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Chapter 14 - Starting Over
pvtguy commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 14 - Starting Over
NO!!!!!! Only 2 chapters? Is that so you can start posting a sequel? Please!?! -
Mason will be the way for Rhys to finally process Toby's death and his own life forward. You are developing quite the story!
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A lovely way to wake up on a Friday morning! You've incorporated serious as well as light-hearted topics in a short span. Very well done!
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For every action, there is an opposite and equal reaction. And Klaus found out his! Very enjoyable chapter!
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Chapter 14 - Starting Over
pvtguy commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 14 - Starting Over
Nash made a determination that does in one way seem rash, but actually was most necessary. He did need to take some time to be "Nash-single". Too bad he didn't talk with Penn, but I can't blame him. I think it was a perfectly natural reaction. And...it certainly added to the drama! Now...next chapter, please! Sooner is better!!! -
Perhaps dinner will allow both to reveal their true feelings.
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Thank you for reminding me I could "google" the answer - I just thought I might ask a human person.
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Just for my understanding: what's the difference between a solicitor and a barrister?
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Great chapter! Those texts had to be something else to make the lawyers cave! With their reputation, one would have thought they would have defended the texts. Glad that part seems to be over now.
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Ah...the intrigue! Leaving us with another "crisis"...but I believe it will all work out - maybe not as we think at the moment. That's what makes this a great story...now we have to wait another week in suspense, boo, hiss!
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Past Shapes the Future: Pt 2
pvtguy commented on R. Eric's story chapter in Past Shapes the Future: Pt 2
Couldn't have said it better myself. This story has been moving forward very well and this chapter is simply over drawn out and misplaced. -
Mike Is Introduced to 1950s Muscle Magazines
pvtguy commented on Tallguyct's story chapter in Mike Is Introduced to 1950s Muscle Magazines
As a retired educator, it's both a blessing and a curse as I catch myself reading and viewing a manuscript as I would an essay or paper turned in from my students. Did it for many years and actually do proofread for other authors. -
Mike Is Introduced to 1950s Muscle Magazines
pvtguy commented on Tallguyct's story chapter in Mike Is Introduced to 1950s Muscle Magazines
I like the pacing of the action in the story. Would like to correct one word, however: Mike who normally was obviously to home domestic decorations. I believe you meant to type "oblivious" and spellcheck changed it. -
I have a feeling Mr. Llarosa will be sweeping floors if he is so lucky. Great chapter! Can next Friday come sooner?
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Now on to some hard decisions: will they stay in Lincoln? How will the divorce be settled? Thanks for this chapter - it has brought together a lot of loose ends, but there's so much more to complete the story. Keep posting quickly, please!
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Well, there you go again: creating intrigue that makes us so eager for the next chapter! Great job! Please post sooner and more often!
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The Past Shapes The Future: Pt 1
pvtguy commented on R. Eric's story chapter in The Past Shapes The Future: Pt 1
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Chapter 5 - The New House is No Home
pvtguy commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 5 - The New House is No Home
I have waited until this chapter to comment as I wanted to see where the chinks in the armor were. Nash and Lee were too "perfect", but I never suspected Lee and Paul. Great job, Mrsgnomie, of creating that situation! I, too, agree that others, especially the Knotts, knew of the "complication". They didn't want to hurt Nash. The relationship with Penn is interesting - let's see where friendship leads. -
Those glossies would surely cause me to lose the job, lol! I prefer my fantasy vision of myself!
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So, they need a live-in housekeeper? They have someone in mind but haven't asked yet----I know it must be me! I'm ready to move, lol! I love how these men have such strong and humble values despite their wealth. The humor, values, and plot are truly remarkable. Thanks Carlos!! Tony F
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A young man takes the courageous step to start a life for himself, a step which is filled with both excitement and dread. It does end with one wanting to know what comes next, but that is not the point of the story: it is an encouragement to take that step even with trepidation to take charge of one's life.
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August 1991, One Day Later
pvtguy commented on Drew Payne's story chapter in August 1991, One Day Later
Having been raise in a strict Catholic family, I know the guilt that is felt here. It took me until my 40's to be able to be comfortable with myself and realize I didn't have to be "out" to all, but to myself. I no longer attend the Catholic Church though the core teachings of Christianity as taught by Jesus still are the bedrock of my own faith. They don't jive with the institutional church in all things, but I am very comfortable with my faith. -
Simon is gaining confidence slowly, but strongly. That he used his anger to confront Nadine was a positive step forward for him. I think we all see what's happening with him and Jeff and I hope the hour before the other arrive prove fruitful! Don't keep us waiting too long, please Drew! Tony
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It's not that Rosie doesn't support Simon, I believe. She has been brow beaten by Matthew as much as Simon has. It took a long time for her to stand up to him. With Niki, I believe she can learn how to be more supportive. After all, she is quick to reconsider when Niki explains things rationally. Great story!
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I'm surprised that Simon's dad is still paying for his phone though it is his only means of contacting him. He needs to talk to his mum and Niki about the phone situation!
