Timothy M.
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Prompt 360 Why do I even bother? (I)
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 360 Why do I even bother? (I)
Yeah, his mom's remark before leaving was to remind Nelson about the lecture the night before.I'll try to resist the sappy romantics (including people on team Rob who want to turn him gay ) I have a feeling you might like the next chapter. -
Aahh, Carlos you would be a bastard if you weren't such a good writer. You started with a boy losing his family and now we seeing a man losing his son - and not even knowing if the son got back to his grandfather in safety. But at least the son didn't fall into the hand of the captain. I love Solcar's resolution to not lose Tony, but how will he manage? Or maybe Troy will be the one to lose when Solcar is picked up by his brother?
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Prompt 360 Why do I even bother? (I)
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 360 Why do I even bother? (I)
You mean sort of comparing who had the most embarrassing conversation? LOLSince everyone are so eager, I may have to post part II tonight. Hope you'll like that too. -
Well, isn't it just like James to fuck things up even when he is trying to be helpful and protective. Why didn't he just stay away from Sacha? He really is a major jerk, totally selfish and foolish. And where is Frank in all of this? Why isn't he making sure Sacha gets some peace and quiet? I hope Nic finds a way to say fuck off to his dad and the whole snob mob.
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Prompt 360 Why do I even bother? (I)
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 360 Why do I even bother? (I)
Oh god, I just didn't know how to reply to this review. The easy part is saying thank you, I'm delighted you liked it. Means I did well on the romance.But the part about them being finally alone - oh man. What to say? Kitt, I need more crushed ice, asap ! Or maybe I should just post the next chapter. -
Prompt 360 Why do I even bother? (I)
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 360 Why do I even bother? (I)
Well, I enjoyed waking up to all these wonderful reviews too, so I guess we're even. I worried a bit about having too much parental stuff in the last two chapters, so I'm glad to hear you liked the small intermezzo with Nelson's mom. More sweet things to come for the lovers, I promise. -
I read the other reviews back to front, ending with Carlos. I was feeling all happy about the cat being call Timmy, until I got to his review. But it was funny, the idea about pussy bringing them together. Anyway, we should all thank Irri for the idea of the stray animal and you for running off with it and writing such a wonderful chapter. What a lovely start to my morning to read this. And great to see how everyone around Roy are delighted about it.
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Prompt 360 Why do I even bother? (I)
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 360 Why do I even bother? (I)
Oh you naughty boy! So tight black briefs aren't sexy enough, hmmm? Well, unless Nelson disregards the talk with his parents completely, Eric shouldn't be catching any glimpses of Nelson's undies. Time will tell... -
Prompt 360 Why do I even bother? (I)
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 360 Why do I even bother? (I)
aawww thanks Cole, I'm so relieved the hair thing resonates with my readers and doesn't come across as weird.And I'm even happier that these guys seem natural and real, what a compliment to something which is a figment of my imagination (and some fierce beta reading and discussion, lol). I promise to post the next part soon. -
Prompt 360 Why do I even bother? (I)
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 360 Why do I even bother? (I)
Glad you could relate to the hair thing. It's a bit unusual for a guy, but I liked the idea of Nelson and his mom bonding over this.you'll probably like the next chapter too... -
Prompt 360 Why do I even bother? (I)
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 360 Why do I even bother? (I)
Thank you, the credit for the stereotype tease goes to AC, who also liked the idea of Jasper being the fashion conscious one. Thanks for the hoodie tip, the spell checker did object but had no suggestion, but I should have thought about it being derived from hood. I've corrected all the mistakes.Actually, you sort of inspired me to do the divided date chapters, so thank you for that. The second part has been edited, so I expect to post it on Saturday. -
Prompt 360 Why do I even bother? (I)
Timothy M. posted new chapter in Timothy’s Terrible Prompt Stories
“Why do I even bother? It’s not as if we’re going out for dinner or anything.” I turned away from my closet and threw myself on the bed. Jasper gave a chuckle from the armchair in the corner, and I scowled at him. Jazz had stayed the night, because after we came home from dropping Eric off Friday afternoon, I was a nervous wreck. Being with my best friend distracted me from worrying, even if the price was a lot of teasing. We had gotten up at eight-thirty, had breakfast, and now I was trying t- 22 comments
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Saturday Dinner At Mom's
Timothy M. commented on ColumbusGuy's story chapter in Saturday Dinner At Mom's
It was fun to see how Jay is a wonderful mixture of his teasing dad and caring mom. I think those two boys make a beautiful couple. I liked seeing the use you made of our Danish chats. Hygge is a very important Danish concept, and usually it's accomplished with something to eat and drink. But I can see why Jay blushed at having to explain the other meaning to Miles, lol. The word kæreste not only means dearest, but it's also a gender neutral word for boyfriend / girlfriend, sort of like sweetheart. No wonder Jay wanted Miles to use it, but only in private. Except his parents already knew, which was a perfect ending to a happy chapter. -
I've forgotten to mention it before, but Mary is one cool, clever chick. She's done a lot of good, very quietly and kindly. If she hadn't been around things could have gone a lot worse. I'm convinced she made Gary and his mum see sense concerning Adam. Fuck I feel sorry for Scott, I hope he pulls through with the help of his friends and Chris - and maybe his dad ?
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I loved the fact that Trevor broke the ice, serves him right. But I guess he's just as protective of his sister as David is of Randy. The Tony hero worship was cute, and the discussion with Tristan fun (I knew I liked girls when I was twelve, lol). Chris is great when dealing with his parents.
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I guess there is no easy fix for the situation Scott and Chris are in. But at least there is still hope. David has come a long way from the guy who refused to share his room with Adam. Tristan was a surprise, but it made sense when he said Tony is his brother. His extra question to sister Brenda was a clue I guess.
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Oh yeah, the blame game is very popular sometimes. Does this mean Scott told them about Adam being his boyfriend or is she assuming guilt from association ? But at least they want to be reconciliated, so there is a chance to make it work.
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Ahh no, just as things were going well, Scott and Chris plunge us into sadness again. But I was glad to see Chris make the right choice. Hard but right. I can see why he's a favorite of yours, Graeme. PS I apologize for leaving all these reviews in a row, hope you didn't feel compelled to stay up half the night and reply.
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Sister Brenda is cool, and I like Swampy too. They do their best to help in a dignified and calm manner and with just the right bit of humor and compassion. Wonderful.
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Good to see justice done ! And Liz and David did the right thing too. But the highlight was Maria slapping Randy and telling him to get a grip. She may actually like him, as Mary thinks.
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Randy got asked on a date ! By a guy ! I love it when you end a chapter with something funny like that. But all in all it was a somewhat glum affair, even if David wasn't totally rejected by Liz.
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That whole basketball game and the aftermath was brilliantly done, I was sitting at the edge of my seat. I think Randy and David's dad handled it well. And Brendan and his dad are real heros.
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Yeah, I'm with Suvitar here, calling the police was a must. But Randy may spontaneously combust if things don't get better soon. At leasy David has some hope about Liz. But why didn't he tell Adam about what Frida did ?
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Sometimes I don't understand school authorities and parents. What the fuck was wrong with Adam and David's reaction? What sort of signal does it send to the other students if the two people who object to homophobic teachers using hate speech are suspended? Forget about subtleties like swearing and so, it's still plain wrong in my eyes. And even if the school wanted to, the parents should refuse to accept it. The other children are going home and telling their parents that two students were suspended because they objected to a gay hating teacher. I'd file a complaint at once !
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Well, you have to love David as a protective brother, and the whole scene with the bigoted teacher was beautiful. I have the feeling the principal will enjoy giving Mr. Martin the boot. I bet the older girl in the bus was the one Randy had sex with. And he promised not to use her name as proof he's not gay.
