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It's amazing what you can get up to without talking
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From spending 2 months in a residential hospice with my husband, I realized that hospice doesn't assist you to die, it helps you live as well as you can until you die. The positive role of hospice cannot be overstated. They are staffed with special people who I think are actually angels to help us. This chapter brings back some sad memories and tears but the love of the family is what pulls you through.
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Has anyone wondered about lube, condoms and birth control. I know it's not the stuff of corn fields and moonlight, but we did have to wake up to some pretty awful truths
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I find it so sad that an old white man can brag about groping a ladies body parts, yet 2 young men in love can't feel safe walking in public holding hands. Young love is a joy to see and you are building this story so beautifully. Happy to see that the boys don't have porn worthy sex right away because the insecurities and tentative explorations you portray are more realistic.
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The romantic in me is swooning. This chapter reflects what you do best, capturing the essence of the boys' feelings for each. In the last two chapters with the inclusion of Annie, I was afraid we had somehow lost Brian and Jeff as a couple but I am so happy that they spent some quiet time reinforcing their feelings for each other. Like Gary said I think I needed this chapter to get that reassurance. Looking into the future at that age can be very scary for a young couple but knowing how they are putting each other first will help them navigate the rest of the year. Sharing all the first times with each other is very special, especially sleeping together. Thanks Geron, you have made this romantic happy again.
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Beautifully written. It's been 2 years for me and I often wonder when I'll cry my last tears.
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Chapter 40 The Art of the Deal
Petey commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 40 The Art of the Deal
Interesting how Mother Earth is telling them the way to fight the malaise is to come together and work cooperatively while increasingly our political leaders are becoming more isolationist and divisive. We should be listening more to Mother Earth. We should make this story required reading for everyone. Loving the silent conversations that only we are privy to. Interesting how some of the married shifters will give up a relationship to find their earth mates. Lots of valuable lesson today. Wish there was a love button to press instead of only like. -
A bear named Paddy with a Scottish brogue, what's not to love. I've discovered a new love for bears. I think I'll go out and fetch one for myself, unless you have another one up your sleeve that's dying to meet a cute Dutchman!
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Chapter 15 - Out of the closet, into the fire
Petey commented on Avangelion's story chapter in Chapter 15 - Out of the closet, into the fire
I know in one of your replies you said there was no sex in the hotel but with all the vageness in the talk about that night there has to be something that happened (I KNOW I have trust issues lol) Unless that is 100% resolved Dom will always have this nagging little doubt which will become full blown at the next hint of trouble (like his rage with Tina). I have a strange little feeling (or am I just reading too much between the lines) that maybe Tamaki is harbouring some feelings for Dom, especially how he seems so protective of him. Waiting impatiently for the next chapter -
Don't apologize for the longer chapter, it was well worth it. It's good to see that the boys are developing a good relationship. They are both genuinely good kids and deserve happiness in spite of what crazy Cindy thinks
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Adding a third or fourth person to a relationship seems to be a favorite plot line since it has appeared in the last couple of your stories. It was certainly predictable as this story has started to unfold. While threesomes are not my thing and have never been - I guess I was too boring and always felt the person I was with was enough - it's not my story to tell. In real life it usually leads to someone being hurt so I hope that it is not the case here. You'll have to forgive me, I'm just a hopeless romantic
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Thanks for finishing this story. The hardest and most frustrating thing for a reader is to become invested in a story and then be left hanging when it remains unfinished. I really appreciate the effort you take in sharing your stories with us.
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Well, that's quite a start of your story. Now that I've got my breath back I'll go on to the next chapter. I'm definitely intrigued.
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Interesting observation about Mother Earth not wanting us to isolate ourselves from each other. Appropriate for the time we are living in. Is hearing their mates telepathic voices like when we have been with our mates long enough we finish each other's sentences lol? Again this has saved one of the boys. Mother earth is very wise in giving them this special gift. Nice to hear the playful bantering and sexual play between the boys, they deserve this special happiness.
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Two men in love and a dog - what can be more perfect The trip to the North Pole and the Beach might have to wait, it's so much more difficult to travel with a pup. Maybe some old fashioned nesting is in order for our boys. Warms the heart to see Emmett so possessive of his mate and Jian so freely expressing his love for his mate, the romantic in me is swooning lol
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Not sure that if I were a teen about to have sex for the first time with my boyfriend I'd be having a game of poker first On to the main event! I'm loving the setting of Cobourg. I lived there for 5 years in the late seventies. Had a house on Orange Street and then for a short time on Shirley St.
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Chapter 37 Many Happy Returns
Petey commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 37 Many Happy Returns
Sex is wonderful anytime, but when it is with someone you love it is truly spectacular. Hoping all the blessings from Mother Earth doesn't mean too much trouble ahead for our boys. Happy they have their special place to enjoy together. -
In this season of hope and renewal you have given us a beautiful Christmas gift of love. Thank you and wishing you all the best in this season and the new year to come.
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Very cute Christmas story, guess I'll have to start believing in Santa Claus again
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Thank you Sasha (as I reach for the nearest box of tissues). My heart felt that.
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And they lived happily ever after. Thank you for this lovely romantic story. Everything in life doesn't turn out so well but that is why I escape to read stories like this. It warms my heart !
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Awkward chapter Leo feels too much like a kind understanding father figure that caught Colt stealing a few cookies. What Colt and Jason did is being trivilized and swept under the carpet. Can't see them having sex so soon and with Jason in the house and aware of it to boot. To top it off for Colt to compare this with what he did with Jason, it should be tearing Leo to pieces. Stretching reality quite a bit, but as I said before fiction has it's own reality.
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Chapter 16 - All Because Of An Accident
Petey commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 16 - All Because Of An Accident
Not sure this qualifies as one of those up and down moments in a relationship. Once is experimenting, twice you're cheating. The only reason it stopped is they were caught. Not sure I could be calm about this in fact I would be furious. Don't know if I'd be allowing Jason to hang around while things were being sorted out. Either Leo is a saint or a fool. How right Leo is about Colt needing to grow up before they can decide about a long term relationship.I know I wouldn't be able to forgive Colt. however we know in the world of fiction forgiveness is always possible and they can still get their HEA.(hopefully please). On to the next chapter. -
I'm glad I stuck with the story. After a really great start it kind of went off the rails in a very big way. I'm seeing some of that good come back, though it still seems a bit rushed, like you are trying to cram too many things into each chapter. I'd wanted to see a bit more concentration on the resolution of each relationship. Nice that you have used Benny as a building block for Alex and Trace's relationship because who can resist the charms of a young chiid; they'll make a beautiful family. Want lots of details on the proposal (hope that Alex and Trace may need some pointers). Kind of hope that Callen will notice that Tracey is really happy again, they both deserve to have that in their lives again. Looking forward to the next chapter.
