Timothy M.

I get this image in my head of you playing with action figures in ways the toy makers did not anticipate. Wouldn't mind being the filling in that dessert, Yum.

Talk about heavy innuendo, LOL. I get the feeling Mr Hunky Police Officer is versatile, my favorite kind of Man.

Good idea to put them all together, Carlos. Gives me a chance to review more than the first one. Here we go: Ohh, I wouldn't mind getting frisked like that. I have a weakness for policemen - and policewomen in uniform. At least he didn't say 'is that a gun or...' How about some pictures for me to drool over?

LOL Jonas laid-back attitude on filling out the last page comes back to bite him in the ass - yet I believe he'll be better off than if he'd taken it seriously. His instincts are often better than his brain in these matters. And I loved Opie's reaction to Jonah's revelation of his bastard of a father. Why do I have the feeling various misfortunes are going to plague Mr Marks from now on.

Well, even if Jen and her family do take advantage of Jonas' good nature they also appreciate him and love him. Somehow I have the feeling Opie does too, he's a better father to Jonas than the bastard who threw him out. So which story did the female ogre / troll come from ?

So Jonah's talent is the ability to see through glamours and an affinity for the color blue, lol. He needs to go to the library and get some fantasy books and read up on the people he might meet. Or perhaps not, maybe he'll be less overwhelmed if he has no clue who they are. At the end of the story, you'll have to make a list of those we didn't recognize. Oh and can we make suggestions on who we'd like to meet ? Might be useful for prompt chapters to revisit Jonah after you've finished the main story.

Wow Fire doesn't beat about the bush, does she? And I thinks she right, Deep down Jonah knew about Opie and he loves the idea of magic and dragons. He just has to let go of his inhibitions and embrace the blue World.

So I'm back. Fire has me laughing every time. Reminds me a bit of the talking sword in the Valdemar books. Wonder if that's why the customer wanted one (if it's a woman who ordered it). What did Jonah do with the chocolate pudding? Or is he having it for dessert later?

I recall that scene from Dignity, it made a lot of sense then and I feel the same now. One way or another Jack's siblings want this agonizing situation resolved. Whether by Jack's death or his survival and return to full health. It's harsh but not surprising. Limbo is an awful place to be.

I had to soothe myself with a huge piece of chocolate before reading this chapter. Talk about dysfunctional Family and distressing Dinner. But I still love the moment Linc calls Hamish a bully before punching him. Yet for all their narrow-minded, selfish, immature posturing I somehow still retain a glimmering of sympathy for Jack's siblings. They have been without the guiding hand and attention of a parent for too long, left to support and care for each other and thus they have fallen into the trap of confirming the wrong attitudes. Today they were confronted and opposed several times and they hated it.

I had to go away and cool down before reading again and reviewing. Otherwise I might have tried to crawl into the screen and STRANGLE Pete. I cannot believe my fellow reviewers saying they feel ANY kind of sympathy for PEP, he is a jerk, messing with Corbin's head and heart and I want to kick him right back to Britain and tell him to STAY the F..K away from Corbin. I cheered when Corbin cut him off, gave him the Cold shoulder and said he had a boyfriend. serves you bloody right PEP. But of course we all know it won't last. In spite of Nick being the perfect boyfriend, Corbin is gonna fuck things up by not being able to resist the lure of the Brit and by not being honestwith Nick about his issues. Arrrggghhh But I'm going to keep hoping Corbin will hold on to Nick for five months, and then Mike will be back and can punch the Brit's face again if he tries anything on. And I'm proud of Corbin for ryng his very best. Lee leaves me cold and I'm still waiting for Corbin to exact the perfect revenge on Domdick for ratting on Mike. And this is another reason to hold on to Nick and to go public about their relationship. Corbin cannot fight two fronts at once. He needs to have a settled love life to focus his energy on his studies, social status , and strategies for the standing of his house (much as I still shake my head over the ridiculous frat stuff, lol). Oh, and if Nick is really serious about loving Corbin, he needs to bottom once in a while. Or at least stop assuming Corbin isn't versatile. Otherwise, I shall stop feeling sorry for him.

So nice to have my guess confirmed. I'm glad George were able to persuade Jardines to part with the letter. Hope he remembered his watch, lol.

Perfect house, and I'm thrilled Chet was the one to find it for them. I hope M&K make them godparents, too. I'm in favor of Michael begetting a son and Kendall a daughter. I have the feeling Kendall will be the anxious, overprotective Dad and I hope Michael can counteract that. I loved the title of course, they may have started out playing with looking at the house, but it soon became serious. No more bets about where they are going to live or how committed they are to the family they are building. Plus once they get the back done, it will be perfect for Kendall's parents visiting. And later it's probably good for a teen residence. Plus I bet the neighborhood likes the idea of having a cop in residence, and another visiting regularly. Because those four friends will be at each other's houses often is my prediction. Kendall Giftekniv can be proud of his match-making skills. Wonder what he'll find for Jeremy

LOL, I guess this is where my Danish background betrays me, as pucker seems a neutral word to me. I may edit this later and I'll try to avoid it in future (it may occur in the chapters written so far). As far as the other matter is concerned, I accept there are differing feelings amongst my readers. And at least is causes y'all to leave passinate reviews, which I love.

So Deon also got approached by the Sydney Swans ! That's great, Sam will be delighted if Deon comes to stay near him. But perhaps not so good for any future relationship with Clarissa. I hope she decides to give him a chance. For once I think Ollie was over the top with his sexual teasing, and I felt sorry for Neil and Liam. Seeing each other naked for the first time in a non-sexual situation was probably a good thing, but Ollie's continued fixation was equally embarrassing and awkwardly helpful. How's Dave doing? We haven't heard anything of him for a while. Same for Charlie.

Now I want to know why he's so shy. Is Debate compulsory as a subject in high school ? Must be, since I cannot see him (you) chose it voluntarily.

If you search on a word which has been used as a tag, will the tagged entries be at the top of the result page ? Or mixed in with all the other search results?

Better late than never: http://satwcomic.com/red-white-and-rainbow-stripes Tillykke from Denmark, anyway.

Yes to both questions But I hope to get unstuck soon.

A whole Will chapter, what a treat! But I have the feeling Zach would be very upset if Will hooked up with Tony again. Hell, I would be pretty Tony is a douchebag. Not sure how Zach would feel about Jeffrey. And once more we're shown how badly Brad has let Will down. Makes me

Any feedback is welcome, even simply telling me whether you liked the chapter or not.

That worked out perfectly. Over here the age of consent is fifteen, so I'm not freaked, but I guess most people would feel uncomfortable with two older guys being with a young teen. And the thought of a twelve-year-old Jo-C was But now I want to know why Jo-C had his Blackout so early, must have been at the onset of puberty. Abusive parent or ? I'm not surprised the werewolves are worried about a new and unknow supernatural species, could be dire. I hope their search of security cameras will be successful. So, now that I'm all caught up, how about posting the next chapter

LOL, thanks - but that's because you've only seen CC and my prompt story. Both of those were written after several years of writing descriptive stories with hardly any dialogue, and after I'd been under the influence of all the great stories here at GA, not to mention the tough but fair and loving guidance of Kitt and AC as editors/betas.

Don't miss the story forum, where you can see various links and explanations about the places and other matters related to the story.

Thank you very much, I hope you'll keep reading and enjoying the story. Always nice to welcome new readers.