suspect Gary has more than de-stressing Toph in mind. His instincts seem dpot on since it prompted Toph to sleep with him - and more - just like after the successful birthday party. I was interested to note that Toph gave his brother Charles the right to share his phone number according to his own judgement. But he has not been in touch yet, so he may be cautious. Niles is a good friend to Toph, I hope he finds someone nice to love instead.
  25. Not surprising since his brother seems to jump into bed with the guys JJ is attracted to.
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