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Two Very Different Meetings
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Two Very Different Meetings
Ariel doesn't expect them to be on-call 24/7 unless they're on a long-term mission (though they normally still get down-time when their charge sleeps). But he does expect them to have their phones on during the day, and he realized they were off the grid when his text wasn't delivered. Azrael needs some perks to make up for their duty, and the garden is probably the most important one. Diego is the first person (maybe ever, but definitely in a very long time) to be given free access to the place. -
Two Very Different Meetings
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Two Very Different Meetings
He, he, I'm sure Diego will act on your advice at the earliest possible opportunity. He liked the reaction too. Working on the ceremony, but it's giving me trouble. -
Prompt 500 What took you so long? (II)
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 500 What took you so long? (II)
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Prompt 500 What took you so long? (II)
Timothy M. posted new chapter in Timothy’s Terrible Prompt Stories
“What took you so long? Coach started grumbling five minutes ago,” Jasper said, as we walked up to where he stood with Carolyn. “Relax. He always gets a little worked up before a game. We’re here now, and ready to roll,” Rob replied. My best friend poked at the edge of his hair, which was already standing up in red spikes, like small flamettes. He nodded at Ryan, Eric and me, and took in the two tall guys standing behind us. “Hi, you must be Ryan’s cousin and boyfriend.” “Yes, I’- 11 comments
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A Pretty Hard Situation
Timothy M. commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in A Pretty Hard Situation
I'm glad Aidan confessed to Heath about the V-card. Now Heath is the coward who is keeping things secret, ie his feelings for Aidan. -
I guess it's football (Soccer) both for participation and watching. Top ten (2018) for participation is: football, gymnastics, swimming, golf, handball, badminton, horse riding, tennis, sailing and athletics.
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That outcome even made the front page of the Danish News, and they don't usually care about horse races or jumping unless there are Danish participants.
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What determines the order in which editors and beta readers are listed in stories ? It's not the order in which you add them, nor is it alphabetical order. Is it by the seniority of the GA member (the date they joined) ? In my Anthology stories I usually have two editors listed, because I want to credit both my primary editor and the Anthology Team editor. However, they don't end up in the order I list them, and I'm wondering why. You can see an example in this story and also in my contribution for Snapped. Is there any way to set the story system so the listing order becomes the one we enter ?
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Corbin can be head of a non-criminal family if he wants. As long as he doesn't betray the other Dons and their families, they won't care about him going into that kind of business. In fact it will be less competition. He can send anyone who's criminally inclined to Don Luca and get the ones who want to get out or retire. It was a very generous offer, and I think Don Luca also did it for the sake of his nephew. Corbin's actions saved Stephano's life and wiped his slate clean with the FBI. But it was probably easier to say it settled an old debt, and Corbin would be more likely to keep silent about the deal. It was a great story, and I'm glad the good guys got their HEA.
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I had a suspicion about the equipment Timothy got from his car, and it turned out to be correct. A bullet proof vest was smart thinking, and having another agent kill Harris was even better. It makes fewer complications for the FBI. I don't get this part at all. Paul has just been told Harris is dead. Not likely to be a mistake, even if checked out by a non-medical person. Thus, he has absolutely no duty or reason to 'help' Harris, but should focus on the wounded who still has a chance of survival. Just as he's doing. I'm surprised Jenoah was able to slip away, but I guess Chad and Timothy were the only law enforcement people who knew he was there, if he left before the next lot of police entered the cabin. Chad went with Paul, and Timothy was in pain and not likely to care about who got taken into custody. Is Corbin really the Reina Don ? What about the people in jail ?
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I had to read this chapter a couple of times to get my head around the twist. Harris is a little crazy with grief, because his reason for waiting with killing Corbin doesn't make much sense. He already killed the guy Corbin loved more than anything, so he could simply have told Corbin that and then shot him. Of course, he couldn't kill Corbin until the whole Reina family was either dead or in jail, but after Corbin's usefulness as a witness was over, Harris could have easily taken him out. I think the real reason was he wanted to kill Stefano too, because he knew too much, so Corbin was bait. He simply says the 'I want you to suffer' nonsense to be dramatic or to come across as crazy, so his opponents won't dare to act. Corbin is taking a huge risk, but at least it's the right side of his chest, so there's a chance of survival. And the alternative is Paul dying, just as he feared.
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I wonder what inspired you to find this picture.
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Good afternoon (in Denmark). We had a bit of snow this morning and it's less than 10 degrees C outside - which means it's colder than February. At least I'm inside and working on my stories.
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I wonder if the griffins were dispatched because their travel was too slow and they needed to arrive at a set time? Or maybe the location can only be reached by flying for security reasons. Or Krol wanted to fulfill Ryan's wish of flying? Kieran has good reasons to be cautious, but they also need information and help.
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Great chapter. Poor Ryan, he'll be even more overwhelmed and sad when he realizes he could have become Lex' dad when his mother died, if she hadn't been so stubborn about not telling him.
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It seems the deck is stacked against Corbin. I feel sorry for Bruce who will be devastated when he finds out.
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Oh well, here goes my hope that Luca was an enemy of Corbin. But if he'd told his FBI contact about the real reason he was going on a weekend with Paul, Timothy the agent might have spent his evening watching Corbin's cabin rather than flirting with Karen.
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A day with ups and downs, and one of the latter was meeting the nosy neighbour. But at least Eric now knows Andy shares his opinion of her. The art shop was a brilliant idea.
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The only question is whether Luca is setting Corbin up for Stefano to find him, but since Stefano is headed to Hailey and has Robin as a helper, this doesn't seem likely. Maybe Luca has his own vendetta to settle ?
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Corbin suddenly realized Paul faces danger regularly when he's at work. Not as bad as today but enough to make him aware of his own feelings and how he should act on them. The L word is finally on the table.
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As I said, Corbin should have told Paul. He's lucky the guy loves him too much to bail.
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Corbin might as well go all in and tell Paul he loves him and the Italian mob has settled in town. But he should call Harris first. Why is no one questioning what happened to the mother lynx ? Someone shot it I bet, and they should be caught and punished if possible.
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The trap is slowly closing. The only question is who will be caught in it.
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Corbin should have learned from his first visit to Luca and stayed away. Failing that he should have called Harris. Let's hope his mistakes won't cost him dearly.
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I have the feeling Stefano knows exactly where Corbin is, but he's taking his time to make sure he'll get away with his revenge.