Timothy M.

I'm with LL, I wanted to punch Faris for beng such an idiot, but I gues he made up for it by relocating. He was lucky James hadn't found someone else, and forgave him. Great beginning and the smurf had me

Thanks, LL, I'm very happy with your assessment of Peter and Patrick. They are both kind and practical, and I think you're right that their strengths enhance each other. It's interesting how you compare Peter with Jacob (from CC). They are alike, I know, but mainly because they come from the same sort of background (as do I). I created Peter first, and I did worry about whether Jacob was too similar, apart from sharing the blue eyes and blond hair. But Peter is an adult man, a father and provider, secure in his own self, and Jacob is still maturing. Switching to English was a natural thing for Peter to do, but I'm glad so many of you find it a good sign. Somehow, I don't think Patrick ever thought about having kids, and I'm not sure what he would do with a baby. But he immediately loved the concept of being a papa for Michael. There will be small snippets of them in many of the chapters.

OMG thank you, Drew, for a fantastic and comprehensive review. I'm not sure I can reply to every part, but I'll try. I'm very happy you like the playful side of Peter. We haven't seen this so much before now, but in fact Patrick is not the only one to be freed from old hurts and restraints by love. Great job on pointing out the new improved Dane. Your thoughts on friends and family are very clever and that's all i'm gonna say fr now. Yay on loving the angel/imp team, they're such fun to write. I try not to let them take over, though, but they're quite noisy sidekicks.

Thanks, buddy - on noticing the caretaker role woven into the story. I'm glad the romance still works for you. You're spot on about both of them instinctively knowing what the other man needs, whether it's calming fears or being a safety net allowing them to dare more. I promise no pomp or circumstance will keep them apart.

Thanks, Reader, it's a great compliment when you can't wait to read more. I'm glad you like the imp and the angel, they sort of popped into the story (and my head) without me having a chance to refuse. In fact, they're even demanding their own story! I may have to write that once Patrick has managed to kick them out of his head. Yes, the family aspect is definitely going to be an important part of the story. I think your feelings are pretty accurate, but I don't know yet.

I love hearing the dragonviews. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with me (us) - and they're good ones too. Indeed, the influence of Peter's love is not only romantic and but in several other aspects of Patrick's life, as will be shown in coming chapters. I didn't describe it in detail, but the part where Peter poured out all his worries for Michael, was important for both of them and the balance in their relationship. They both feel the other man contributes the most, but soon they'll know it's all a matter of give and take in equal measure.

Thank you, Def, I'm glad you liked the chapter. Considerate and respectful are good words to describe Peter, he will do his best to never hurt his best friend and lover. I think they are also enjoying getting to know each other. Indeed, Patrick will slowly better at handling the small devil in his mind. And while he may feel uncomfortable, he will face up to all the challenges of this relationship, because he knows it's worth it. Good point on Peter inspiring Patrick to think about his own family. More on that later.

Thank you for reading and reviewing, I love hearing from my readers - and I'm delighted you like the story. I'll do my best to provide happiness for Patrick and Peter while keeping the story believable.

Thanks, dugh, I'm to know you're able to find time to read. LOL, I keep forgetting the short time too, so I have to keep a list of the days and which chapters take place when. Love the plant analogy.

Yeah, they're on a dream boat heading down the river towards paradise. But there's still a snake... I loved how every time Craig started to tread water or even back-pedal, Jared dragged him straight back into the current of commitment and love. No more going against the current - and the undertow (or undertoad as Garp would say) called Carly will not be able to stop these two men from building a future together, including a fantastic house. Great job on this chapter, even with the small scary cliffie.

I'm glad you liked the chapter, Parker. So far, all is falling into place for them, and they certainly deserve it. There will be future challenges, of course, but I have faith they can overcome them together.

Yay, Caz, I'm delighted you like the angel / imp pair. We haven't seen the last of them. I had fun doing the sister conversation. and we haven't seen the last of her either. You only have to wait a week for more. Better than my other stories, eh?

You know, I have the feeling you're right. Patrick and Peter will attract other good people like nectar does bees. I'm glad you approve of Peter's caution, I wanted to hit the right balance between being sensible and overcautious. I'm not sure they can wait all the way to the wedding, though.

Awww, Mike, that's wonderful to hear. I hope I can keep your Sunday mornings happy for quite some time. For once there is an advantage of me being six hours ahead of most GA readers. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter too.

LOL, yeah, seen through Patrick's eyes Peter is pretty perfect. As for speaking English all Danes do (after learning in school), but Peter is probaby better than average. I'm glad you liked Patrick thinking about his relatives. I worried it might be borin, but it is important, including the fact he is able to contemplate getting in touch with one of them. It's so sweet how you miss Michael - he'll be asleep for most of the next chapter too.

You don't like men with hairy legs? or you DO like men with hairy legs ?

Ahh, I'm somehow not surprised Joel's mum was on to him and the significance of Peter. I wonder whether Joel had already given the game away when talking to her on the phone during the semester, or she realized when she saw them together. Such a great ending to a wonderful story, I'll have to google yabby

The Senator is the bad guy?? That was a most unexpected twist. Is he afraid to lose his position of power if the Maser wants to implement are carried out? Are the two males lovers - or does the Senator want them to be? So many questions... including the big one: will Merrick and his men be alright, and what will Jenson do?

Hmmm, so far the obvious conspirators on-planet have turned up to be dead-ends. But there must be someone, because no matter how badly Kel's father wanted to kill Jenson, he could not have done the flauros import without inside help. Someone must be against the idea of opening up to the outside and being influenced by new ideas. But who? Jenson should also be looking for an informer on his staff, because there has to be one telling Kel's father what missions the vampire is (going to be) involved in.

The concept of ice pods was brilliant, and a water living species would probably be aware of such technology sooner than landlubbers, lol. Did I get the hint right of Merrick's co-workers being together? Kel's father being involved was a nasty surprise, did we know their species is as long-lived as vampires? I thought Kel's extended life span was an effect of him sharing blood with Jenson, but apparently not. Now I'm back to speculating about Merrick, but I seem to remember he would gain vampire-like longevity if blood-bonded with Jenson.

The kiss following Peter’s last statement was deep and prolonged. Patrick wanted this incredible dream to last forever. The one where he'd just had the most amazing weekend of his life, and finally being subtly proposed to by the man he loved. A little voice in his head said 'you're gonna have to breathe at some point you know', but he ignored it. Having his partner’s lips on his, arms holding each other tight, their hearts beating at the same speed was making him dizzy with joy. He couldn't get

Thanks AC, I'm pleased someone appeciated my Pooh Bear joke. I'm also glad you understood Patrick's consternation at Peter suddenly springing the auntie arrival on him, even if it did solve the matter of Michael's caretaker. Your sofa scene comments made me laugh, but I'm quite happy you think they should go for it. I think they might have, if not for two small matters: the presence of Michael and Patrick's inexperience. As to when it will happen The monster well, there may be some of those, but that's all I can say.

Wow Gary, I guess none of us saw that play coming, and 55 chapters ago your readers would have said the odds of Candy doing something like this would be pretty low. However, I have to admit I liked the other parts of the chapter better, particularly when Kendall surprised Ace with his playful suggestion. Those two men need time to enjoy their own special relationship, not only the hot sex but also the aftermath of holding each other, content and warm in the glow of love and togetherness. Nodie have already caught on to those secret ingredients - holding each other, playful banter, being honest and talking about any issues, building a strong friendship and having each other's backs. No wonder M&K can see themselves in the boys. Oh, and what are the odds of all of Bodie's friends apologizing for their behavior? Quite good with Michael the Cop staring at them.

Poor Prime had to say goodbye to several dreams here. At least Colt handled him with care and made sure not to flaunt his sexual powers over the Alpha, unless they were alone. And we all know what happened when Brian and CE went to the second class.

Well, well, I guess there will be more than one club wanting to drafts the brat. I'm sure Kevin will tell his Sydney Swans team mates about meeting Ty and how much he's improved. Carlton's attempt to misdirect may backfire on them. But at least Ty may be cheered up by attention from other clubs. Ross should be an interesting person to follow, even if he does compete with Deon. If Jim does get drafted and becomes the first openly gay AFL player, it will be much easier for other new players to admit the same. Those who have beeen hiding in the closet not so much.