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Thanks, Gary, I'm glad you found the chapter interestin and Rob and Jazz typical. Means I haven't lost my touch in spite of the long break. I haven't had any personal experiences with Chris types, so I'm relieved you found him credible. AC told me he thought this sort of behavior was getting rarer and I hope he is right. And of course you're absolutely right about the coach having the final word on who gets kicked off the team, but if someone says they want to leave (and focus on their finals), he might not object if it's not a key player.
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You're welcome, Drew, and thanks for the lovely review. lol on Rob getting all the attention, I think Jazz and Mitchell played equally important parts. I loved that the small Nelson reminder made you chuckle, it did the same for me. Rob being gay-curious is so much fun to write, even if it only happens in his mind. I'm not good on the redemption writing, we'll have to ask Gary for that. But I think Chris is a lost case. Lit did indeed have several good points and I also liked the one about flattering attention in particular.
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LOL, yeah, Rob's back with a vengance. But I'm not sure everyone agrees that his behavior was saintly.
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Yay and a brilliant review too. Thanks, LL. I guess Jasper has the advantage of having a gay best friend, so he's pretty immune to any worry about be checked out by a guy. But you're quite right about the other factors too. Yeah Rob found a good lever in the confrontation with Chris. Nobody wants him around to judge them and point fingers. We'll have to see what the coach says about it - and that he's not strict about swearing. Rob may be curious, but he knows when not to press the issue (well mostly, lol). And I love that you caught on to my intention to leave the matter undecided.
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“What now?” Rob muttered under his breath as he entered the locker room and saw most of the baseball team in the middle of a heated discussion. Practice had gone well, their coach had still been pleased with the win on Saturday, and everyone was in a good mood. The assistant coach had concentrated on Jazz, making sure he rested his wrist in between working on his pitching. Rob had helped out by batting whenever the pitching coach took them out to the mound to test specific pitches. Jazz had
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I have to admit this chapter confused me. I waited to see if the reviews from other readers would help, but I'm still ? I hope the next chapter will clear things up. What was the deal between Steve and Toph's mother, and how did she know about him and get in touch with him. Why don't we hear anything about the family's reaction to Toph being gay? Or did she mean to spring on everyone? btw I don't think she has changed at all. Why does Toph let Gary resume their relationship as friends as if nothing has happened? I want to see a confrontation where Gary is made to admit all his betrayals and manipulations and understand how badly he hurt Toph. He should apologize for everything and promise to do better.
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I hate not being able to edit reviews. This sentence in my ch 5 review: Knowing his former lover regrets letting hi go, and will not be a supportive friend is good for Tait. was meant to be Knowing his former lover regrets letting him go, and will now be a supportive friend is good for Tait. I liked reading all the other comments on this chapter, they had lots of good points.
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Impressive to see Tait face up to many of his choices in the past and reevaluate the decisions he and others made. Knowing his former lover regrets letting hi go, and will not be a supportive friend is good for Tait. I'm waiting to find out why there were no criminal charges brought against his husband before now. But then, revenge is a dish best served cold.
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Ze plot zickens. I wonder if Merrick was only discovered after Jenson contacted his crew, but I hoped he was missed by them before that. What I don't understand is why the Senator didn't kill Merrick. Is this a ploy to get Jenson down on the planet? Is the Senator being blackmailed by Kel's father? Or is he somehow disguised as or controlling the Senator?
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Mr Wenthworth is an irresponsible teacher and coach, and should be in trouble for twice leaving his class alone and having a fight happen and a student injured both times. At least Casey is no longer fooled by Mike, and Lane's teacher can see he's doing his new brother a lot of good. I hope she tells Karen.
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Aegis and WET are a great team. Loved his teasing chewing out of both the ship and the senator. Liked the no-nonsense approach to the Outcasts and his flirting with Jim. I hope they both enjoyed the hot bunking.
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I wish Jackson would be nicer to Luke, it isn't his fault. At least he realized Luke has a harder time at home than he ever did, even with the present grounding. But I hope he keeps up his courage to tell his mom when she is being utterly unreasonable and behaving ridiculously.
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I'm still a bit puzzled as to why they think Daniel's attacker will return to the club. After all, he was not a proper member. Never mind, Toby's education should be fun, and I think Silas has finally found someone who can keep him in line. Good to see Daniel cuddled and safe.
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Trever was rude and he obviously has problems with proper Dom behavior in general, but in fact his instincts about Toby as a Dom were quite accurate. I hope Toby acting is up to it, but at least he's in training. By the way, which city are we in? Please say Chicago, then I might use the club in CC.
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A good solution to the Daniel and Silas, and I cannot wait to hear Tara lecture the subs who said those stupid things to Daniel. I hope she bans them from the club for a few weeks.
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Sigh, somehow I knew I was gonna be sad after reading this story.
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I agree, Parker. It gave me the chills, Such evil - and yet such determination to atone.
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I liked the lore implied, that you cannot simply challenge the alpha without grounds and approval from the elders. Of course, more of their story would be great, but I think you chose a good place to stop.
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Yikes Parker, you nearly gave me a heart attack. I was so relieved when the nasty agents weren't allowed to remove our two boys. Great story in spite of the sad background.
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Great story. I wonder why Jeff became an agent in the first place? And now I have to go and find some food.
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CSR Book Club March C S R Feature: Short Stories By Renee Stevens
Timothy M. commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
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Where The F$%k Has Mark Been?
Timothy M. replied to Mark Arbour's topic in Mark Arbour Fan Club's Topics
Thank you for letting us know, Mark. We will start hunting down your writing muse and cajole, bribe or force him to pay you a nice visit. Failing that, we'll patiently wait for you to regain your inspiration to write. Take care. -
Shade is somehow the least shady person Casey has met so far. Although, I'm beginnng to like Rodney, but if I were Casey I wouldn't trust him yet. Perhaps try telling him about Lane being molested and see how he reacts. I cannot help hoping Casey will at least make Lane's life a lot better, and open the eyes of Karen and his father to what a jerk Curtis is. By the way, I wonder why Karen buys food to be cooked, when she doesn't seem to do any family meals. But perhaps she and/ or the idiot cook during the week-end?
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Casey's father is an idiot. But Casey should have kept his temper for a bit longer to see what the 'rules' were. Perhaps they were not as stupid as his mother's. Karen is at least trying, but I'm not impressed with her efforts on her own sons, so I'm not sure how much help she is. Interesting to see I was wrong when I lumped Rodney in with Curtis.
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Tillykke med fødselsdagen happy waving of Danish birthday flags
