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Wonderful chapter! I always find it amazing that in many stories, a huge amount of money just happens to turn up to sweeten life. I'm still waiting for that to happen to me! And I've been waiting a long time! Tony F
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I just want to visit Casita Davenport for a short while...I'd even offer to do the cleaning just to take in the atmosphere! Great chapter, Carlos!
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Your excellence is showing once again, Gary! I love your writing. At first, I thought it was a bit creepy - almost stalking - until Trent explained how he "knew" Arnie. And he did! What a beautiful story. I do hope they appear in future writings. Kudos!!!
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Fun Time in Shower and Sauna
pvtguy commented on Tallguyct's story chapter in Fun Time in Shower and Sauna
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There are those who believe in voodoo, karma, whatever. Coincidence? Perhaps. Can we affect others by our emotions of hatred, hurt, anger, etc? If we can improve someone with love, why not the negative? Short story but it certainly raises a very important life question! Great job, Drew. Tony
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You've started another fascinating story! Great characters which evoke strong sentiments. Engaging plot. Love it! Tony F
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Nan was special. I would suggest "Nana", "Nunnie", "Gran"... Tony F
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Only one question (for now): Blu tells Sage, "Nan can help you with that....I thought she was dead. Unless Sage communicates with spirits, I am confused... Tony F
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Is This the Man I Want to Be?
pvtguy commented on Tallguyct's story chapter in Is This the Man I Want to Be?
I especially like that this story is about a mature man rather than a young twink who falls in "love" within 5 minutes, etc. Great start. -
A very informative chapter that has set up a new challenge. Thanks Eric.
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Great way to start the day! I am really enjoying the focus on Cesar and Brett! I wish I could enjoy the vacation they are experiencing! I couldn't afford the tax on the room rental, lol!
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Nick might just happen to tell Lisa he ran into Ethan at the club and leave it at that...The burden would be then placed on Lisa to decide what to do with that information.
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This is a wonderful portrayal of a dual-life that is only 75% truthful. I do believe Seb will be (or may already be) hurt (if Alan has discovered Seb by this time). I hope to see a follow-up to this story...
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I want to visit Makarovia! Wouldn't want to live there in the winter for sure, but a wonderful place to visit!
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Might there be more to what Nalbo gets in the end? I'm sure that the financial settlement might not be the final blow. Great chapter, Carlos!
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I get the feeling of "calm before the storm"... I could live with many more volumes to follow in this series! This family is both real and idealistic! Would that all families had this amount of love, fun, support for each other, and the ability to work together through challenges! Great work!
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A story of two people who have lived very different lives - brought together by a shady situation - surprised by a baby on the doorstep - who actually knew each other seven ears prior - but fall in love under the craziest of circumstances! A good read!
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Short and sweet but a good ending to this story.
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I'm still trying to figure out the timeline: I know you said not to pay too close attention to dates (especially concerning Kasey's age), but Jonathan is 8 or 9 years old - yet you mentioned that in the 10 years that Kyle and Blu have been together... oh well, minor detail in the overall scheme of things. I love this family more with each chapter! I see some major tongue lashing and actions being taken with the coach and the student(s) responsible for Levi's attack.
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When I saw that you had posted this newest addition to the series, I knew I needed to start from the beginning again. So - here I am at this chapter after reading the three previous volumes!. I absolutely love these stories. You have done a wonderful job in developing the plots and creating characters with whom we feel connected! We're off to a great start with this one!
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Chapter 137 If the Shoe Doesn't Fit
pvtguy commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 137 If the Shoe Doesn't Fit
With the only adult support Robbie has from Jo, it is no wonder that he lashes out so much at Don and Sue. He has never had full acceptance from them nor full expression of grief from the death of his mother and having to move to start a new life in a new country. He's been through some very traumatic experiences. While he brings on a lot of the negative he experiences through his temper tantrums, the family needs serious therapy! This is a particularly intense chapter. Great job, Dodger!- 40 comments
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This series is absolutely wonderfully well-written, full of every emotion one could imagine! The story is gripping: two men have taken in three homeless children, added a young boy with leukemia, and also gave home to a young boy who was abused by his father. Add to this the intrigue of a murder plot against them, extended but very close family who bring laughter and love, and a grandmother who is so full of life and mischief and love that brings more adventure to the family. It is a must read as are the two previous volumes in this series.
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I don't think Nalbo will know what hit him once Brett starts negotiations. I love that you're focusing on Brett and Cesar currently. This is a new stage in their life and it's exciting to see how that will turn out.
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What a great way to start my birthday month! Any story by Carlos would be welcome, but from the CJ universe is simply wonderful! Good start.
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It is interesting how people interpret experiences: The kiss happened and Jett reacted badly but April/Theo only felt the rejection and hatred expressed by Jett, not knowing the real reason Jett reacted as he did. And without any further discussion, he had no way to know Jett's real feelings. As Jett buried his feelings for many years, the truth only came out once Jett actually allowed himself to acknowledge feelings. Great story. I, too, was glad to see the TBC!
