I've written a couple of stories about non-binary characters, so I completely relate to the pronoun struggle. He/she is so ingrained in our daily use, that unless you know a non-binary person, it's difficult to get used to using the singular 'they'. My BFF has a non-binary child, and I find myself slipping in the pronoun usage occasionally. They understand it's not intentional. There's 22 years of binary thinking to get past.
It was hard reading about the mother's mental health struggle, but you showed how deeply it affected everyone around her. I had a similar situation in my own family (minus the non-binary part), so it really hit home for me. I wish Shay had been able to find a little bit of empathy for her, despite her treatment of them. But I completely understand what it's like to cut a toxic family member out of your life, mental illness notwithstanding. I had to do that myself, and while I love that family member dearly, having them out of my life is much better for me.
The father seemed to do the best he could in horrible situation. I liked the scene where he told Shay about their wedding and how the mother was before she became mentally ill. He's to be commended for sticking with her throughout everything.
I'm glad Shay and Griff reunited at the end. Thank you for participating in the anthology!