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Chapter 10 Housekeeping and dinner plans
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 10 Housekeeping and dinner plans
LOL, I didn't mean to post chapters to both stories so close together, but you're right about being busy. Good luck on learning Danish, but at least it's easier to read than to speak. Otherwise, you'll have to rely on the footnotes. -
That's an awesome compliment, Tim, because intimacy and honesty are two importants parts of their relationship. I had fun doing the aftermath of the dancing, so I'm glad you like both. I'm doing my best with getting another chapter written. Tor is quite inspiring, actually.
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LOL, Def, I'm sure Russ and Jacob will be doing more pole dancing eventually. Don't forget Evan told his twin about doing a 'hands-free' in that position, and Russ might want to try the same. Glad you liked the dancing, I was a bit unsure about it. To be fair to Evan, his parts of the dances are a lot more advanced / complicated, so that's why he has to work hard. And perhaps Mikkel is a more demanding teacher than Oliver. Russ needs to relax and trust in himself, once he has learned the steps. The difficult part will be to chose the music and describe the show. Yeah, it's time Kristin and my faithful female fans have some fun too, and Tor might be perfect for that.
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Thanks, CG, it's so wonderful to have your thoughts on my story again. I'm glad you liked Tor, even if he isn't a red-head. Hmm, yeah, the Asatro - it seems fine on paper, but the old Norse gods are perhaps less than nice in their behavior, although not as bad as the Greek gods. But the parties are probably more fun.
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Hey Drewbear, I'm glad you liked your birthday chapter includng the pole / lap dance. The idea of the twins and their men in leather seemed hot to me, so it's nice to know I'm not alone. Let's hope Mikkel and Oliver can get the twins' dancing close to perfect, but I'm sure Jacob and Chris will appreciate the effort no matter what. Tor, hmmm, yes, let's see what I can come up with. But don't forget Kristin will be leaving in a few days' time.
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I had fun adding to this part after our birthday dance for Drew discussion in the CotT, glad you liked it. We'll have to ask pzetts3 to come up with a proper Tor, she did so well on Jacob. Goood point about the dancing giving Russ confidence. If he wears tight leather pants and wriggles his butt in time to the music, I think his fiancé will be more than satisfied, lol.
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I'm glad you found the initial scene hot, and it's wonderful and cute how you adore Jacob. I think the dancing will provide additional fun in later chapters, and no CC chapter without a bit of romance from the newly engaged couple(s). Lol, with so much eye candy for us guys, there need to be something for the ladies too, right? Although if I keep adding characters and sideplots I'll never finish the story. But you know all about that, Gary.
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Welcome back, CG, I'm glad you can hear my story now - although I wonder what the Danish phrases sounds like, lol. Yes, Jacob must have felt there was unfinished business since he kept Russ' box of mementoes, but I bet he hadn't foreseen giving them back like this. Russ may prefer to bottom, but he should at least try to top - and he may enjoy it more than he imagines. Thank you so much for taking the time to write a review.
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Thank you, AC, I loved that you saw immediately how important the shared intimacy was for the relationship. It was a huge step forward for Russ, and the wonderful experience has probably laid quite a few unspoken worries to rest. Dancing was a great way to bond with each other, but also with Oliver and Mikkel. They are good role models, I think. I liked the Russ / Jacob reuniting too, it was easy and fun to write. I'm sure Tor will be happy to drop his shirt and show off his tattoo.
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Yes, yes it does, doesn't it? I simply couldn't resist. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and I'm writing the next one as we speak.
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LOL, yes I do seem to have an unlimited store of blond hunks in my imagination. We'll have to see what pzetts3 can come up with of Tor images after the next chapter, where we'll learn more about him. I'm already 1,200 words in and having fun.
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Chapter 9 Shopping trips
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 9 Shopping trips
You get Peter so well, Gary. He was half teasing and half serious about missing Patrick and needing a good morninng kiss. When I read the beginning of chapter 9 of Treading Water I knew you understand the deep aching need for the love of your life, espcially when you have just found him against every expectation. Of course, Peter knows their relationship is solid, so he's able to turn his need into a little fun stalk-and-kiss game, but on the oher hand he is probably also aware that baring this part of him says to Patrick 'you're not alone in feeling this way.' I love how you pointed this out and yeah you're right abou 'empowering' and 'flourish' too. -
Hopefully the combination of Kye telling about Lee and the presense of his brother will get him the attention and care he should have received in the first place. But I foresee more heartbreak for Kye, not only from his brother knowing wha happened to him, but perhaps also bad news about his parents.
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Chapter 10 Housekeeping and dinner plans
Timothy M. posted new chapter in The Cardmaker and the Caretaker
Once Michael had left the breakfast table to watch his beloved cartoons in the living room, the adults made plans. “I’m thinking about booking a flight to Copenhagen tomorrow. I’ll spend Thursday packing and sorting out things in Denmark, and hopefully I can return no later than Friday.” Peter gave both of them an entreating look and Patrick knew what it meant. Fortunately, he also knew Grethe’s answer from their talk in the supermarket, and it was easy to second the request. “Please stay her- 33 comments
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I tried to keep my eyes open, but they kept sliding shut, and I could feel sleep claiming me. I wanted to stay awake and savor the feeling of Jacob’s body next to mine. He was already asleep; his chest rose gently under my left hand. Hopefully, wearing Jacob out would give him a good night’s sleep, making him fresh for his exam tomorrow. And he did ask me to distract him when I came home. Our first lovemaking had been magical, and the second unbelievable…. *** When Jacob had asked if I
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Chapter 11 Final Chapter- Anchored
Timothy M. commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 11 Final Chapter- Anchored
There were a few rough and uncomfortable moments, before they got their relationship to its final safe berth and truly Anchored. I think you chose the right moment to end this story, because we can leave Craig and Jared, two men who were desperately unhappy at the start of the story, in a place where all is great and relaxed. They certainly deserve it. Interestingly, as much as I love reading your love-making scenes, I actually liked that you gave us the aftermath instead. My first thought was 'Oh, dugh will be so pleased, nothing for him to skip while over intruding on intimacy.' But their bed talk after Jared's first time catching, was as fun and intimate and loving as the act itself. Awesome Thank you for letting me be a small part of this story, Gary. And I'm talking about my editor role. -
Hmm, I'm sensing a nasty plot line here with Stuart and Ross. I'm going to hope Ross will be drafted to the Leopards to replace Deon and the guys can help him get away from Steve if it becomes necessary. And if Jim goes to the AFL as we all hope, then Ross wont have to worry about being the first openly gay AFL player. It was nice to see something of Neil and Liam, but I almost felt sorry for poor Ollie with all the teasing. And I'm with Jim and Tony on not liking the combination of Alex and Ty. Should the brat really go to a nightclub and risk his knee by dancing or being jostled by someone?
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Yep, a karklud is used to wipe tables etc, we use an opvaskebørste (a brush) to deal with dishes.
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Tillykke med fødselsdagen, Pi-fyr from your Danish uncle delirious waving of Danish birthday flags http://satwcomic.com/evil-flag and http://satwcomic.com/flag-day-every-day (Thanks for making a topic, Emi)
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Chapter 10 Floating Toward Shore
Timothy M. commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 10 Floating Toward Shore
I get the calmer waters part, but I'm not sure I agree with the floating. I think they are in fact swimming deliberately and happily towards their goal of building a life and a home together. The promised land (shore) is in sight and their relationship safe and sound. Balls of steel that's all I'm gonna say about your name game. Oh, and this is my review no 2,000 ! -
I like your new title, it fits the story much better. This was a nice, relaxing and cuddly chapter.
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I'm glad I'm not the only fan here. I think I've managed to hook a few other GA members via my Clueless Camping story topic. See also this post. I'll have to give some of the other webcomics a try, Thanks for resurrecting this, Drew.
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Ooops, I just realized I mentioned Elsan's recovery too soon in the review to the previous chapter. Anyway, I'm glad Merrick and Jenson can explore the stars together. Turning can wait I would like to hear more about Landin, so I hope you'll tell his story, maybe via a prompt or something. Well done on your first story, LitLover.
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I'm glad Jenson dismissed Jorrah's final words, I bet the male was trying to fuck with the vampire's mind, since he'd lost his chance for revenge. Jenson and Merrick need to focus on their future together, including making love as many times and places as possible. I'm pleased Senator Elsan woke up, and there's nothing wrong with surrogate - even if the general attitude towards females is deplorable at that planet. You certainly tied up all the lose ends nicely, LL. Oh and I simply at the idea of Audra gving Kel's father a piece or her mind - though she may feel bad about it since it made her a target too and cost people arround her and Jenson their lives.
