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He had a good reason and the means. Jasper doesn't, and I doubt he'd fly all the way from USA to London just for a card.

Hmmm, I hadn't thought of that. But I think I'd rather avoid more cross-overs. They tend to complicate matters, lol. I like this imp theory. He'd probably love to pay Theo back by stirring up trouble and making Sablo the bad guy. (And yes, you probably did hear Angel snort in annoyance. )

yeah, I brought that on myself, didn't I ? Hope you'll be ready to edit a Cardmaker chapter sometime soon.

Thanks, Kitt. I'm still trying to work out how to involve the A.I. team. But since they were a little about Theo sneaking into their place and shooting them, I think imp would be more likely to make mischief rather than help.

How would he get into the story unless Azrael had a reason to see him? Surely you're not suggesting I kill off Jasper?

Nope, there can be only one Angel of Death. But having Diego in his life could make all the difference as to Azrael wanting to keep existing.

You're welcome and thank your for more interesting comments about future developments. You know the answer has to be but I'll keep your ideas for the award ceremony in mind. Azrael will definitely be present. Nope, the A.I. team aren't on the card disguised as fairies, but you'll note I didn't describe all the image parts. So feel free to imagine them somewhere on the card.

I'd have thought having Patrick appearing here would renew the hungry birds chirping for more PPC chapters. On the bright side, writing about him here has primed my muse to get me going on that story. I'm just about to look at the half-done chapter again.

Thanks, Parker. Describing the card was the part I had to work on longest, but with the help of @Valkyrie it finally fell into place. I'm delighted you approve of Patrick's work and his cameo here. Deciding to bring him in was the reason the chapter writing took off. I have the feeling Theo will be happy to get any kind of message from Sablo, but lets' hope he'll be pleased with what the brothers have come up with.

Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it and enjoyed the cameo by Patrick. about the compliment. LOL, no I can't wait to see what @aditus comes up with either. (Theo is always Adi's responsibility.)

Oh, I hope along with you that she doesn't wait till the wedding. After all, if she does leave him soon, it will give Adam the perfect excuse not to invite his father without anyone finding it strange. So, this could be another incentive for her, to take the pressure of her son and Andy and ensure their great day isn't marred by a drunk bigot.

I think it's a bug - you may want to check out this Help topic from yesterday: Myr is working on the problem.

Fingers crossed for something better than a chocolate Easter egg: another Leopard chapter Saturday morning.

As if Richie would want to visit his mother's grave with the man who left her and - more importantly - betrayed her wishes after her death. I'd spit in his face, the heartless, manipulative, abusive bastard. Me neither, but if it was, I'm even more pleased Richie ignored it, see above. I agree - although I hated him the moment he refused to honor the wishes of his ex-wife - and probably his current wife too. I bet she wasn't too pleased about suddenly getting three stepchildren.

Richard was only a tolerable father when his children were small and he could control them and they admired him. As soon as they began to grow independent, he was probably unable to cope. I find it quite telling he and his wife started quarreling by the time Richie was around ten and he left when his oldest became a teen. The bastard reminds me of the father I'm portraying in my Clueless Camping story (although he never hit his kids). You're nice for trying to find something positive to say about him, Graeme. I'm wondering whether you're trying to prepare us for the story arc of Richie and his father reconciling? I have the feeling quite a few readers will object.

At first, all I could see in the chapter end note was lots of grey space, so I thought Northie had several empty lines. Now I can see a white square in the grey space. Maybe the content of the link box will (magically) appear at some point. Strange.... PS I checked all the older chapters. They all displayed the link box properly.

and from Denmark. Very sorry to hear about the stressful mom situation. Hopefully exams can be resat later (next year ?), and maybe see a university student counselor, if available, to discuss possible options.

I'm glad Andy and Eric are bonding over their mutual interest in gardens. It's a topic they can discuss many times, especially if Andy takes Eric on more outings. Pub lunches are good too, not too expensive and usually filling. Sad about Adam's mum, but she needs to tell him and ask him to help her leave her husband. It would be better for all of them, even the nasty bigot. It might be the wake-up call which gets him to admit he's an alcoholic. And if it doesn't, write him off, the sooner the better.

Sablo woke slowly, savoring the scent of his beloved cupid and the fact neither of them had any pending missions, so they could enjoy a morning in bed. He reached out, but all his hand touched was a large bundle of cloth. His eyes flew open, and he groaned as the memory of the previous night exploded in his brain. He buried his face in the bed linens and inhaled Theo’s delicious scent while wishing it had all been a nightmare. The door to the room opened, and Diego entered carrying two large

Interesting @Wesley8890 - I was just thinking Richie was softening much too soon. And that his father is still trying to buy him. But I'm glad he's mended his friendship with Gabe, and that Freddy didn't reveal he saw him.

for the advice, I have the feeling you're right. Once I get at least two of my Incomplete stories finished, I'll make a start. If you want to visit the Danish site, send me a PM and I'll give you the link. You'll probably be disappointed, though, because it's a quite primitive site, since it's run by one guy in his spare time. (Oh, and everything is in Danish.) https://satwcomic.com/porn-for-everybody

When I wanted to post my Cardmaker story on GA I rewrote the first six chapters and expanded them into twelve. I then kept writing, but have now hit a writer's block for various reasons. But I definitely think the rewrite improved the original story, and I'm glad @Kitt persuaded me to take up the task. However, my main reason for commenting on this topic is that I have a 20+ chapter story which was originally written for a Danish porn story site. The main character is a gay French pro cyclist who I follow from age 17 to 37. I'd love to rewrite this for a wider audience and I've translated the first few chapters. However, not only translating (which is never as smooth as writing from scratch) but also expanding the story with more content, so the sex becomes less of a focus, is such a daunting challenge, I have shelved the project. Maybe I'll take it up when I retire. So my question here is: Should I wait until I have the time to rewrite the complete story, or will working on it on and off over a long period of time be useful? Perhaps just writing down ideas about how to flesh out the story ?

Never mind It's tomorrow now.

Reading this again, I'm very surprised Adam and Andy didn't close their bedroom door. But maybe they don't know how often age 50+ men have to get up at night to pee. Looking forward to more.

Is that bat wearing a diaper ?! That's batshit crazy ! Good morning, nice and sunny here in Denmark.