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Chapter 6 Sharing bed and breakfast
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 6 Sharing bed and breakfast
Thanks, CG, you're certainly getting a full dosis of romance here with reading all these chapters at once. lol, the dreaded Moster -
Chapter 5 Coming out with the truth
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 5 Coming out with the truth
Happy (belated) birthday, CG. I'm glad you think ths chapter was a nice gift. Patrick may be content with Peter and Michael in his life, but I think you're right that he could also do with some decent family members from his parents' relatives. -
Chapter 3 Valentine’s Kiss
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 3 Valentine’s Kiss
Perhaps it's more that Michael has very good instincts about his dad and what makes him happy. But he also knows a kind and caring adult when he meets one. Maybe because he has spent a lot of time in hospital and met all types of nurses and doctors? Patrick has followed his heart and empathy his whole life, and he's definitely going to do so when they tell him to get what he has wanted for years. -
Chapter 2 Valentine’s Day Surprise
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 2 Valentine’s Day Surprise
LOL, I love your reaction to Peter's declaration and you urging Patrick to accept. Is there any doubt he'll do so? Michael may have been born in tragedy but his existence is a blessing in disguise for Peter - and now for Patrick as well. Peter would never have married Michael's mother, but he might have had a very hard time gaining custody over his son, not matter how unfit Vibeke was to be the caretaker of a child. -
Chapter 1 Patrick’s Personal Card
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 1 Patrick’s Personal Card
I'm so glad you started reading this story, CG, because I knew you'd like it. I felt sorry for Patrick too, and I think perhaps St. Valentine did as well. You're right about his parents but this made losing them even harder. At least he has great memories and knew they loved him. LOL, I think everybody rooted for Peter. -
On Wednesday morning the two men went for a long run in the park. Patrick had managed to have an early morning run on Sunday, before the Danes woke, but he usually ran three or four times a week, and was missing his morning jog. He had to go slower than normal for Peter to keep up, but ended with a faster run on his own, while his boyfriend did push-ups and other exercises on a convenient grass patch. On the way home Peter asked about local fitness centres. “I usually work out several times a w
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Hey buddy, what a nice surprise to get this review. You're forgiven for not writing one before, lol. It's funny how sometimes we dismiss our own looks or character traits as nothing special, without realizing they are exactly what attract someone else. I'm glad Richard would make you notice him in London, and I'm sure people would also appreciate him in København.
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Cooking up a Conundrum
Timothy M. commented on Riley Jericho's story chapter in Cooking up a Conundrum
It's no wonder few teenage boys come out of the closet with everyone - and especially parents - always assuming they want to date girls. -
Prompts Prompt Me! #492, #493, & O. Henry
Timothy M. commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Writing World
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I've been annoyed with Colton for a few chapters, and now I simply have to say somethig, lol. Why does he keep pushing? Why doesn't he and Cathy respect Bobby's limits and need for time to get used to the new him? Cathy always calling him gay and Colton always touching him and now kissing him. I don't blame Bobby for running away and pushing Colton away and not trusting him at all. Colton says he only wants to be Bobby's friend, he says he won't do anything and then he laughs and says 'I lied' and people think it's cute. It's not ! It's as much sexual harassment as Darryl gripping Tiffany's crotch. It's doesn't matter that Bobby is actually gay and attracted to Colton and it's 'just' a little kiss. Bobby has told him repeatedly to 'leave me alone' and he has signaled clearly how scared he is of intimacy. If Colton was a real friend with good intentions and actually care about Bobby's feelings, he would respect that and find a way to gain Bobby's trust and love. But he is an immature, selfish twat and I hope Bobby leaves the room after telling Colton to go away. But of course he's much to nice and confused and spineless to do that. And Colton wouldn't get the point anyway. Idiot! OK rant over. Fantastic story, Ron, I love it when you get me all in a huff.
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Dear CG, I'm so happy I hit the right note with Sol as the Siamese cat, even if it made you cry. Sorry - but I cannot help being a little bit pleased too. I was thinking of you all the time I wrote about Colin and Sol, hoping you'd find your way back to us. I'm glad you liked Ken, and could figure him out from the few glimpses we got. I loved the concept of Colin having guarded his heart with vigilance, and now being able to relax and enjoy the love he has found. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing This was always meant to be a special gift for you.
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I know, but then I wouldn't be citing correctly.
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their death's what ? their death's occurrence? their death's tragedy? or the count of their death? Or simply their deaths count ? Well, I guess we have our parameters, let's count dead bodies.
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uhm do you mean perimeters as in borders we have to stay within, or did you mean to say parameters which define the search? I think we should only count characters Mark has created. If there are enought of us, we could do a book each.
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I cannot believe I didn't write a review when this chapter came ut. After reading AC's Famous-Barr story it was awesome to see our boys and Sloan from the other side. Of course I also liked the hints of the wonderful times Jay and Miles have had together in the period from the presence in your main story and this one. It's great to have you back, buddy.
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For fanden da Not a good start to their trip - but an interesting start to the story. I suspect Jason planned to dump Pierre 'due to distance' when they both moved, as the easy way out. The typical move of a selfish coward and a cheater. And I simply have to ask: did Andrew remember to pick up his duffle bag?
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Yikes, Tara will be monitoring and interviewing every sub in the club to find out if anyone else have been bothered by those two cretins. At least she gave them the most suitable punishment by black-listing them. Now both Oliver and Carlos need to be on guard for the serial killer.
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Prompt 360 Why do I even bother? (III)
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 360 Why do I even bother? (III)
Hi CG, glad you've found your way back to Rob and Co, hope you enjoy the added chapters, even if Rob didn't invite Trevor to the Prom. (Yet? ) -
This Little Kitten Went to Market
Timothy M. commented on Dayne Mora's story chapter in This Little Kitten Went to Market
You know it's not that important what they say when, as long as they are on the same page. Right now they are on the page of we're falling in love and happy about it, and oh let's move in together. I about that and Preston's part in it. I bet Efrain is looking forwatd to telling Indie the same btw, and for Cory to casually persuade Preston to move in too. -
Chapter 10 Housekeeping and dinner plans
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 10 Housekeeping and dinner plans
'Seeing Patrick come alive' that's just what I wanted you to feel. He has been in a sort of limbo emotionally, except for working in the card shop. But now all his suppressed sides will emerge, even some which might be a surprise - and to Peter as well. No, Patrick never considered this couple as potential friends before, but you'll notice they didn't initiate it either. I think he was giving out 'stay away' vibes even if he may not have done so intentionally. He, he, no, Michael's room won't be done so fast, but I hope you'll be happy about the reunion anyway. -
Chapter 10 Housekeeping and dinner plans
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 10 Housekeeping and dinner plans
feeling each other out that was hilarious, Gary. But more importantly, it's awesome, but not surprising, how you can relate to Peter as a father, knowing how the anguish of potentially losing Michael is always with him. He does indeed need all the support and love a caring man like Patrick can give. Glad you liked the house buying, now I just need Craig to visit to help with renovating and decorating ideas. -
Chapter 10 Housekeeping and dinner plans
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 10 Housekeeping and dinner plans
I love how you notice a lot of details no one else has commented on. I'm hoping John and Anthony will become good friends, we'll see what happens. I'm writing on the chapter right now. You're right about Patrick's positive outlook, I hadn't thought about it like that before. Peter will be missed, true, and about the homecoming. Danish numbers I think he'll give up on those. -
Chapter 10 Housekeeping and dinner plans
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 10 Housekeeping and dinner plans
I'm glad you enjoy the day to day life descriptions, to me that's how you get to know each other. Somethings gotta give, lol, you may be right. You're not the only one to tell me to stay away from the medical detail. This is a relief, and I'm happy to do as you say. -
Chapter 10 Housekeeping and dinner plans
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 10 Housekeeping and dinner plans
LOL, Parker, I promise to give Patrick some relief before he bursts - and my readers too. -
Chapter 10 Housekeeping and dinner plans
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 10 Housekeeping and dinner plans
I have the feeling Patrick enjoys Peter being a bad boy. But as you say, it's the love which has opened him to life and people around him. It was an important part of this chapter, so I'm very pleased you made special notice of it. Yeah, Patrick has a quite a bit of incentive to deal with the locked room. Hopefully, it won't be as bad as he fears, and the rewards are definitely worth it.