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This is a story of two men surrounded by people who truly love them. It takes a divorce and a misunderstanding to force them each to mature and grow into their own persons more strongly so that they can relate to one another as truly strong individuals. It is very well written, intelligent, and engaging.
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Chapter 21 - This Was My Life
pvtguy commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 21 - This Was My Life
I really enjoyed this story: you created mature individuals who still needed to grow up. The interplay of family - their support, their interference - was so real. And yet, the love they had for one another knew no bounds. Thank you for sharing such wonderful talent! Tony F- 57 comments
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What wonderful gathering of friends to celebrate the communion of love!
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So well written! I took a vicarious trip in that canoe! I felt the sun, the breeze, the nervousness... As for the story, I'm still thinking there's something not quite right, possibly nefarious, with Rita...
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And I am reading both! Plus, I had to read Keep me a an apple of your eye, which I had not done before, so that the current volume would make sense. Loved that one too!
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Rather than Story interuptus, I would say it is more like edging...
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How often will you be publishing chapters? As well done as your writing is, I'm sure daily would be great....lol!
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What an absolutely wonderful story of love, the positive role of true religion, and suggestions for listening to music which supplements each chapter. This is a great read!
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Chapter 20 - Do you love me, too?
pvtguy commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 20 - Do you love me, too?
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The preponderance of evidence at this point definitely would make it seem Ary is the killer. However, it is not beyond a shadow of doubt, and that is what makes me eager to read the next chapter - quickly!!! Great writing, Laura!
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Very well written chapter!
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Rita is a definite scammer: in that she has left other jobs and cities behind, the failure to pay Rick for his work portends something more nefarious, methinks!
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Will it be a further adventure with Penn and Nash, or are we at an end with the Knotts with the final chapter of the current story? I have really enjoyed this story and the characters you have created.
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Ok...I'll buy that --- but only if there's another book coming!
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Learning more about Mason helps us know his motivation. Perhaps he has been visited by ghosts before while not consciously recognizing those visits... Renzo might well offer some insight that has heretofore been missing, but one wonders why he has held onto that information for so long. Come on Tuesday!!!
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This chapter stands as moment into Rick's turbulent life: he gets a respite from the turmoil of his stresses, many of which are of his own making. It's time for him to stand up to his father: if he says "no" to his father, what is his father going to do? Return and take over the work of the company himself? Rick needs a friend for sure - a real friend.
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The Truth Will Set You Free
pvtguy commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Truth Will Set You Free
Dropping small breadcrumbs a little at a time...Each chapter just keeps us wanting more! Well done! I, too, am eager to see how all this works out. -
Chapter 18 - Where Penn Confronts Everyone
pvtguy commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 18 - Where Penn Confronts Everyone
And there we have it, finally - two adults communicating like adults - not perfectly, but honestly. Great chapter! -
Unfortunately, in my work in schools, I came across many kids who spouted the hateful speech of their parents and harbored the same prejudices. They do exist, believe me! It takes a lot of work to choose to live differently than with the hate-filled values that had surrounded them.
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The same might be said of those who choose to live a life in direct opposition to the life they experienced in their childhood: they choose to love rather than reject and judge. Love, after all, is a choice - not just an emotion!
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What an example he has set for his children! And thus, love begets love...
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And another small starting point, but with an ending in sight. I really hate to leave this story as it has been so heartwarming.
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A story like this is needed periodically to let us hope that this type of people exist. It is inspiring and warming. Thank you for sharing this!
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It’s All About The Money?
pvtguy commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in It’s All About The Money?
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I love stories like this: if only there were more Thomases in real life! There are homeless kids everywhere if one only looks.
