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Timothy M.

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  1. Timothy M.

    Chapter 17

    Oh well, here goes my hope that Luca was an enemy of Corbin. But if he'd told his FBI contact about the real reason he was going on a weekend with Paul, Timothy the agent might have spent his evening watching Corbin's cabin rather than flirting with Karen.
  2. Timothy M.

    Out and About

    A day with ups and downs, and one of the latter was meeting the nosy neighbour. But at least Eric now knows Andy shares his opinion of her. The art shop was a brilliant idea.
  3. Timothy M.

    Chapter 16

    The only question is whether Luca is setting Corbin up for Stefano to find him, but since Stefano is headed to Hailey and has Robin as a helper, this doesn't seem likely. Maybe Luca has his own vendetta to settle ?
  4. Timothy M.

    Chapter 15

    Corbin suddenly realized Paul faces danger regularly when he's at work. Not as bad as today but enough to make him aware of his own feelings and how he should act on them. The L word is finally on the table.
  5. Timothy M.

    Chapter 14

    As I said, Corbin should have told Paul. He's lucky the guy loves him too much to bail.
  6. Timothy M.

    Chapter 13

    Corbin might as well go all in and tell Paul he loves him and the Italian mob has settled in town. But he should call Harris first. Why is no one questioning what happened to the mother lynx ? Someone shot it I bet, and they should be caught and punished if possible.
  7. Timothy M.

    Chapter 12

    The trap is slowly closing. The only question is who will be caught in it.
  8. Timothy M.

    Chapter 11

    Corbin should have learned from his first visit to Luca and stayed away. Failing that he should have called Harris. Let's hope his mistakes won't cost him dearly.
  9. Timothy M.

    Chapter 10

    I have the feeling Stefano knows exactly where Corbin is, but he's taking his time to make sure he'll get away with his revenge.
  10. Timothy M.

    Chapter 9

    Maybe this Family came into power when the Reinas were taken down. But word might still get back to Stefano.
  11. Timothy M.

    Chapter 8

    Well, that was hot - literally. Corbin could just claim he had the road fixed so he could visit Paul any time he wants, so the gift is for him too.
  12. It certainly looks beautiful, but I can't help wondering how many native flowers and shrubs were eradicated to be replaced by the tulips, which may look nice for a month but contribute very little to local biodiversity (especially insects). After this rant we need a SATW comic to cheer us up: https://satwcomic.com/who-to-give-flowers
  13. No, but it's the correct text - I looked it up.
  14. I'm pretty sure those snails are Iberian. and they are probably slugs and not snails (it's the same word in Danish). They've been introduced to Denmark, and they're disgusting. If you ride your bike on roads through areas where they are common, after heavy rain in the summer, you can't help running them over. And they're cannibals, so more of them congregate to eat the dead slugs. I applaud you for actually finding a picture of a proper Danish wienerbrødssnegl.
  15. In Danish: En snegl på vej'n er tegn på regn i Spanien.
  16. No, it's quite nice. Normally, I have 5-10 notifications, so 40-50 is unusual. Having a couple of readers binge-reading my prompt story and leaving likes on every chapter also contributes.
  17. Oohhh, it's fantasy time !
  18. Thank you !
  19. LOL, it took them less than 24 hours to be reconciled. I think that's pretty fast.
  20. Thank you, Gary, I'm glad the story resonates with you, and the card description in particular. Hmmm, perhaps one black and one white kitten ? Also thanks to you and @droughtquake for leaving likes on all my comments. That was a lot of notifications to wake up to.
  21. Timothy M.

    Chapter 7

    Well, if Chad's a cop he'll likely know about the whole Stefano issue and thus why Corbin wants to keep a low profile. Or maybe not, if all the police have been told is that there is a warrant out for Stefano and to contact FBI.
  22. Timothy M.

    Chapter 6

    I'm glad Corbin made the right choice. Harris gave good advice and i think he'll feel better about Corbin knowing he has someone who cares about him.
  23. Timothy M.

    Chapter 5

    Well, Harris did say Corbin had to trust someone, and why not a competent guy like Paul? But I can understand why he's afraid, especially if he's already lost someone he cared about.
  24. Timothy M.

    Chapter 4

    I'm guessing Liam is a boyfriend who got killed by the bad guys Corbin is trying to escape from. I doubt Paul will tell anyone about Corbin being gay, because this would lead to questions he doesn't want to answer. Nobody likes to admit they've been rejected.
  25. Timothy M.

    Chapter 3

    Corbin is doing his best to find a balance between being friendly and polite, but keeping his distance. I don't think he should feel bad about it. Paul has no right or reason to expect more so early on.
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